HP: Wormwood and Thunderbolt Wood

The author's performance is stable, and his main work is particularly good. However, the relationship progresses too fast. The two people have already started to be ambiguous after only 50 chapters. I feel that there is no need to write later. There are many fan fiction authors who have no need to write later, so they start to make up the protagonist to be reborn or lose all power, or write daily accounts. In short, I hope the author can be stable and don't forcefully write in order to make up the word count. The editor 🤧 makes the plot look good even when there are conflicts, and maintains the character of the protagonist. The overall updated 50 chapters are worth reading, but I feel that it may be difficult for the author to edit later. If it progresses at this speed, it is estimated that 100 chapters will be able to complete the original plot. If the author's level is average, it will basically be a boring account.

Oops, I don't even know how to comment at the moment. But what I want to say is that this is a super super super super super awesome book. I rarely see episodes related to HP on Tomato that don't drag on. The character design is not OOC, but the writing is online. The plot passes. Even the protagonists are both online. It's really great. I have basically read all the books about Sri Lankan religion on Tomato, but most of them are extremely poorly written, and some have great settings, but their writing skills are not up to par. There are very few articles that are as up to standard as this one written by the author, and are even excellent in all aspects. At present, only two articles have been found that are comparable to it. The author was a surprise to me. The author is great. Love you so much!

It's really good to read, the plot is very smooth and natural, the author's language expressions are very nice, I hope you will continue to update, and don't stop updating. Of course, it would be good if you can update more [Thinking][Please update]

It's super good-looking, friendly to lions and snakes, a very ideal story, the cp is very good, and the author's writing also saved my eyes among the primary school students' writing of 🍅hp fanfiction. Please keep up the good work, author💪💪

It's so beautiful, so sweet. I've also read other fanfics about the setting of this book. I have to say that this setting is perfect for me. With West's identity, after the fusion, I feel that everything behind it becomes clear, regardless of strength or age. This makes me feel that West is more attractive and always determined. On Si Jiao's side, it's hard not to like Si Jiao. After reading this book, if I want to think of a hp fanfic setting, it must be the author of this book. It is difficult for other novels to write the kind of setting that is close to my heart. Therefore, the author is really great. I love you, love you, love you [love] [love] [love] Although the process of defeating Lao Fu later was very fast and not very careful, the combined strength and the curse made it feel inexplicably reasonable, so the author could do it again [shy][shy][shy][shy], or throw me a bunch of extras [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

The fried chicken looks great! There is almost no OOC, the love and career lines go hand in hand, and the deputy CP is also very good! Part of the plot is a group portrait, everyone has their own personal charm, I love it so much! ! !

The plot never drags on! CP Si teaches, Hard, delicious and loves to eat ✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎ The writing style is good and the content is not blurry. It belongs to the kind of plot that accounts for more than the content of the original work. I have read several books that are written little by little according to the original line. You can read this to change your mind. Severus is loved well😭. The protagonist is very strong and not aggrieved at all. Our little Harry has become a lot more cheerful after having a brother. This is the purpose of reading fanfics ~ a small sweet article ~ There are not too many heavy plots ('▽') but it makes me feel comfortable reading. Finished the second brush, super recommended, five stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐!

It's very interesting and well written. The male protagonist was unintentionally attracted to Sri Lanka in the early stage. After recovering his memory, he expressed his love for Sri Lanka. He has always firmly chosen Sri Lanka. Now everything is sweet and sweet. Moreover, the male protagonist is very strong. Lao Fu and other things are not a big deal. I look forward to the follow-up development.

Overall this book is pretty good, but the shortcomings are: ①Is the love line developing too fast? I prefer slow-heated food, so this can be ignored. ② As for the character creation of Sri Lanka, some places may feel a bit OOC, but the author's literary talent can make up for this. The "When will you come to love me" section is very good. 😋 ③This can be regarded as a personal regret of mine. The author did not describe too much about West's relationship with Sri Lanka's teacher when he was a student. The writing is really good. The writing during this period is very delicious. 😋😋😋I love reading and writing more. Also, there's a long side story that was promised😭

Girl, this book is really great. Except for the fast pace, the main character and Harry are twins, and they are cursed by the Dark Lord. They skipped the second grade and reached the third grade. They are still updating it. They are very diligent and update it once a day (please be content, dear, at least the update is not interrupted). It also includes Harder. Be careful not to stand on the wrong side.

Two male protagonists, the protagonist is an original character, CP Snape. Main CP: West Potter x Severus Snape Deputy CP: Harry Potter x Draco Malfoy Twin brothers West Potter and Harry Potter were admitted to Hogwarts together, one was sorted into the Snake House and the other was sorted into the Lion House. Because of his resemblance to his mother (not stand-in literature!), West gets a little attention from the Potions Professor, and he wants to monopolize this attention to protect the one he loves. The ultimate protection of shortcomings, the ultimate preference

The characters are not OOC and the emotional lines are smooth. West's black sesame glutinous rice balls, the black belly can defeat Tsaojiao, the straight ball can defeat Tsaojiao, and the natural can defeat Tsaojiao. Support West's black belly and naturally hit the straight ball to win the game.

