This World****

The protagonist Shen Ling is very powerful, although I don't know why there are always scenes with male supporting actors like Shen Yu. It should be to act as a bodyguard for the protagonist Shen Ling. And he's a bitch, luckily he's not the male protagonist. That's right, a normal male protagonist wouldn't be able to read 10 chapters and appear in 1 chapter.

It's very interesting and real. I hope that the title will be more retro and not blocked anymore. I also hope that there will be more extraordinary plots. Although the author said that this is an urban novel with a shell of cultivating immortals, I still hope that the author will have more plots of cultivating immortals. I have clicked on the update reminder five times and watched the advertisement 12 times. The author is really too diligent. There are at least 3,456 pictures every day, which makes me feel comfortable. Come on!

This book is very complicated. Some people may not like it, and some people may like it very much. This book will not make me too addicted, nor will it be boring. Many Tomato books can be read as long as they are read, but they cannot be put down. This book allows me to put it down and then read it again. It felt good to read. Many book reviews criticized the intensity of cultivating immortals. This book is still urban-oriented. The protagonist is just a person with some special abilities, which is more attractive to me. Other urban cultivators quickly overwhelm others, but this one is more practical and less intense. The author's description of the story is also very good. It is loose at the beginning, but it will be tightened up slowly. Everyone is not useless. In general, don't be misled by the book reviews. Although there are many negative reviews, they just don't satisfy their appetite. If you like this book, you still have to really read it yourself. If you have already read the novel, don't worry about whether it is a waste of time, right? I really like this book. It makes me want to read it. Didn't the author say that his salary is very high? I hope the author won't stop writing because of poor data [crying]. There are still people who like to read it and support you.

The rating is low. It should be said that the author's writing style is sophisticated and the reading is very smooth; the rhythm is also good, and it is not procrastinating. Unlike some articles, I can't get into it all the time, which makes me anxious to death.

A very interesting, non-conventional novel with a lot of personality by urban major Xianfu. The character of the protagonist Jie Xiu is very stable and has not collapsed so far. For example, when his parents took the hero back and made a will to distribute the property, he did not rule out the suspicion of going back on his parents. The storyline is of a non-fast-paced type and can withstand scrutiny, such as the collusion between officials and businessmen in real estate. Personally like it.

I'll give it five stars first. The writing is quite good; it has the feel of an ancient online novel, the pace is slow to develop, and the setting is very good. This kind of realistic fairy tale, the protagonist cannot use abilities at will, and is afraid of the Public Security Bureau and constrained by modern society. However, the author likes multi-line narratives and changes perspectives very quickly. After reading the total 60 chapters, things happen neither too much nor too little, not too much is exciting, and the plot development is not very good, but it is a group portrait novel. Five stars are considered an encouragement to the author, and will be graded as appropriate later.

Work hard. It's rare to find a novel about urban cultivation that is very sane. Many others are written without IQ.

The several aspects the author covers are quite reasonable and interesting to read. The character creation is top-notch among urban immortal novels. There are no diodes or idiots. Most of them are normal people with love and hate (except for the protagonist). I personally prefer multi-perspective narratives because the timeline is pushed forward. It's a pretty good book, but the title is a little bit poisonous. In fact, the home page has been pushed several times. I only read it today. Maybe the title doesn't appeal to me?

It's hard to imagine that the author who wrote such cruel words is actually a woman. Come on, and also to remind you to update, it's best to be locked in a small dark room and update 50,000 words every day.

If there are six stars, then this book must be a six-star review! ! ! ! This is the book I can't put down the most among Tomato novels! There are no old-fashioned show-offs, no plots that are uncomfortable and want to be skipped (at first I didn't want to watch the business war, but later I realized that it is every thread of the plot, indispensable, and finally reaches the peak, it is a complete mess), and there is no fault at all in the logic! And it's my favorite type of urban cultivator! Perfect! ! ! The author Jun is really a great talent! Hurry up and update at full speed! ! !

It's very thoughtful, and although the plot is slow, it still has plenty of hooks for people to continue reading. It's one of the few good books on Tomato that's long-lasting. To be honest, the author has a very good control over the pace of this update. The three basic updates are very powerful, and they will leave a little introduction, which really makes people look forward to the subsequent chapters. At noon, they will add another one to satisfy the desire to read. I think this is indeed the best control among Tomatoes.

