Starting from the Game Invasion, Achieving the Freedom of the Goddess

It's a standard anonymous show-off and a slap in the face. The protagonist always comes to the rescue of women in desperate moments. Without the protagonist, the team will fight among themselves. He is ridiculed wherever he goes. He cuts the grass but never removes the roots. There are indeed many poisonous points. I don't object to the harem, and I really like it, but hundreds of women who don't even have names are a bit much. Although I want to improve my strength, it's a bit uncomfortable.

The title design of the novel is good, it can be a full-length novel! The content of the novel is rich and colorful, and the storyline is also good and worth reading! The only flaw is that the process is omitted and the fun and entertainment of romance novels are missing. I understand everything. I hope there will be improvements in the future. Five-star praise [Like][Like][Like]

There are advantages. It fits the title of the book, and it fits the title. There are also many disadvantages. It always likes to cut the grass without eradicating the roots. If there is a grudge, it is not reported on the spot. It must be kept for a few days.

It's good-looking, I love reading it, it's quick to update, and it looks like a great god. I wish the author will become enlightened as soon as possible... By the way, we all love radish and pickles. Can't you accept all those with a score of over 80? One shot at a time, the aura flew up like crazy [smile][smile][smile]

The plot is quite good, not bloody or pretentious, it's worth following the book, and don't pull your hips later.

It's pretty good, the style I like. And there is a recent book shortage. I found this book last night and finished reading it at ten o'clock and four o'clock. It's a pity that the next system cannot comment. Please use another mobile phone to comment and support.

After reading Chapter 20, the background setting is the same as that of Global Killing. Although there is no nb there, I just came to see Liu Bei. The data may not be very good, and the potential promised by the Holy Artifact has never been given. But as long as you don't care about the data and focus on the plot, it doesn't matter.

I verified it today and secretly gave myself 5 stars. Finally I've written 200,000 words! First of all, I would like to thank the brothers who have been following the update! This book was blocked once when it reached 100,000 yuan. At that time, I was really disheartened. I just wanted to save a few chapters and publish them. It's the brothers who have been following the updates who gave me the motivation to keep writing! Then I would like to thank the readers who gave me encouragement and criticism. I read your comments very seriously and try to correct some poisonous points. Finally, let me tell you about myself. I have little writing experience and no outline. I just write whatever comes to mind. It really echoes the joke that I only know the plot half an hour before the reader. The original intention of writing this book was just to satisfy my own lust! However, it wasn't until readers started following this book that I started writing it seriously. But, to be honest, the more serious you are, the worse Kavin will get stuck! Sometimes I feel stuck and even want to pull my hair out! I know that this book has many bad points and shortcomings, and I hope everyone can help me point them out. If you have any suggestions or expectations for the next plot, you can tell me, and I will try my best to incorporate good settings and plot. Again, thank you! I will try to write the story completely, and try to write a million words [laugh][laugh][laugh] Thank you all! !

It's both poisonous and refreshing. I'd probably rate it at a 7 or at most an 8, not a 9, because it has too many small blocking points, just small blocking points, not big ones. If the author learns from his lesson, the next book might be pretty good. It still has some creativity.

Well, let me put it this way, this is a newbie author, and it's okay. It's a little different from other game articles. I wish the author can become a god soon. I'll support you with 5 stars. This is a book that I have been following for a long time. I really like it. Although there are many small flaws, the author is very obedient and will make changes every time I bring it up. Overall, it is quite attractive. The main theme is the harem and the struggle for hegemony among thousands of races, and the female protagonists have their own flavors... Come on!

It's very beautiful. Please update the author quickly [smile][smile][smile]

Game world, system harem upgrade, brush copy. Hundreds of tribes compete for hegemony, fighting against the Suzaku Empress and the male protagonist CP

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The writing is quite good, but too many details have been cut out, leaving not much room for association.

This book sets the tone. The previous one was too enjoyable. I'm looking forward to the next one.

I really liked it when I saw Chapter 7. The author works hard to update, five stars are given.

Great, great, great

It's okay, don't overflow with sympathy, let alone the Holy Mother, it should look better if you are more decisive in killing.

Didn't I say there were five people? Did you eat another one? Chen Baixia adds the protagonist Huang Si, okay, now another loli is added, Too many women and the team is unstable

Just enough to send it

Well written! Novel idea!

[Vomit] The risk of death is too serious. Even if you don't die, even a hundred million lives won't be enough.

You are awesome. Everyone responds so professionally. You deserve five stars.

It looks good, it looks good, come on, it's just a little short.

After reading it for more than 6 hours, I came back to evaluate it. I found it quite enjoyable, but more than 100 chapters are not enough for the author to update quickly. I will give it a while.

The worldview is relatively complete, the writing is okay, and there are no major poisonous points.

So far, there are no poisonous points, please keep it up! It is recommended that you wait and see again. Some of the plots written by the author are not very interesting. It does not seem that enjoyable, but it is a bit uncomfortable. After being criticized, I came back and revised it. It should be more enjoyable to read the revised version. I will not go back to read it a second time. I will check it out after a while!

There are no major poisons, but there are quite a few minor poisons, but the main reason is that there are too many attributes and it's a bit of a headache to read, but after all, I'm a new author, so it's better to be a little more tolerant.

Overall it's pretty good. It's worth recommending. You can feel free to dive in.

It's actually pretty good-looking, but it's a bit too long...! ! Thank you for your hard work, author.