The content is close to reality but higher than reality, and the plot development conforms to the trend of normal events. It is a good novel

It's very well written. The author is very skillful and well-controlled in writing. In today's environment full of fast food articles, it's really hard to read this kind of article. The author seems to be a person with stories, but I still want to make some small suggestions. I don't know if the author can see it. In fact, the main content is a bit scattered. It would be better to gather it together. Also, the updates are too slow. Please update more. Really, don't force me to kneel down and beg you [face covering]

In addition to the incorrect content of the previous methods of cultivating immortals and some of the views, there is also the fact that Zhuang Lili was not happy to see her murder! Other content well written by the author! Point 2: The world of immortality is a world imagined by mortal authors from a mortal perspective! According to the jungle law of the mortal world! The weak eat the strong! →This is also the case in the world of cultivating immortals! This in itself is a huge mistake! What a huge fallacy! What a huge misunderstanding! If you want to become an immortal, a god, a Taoist, or a Buddha, you don't have to accumulate great deeds of good deeds over many lifetimes! Not getting the correct cultivation method! It's impossible to get super blessings! You will never become the Tao! You can't become a fairy, a god, a Buddha or a Bodhisattva! The theory of spiritual energy in immortality novels is fiction! It's a rumor! It's very harmful! Many authors and readers believe it! Entering the drama! Too deep into the drama! Taoist Laozi, Jigong, Lu Dongbin and other Eight Immortals, as well as Sakyamuni Buddha and the natural beauties of the Tang Dynasty who were recorded in official history, did not need the spiritual energy and thunder and lightning mentioned in the novels about cultivating immortals to achieve enlightenment. To become a Buddha, a Taoist, or an Immortal is to practice and have the intention to become a Taoist, and to accumulate great virtues and good deeds. Only after practicing for many lives can you become a Buddha, a Taoist, and an Immortal! Throughout the ages, there have been so few people who have become Buddhas, Bodhisattvas, Taoists, and immortals! The Eight Immortals such as Taoist Laozi and Jigong, Tang Dynasty Xie Tiannu and Lu Dongbin, as well as Sakyamuni Buddha, have practiced and accumulated virtues for many lives, performed good deeds, and eliminated all bad karma in previous lives! Get rid of greed, anger, ignorance, anger and lust! The Buddha who became a Buddha and the Dao who became an immortal just in this life! Point 4: You search for the book "The Legend of Buddha" in the novels on this platform! There are cultivation methods in it, and even the breathing methods are particular! You and I, mortals, must meet the above conditions if we want to become a great person!

This book also changed my understanding of women. In my inherent impression, I really didn't expect that a male TV series about cultivating immortality written by a female author could portray the protagonist as a current cultivator of immortality, breaking the perception of women watching TV series about cultivating immortality.

There's nothing exciting about it, it looks very bland, but it's still well written.

Yes, there aren't too many poisonous points. A good book will beat Tomato by at least 90%.

The writing style of the articles is very good, the characters are organized and grasped well, but there is one thing that does not meet my purpose of reading the book. This is not the author's or my problem, it's just that it's not suitable for me. In the final analysis, it seems to be my problem [exploration]. That's it, I wish the work will be a big hit, but I can't follow it anymore.

Not bad. There are many people or things in the content that violate public order and good customs. It is precisely because of these that it stimulates people's emotions and is very attractive. The writing is fluent, not cool, but the writing is okay.

Well written, I don't understand why the rating is so low

In a word, there are really not many books that I can rate. You can read them. Come on, the author. Also, try not to be too wordy, just focus, focus, focus, just write the key points.

Reading a novel? Don't be ridiculous. What I read is a bloody life. Some people may think that the overall logic of this book is not good. But if you break it down into small units and read it, you will find that this is reality, and reality does not require logic! I would like to say a sincere message to the new readers, keep reading, this is a bloody reality written under the guise of taking over the cover of Xiu Xian and Gong Dou, keep reading, open your eyes to see the world, and know what our reality is really like [crying]

I just read it and found that the logic of "City Cultivating Immortality" is not inconsistent with the logic. There are many other things that the author dares to write. Please read it and it will increase your knowledge.

As far as Gou Dao's low-key urban cultivation novel is concerned, it's okay. Although there are a few minor problems with the plot line in the early stages, the flaws do not outweigh the flaws! Unlike other novels, they are either pretentious or humanoid self-propelled cannons, and various possession talismans and other techniques are taught everywhere. Let's not talk about resources first, let's talk about the issue of immortality. . . .

I think this book has some negative points, but overall it gives me a good impression. The pace in the early stage is a bit slow and not suitable for serial reading. If you read them together, you will find that it is quite good. The story in the later period is more compact. It may be less than 9 points, but it should not only be 7 points. In urban literature, 8 and a half points are possible, so I will give it a perfect score and hope that the author will continue to work hard.

I don't know why everyone's rating for Fanfan is so low. I think it's the best novel about urban supernatural beings [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The story of the protagonist, the teacher, is very well written, comparable to Teacher Bai and Principal Gao [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The book is good, the author's writing style is very good, it is not fast food literature, there are some foreshadowings at the beginning, and later it may seem like a bitch thing to join a wealthy family, but the author's writing style and the description of various interests and the struggle of human nature are very good. The struggle level of the protagonist, supporting characters and NPCs are not naive or low-level. It is much better than some brainless novels. Come on, author!

Reality! I just like real and refreshing writing. If the refreshing article is not true, it will be fake, and it will not make you happy.

A thousand people have a thousand different thoughts. I think this book is really good. Nice