It's very, very good-looking. Si Jiao really sticks to the original work and is not OOC at all. I just like West's blatant preference [sending my heart]

It's super good. I rarely write book reviews, but this one is really good. The emotional line is very smooth. The male protagonist is also the only one who loves Si Jiao. Although Si Jiao is slow to become popular, the two of them can be regarded as two-way redemption. My favorite CP Hader and ggad are also mentioned. The extra chapter is also sweet and reassuring. Si Jiao's cold face makes people soft-hearted. Anyway, it is super super good-looking. The writing is also very good. Sometimes I can't help but burst into tears. Happy 99 young lovers, I love you! Ss wants to be happy all the time

I really like this fanfic! ! ! I really like Sri Lanka! ! ! Sijiao should be pampered! ! Sri Lanka must be happy! ! And I'm also very stubborn, so this article is really not surprising to me. I highly recommend everyone to read it! [Adoration][Adoration]

It's super beautiful and looks so sweet. They're just a couple.

The overall reading is pretty good, some places are a little exaggerated, and then I feel that Si Jiao was pursued in the later period and it was a bit ooc, not quite like him, I feel myself, I feel, I feel, this article is one of the few that I can finish reading, the length, content, etc. Are generally good, worth reading (o^-^o)📖

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmaghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhinginging meing me three times, but then I realized that I had only rated the rating before and not written any comments. It's a super nice novel. The author's writing is very good, and the author's deputy CP, Hard, and ggad are completely in line with my preferences. This novel has no surprises and I am extremely satisfied, especially the famous ball scene of the Triwizard Tournament. West and Sif danced, and Hard also danced. Ahhhh, it is my favorite and most anticipated scene. The author is also great. There is nothing sad about this novel, it is very sweet. West is hitting the ball straight. Although Seaver refused in the early stage, he is really condoning it silently. Who knows, I like it so much [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

Very good, original Harry twin brother, with a complicated background, cutting melons and vegetables to destroy old people. It's rare to see that the old Potters are all 1 [Thinking] Not very friendly to dogs and wolves, but it's okay. There are no major casualties of the original characters after the 1st grade.

This is one of the best articles I have read in recent months. Thank you to the author for writing such a beautiful story. Everyone got the ending they deserve. Thank you West and Silver. I am so happy after reading this! The author's writing style is very good. If we objectively evaluate the rhythm of the entire story, it is just above average, but it is considered top-notch on Tomato. This is really an excellent fanfic, because you can feel the love and respect for the characters from the author's words. This is the most critical and fundamental part of the fanfic. And we readers who come because of Sif are the same. We and the author have the same heart, so we can recognize each other in the vast sea of ​​electronic screens. Sif deserves all the favor and happiness! Wei Xi, please stay together forever!

It's super good. I want to read the chapter where the protagonist eats meat [Adoration]

Good looking, fast paced but sweet. In fact, in the first grade, it was still a relatively normal Snape cp story, with the usual routine of professor and apprentice. But in the second grade, West suddenly grew up and advanced to the point where he became an adult and pursued love. Haha, it's quite a magical design. It's a good story, Voldemort was solved, and because West is Harry's brother, Snape and others are no longer so tit-for-tat, and Harry also has a happy childhood and campus life. Although Venvist did not tell Snape about accompanying Snape as a soul in his previous life, he still hoped that they would be honest about it one day in the future. I like this development, although it is a happy ending, many regrets are truly reconciled.

It's good to read. I love reading it. I hope the author will update 200 chapters a day. Hehe

It really pokes me, every pair of CPs I bump into is written about, it's super cool.

The emotional line is fast, and Sisi's character will have some ideas OOC at very rare times. But the above does not affect the reading. It is a very enjoyable book. The protagonist is never sloppy in solving problems. He feels like he is doing it as soon as he opens his eyes. When facing Sisi, he will automatically be full of idiot attributes. He is very loving in the character description. It's a book worth reading!

I think I have read a lot of novels, and I feel that this one is definitely the best among the many novels I have read. It suits my taste very well. The protagonist is just playing straight, without too many twists and turns, and the plot is not too long. I feel that this is just right, and I also like the deputy CP. I feel that the emotional line is more natural, and I quite like this type of writing [Note]

Finished watching it, I enjoyed it very much! ! ! Who knows? It feels like almost none of the characters are OOC, and no character is deliberately blackmailed. The writing is also very good, the plot is very smooth, and it does not completely follow the general plot of the original work. It's relatively innovative

A very nice book! The author's writing style was very comfortable to me😌The main character was very open-minded, so he basically killed the Dark Lord without even using a knife. The emotional scenes are very cute, it would be nice if there were more... Looking forward to the delicious extras 🥹

I've finished reading it, watch it, watch it, watch it! After saying important things three times, I felt that the professor needed a strong and gentle partner. He had lived a very hard life and needed someone who could help him remove obstacles, protect him, and love him. And West is like that. He is really good-looking! Very sweet! Recommended

It's really good. I've read it for 24 years and still haven't received any reviews🙈. I read it twice before. Suddenly I came across this book during the summer vacation, and then I wanted to read it again. It's really super good, and now I've read it three times😏. When I read it, there weren't many reviews. As a result, two years later, it has scored 9.1🤔Invincible is so sweet😘 It took me 36 hours😳This is the longest time I've ever read a book🌝🌚I can't do it anymore, actually I read it in 25 years, it's too dark😱😱😱I thought I read it in 24 years, my mind is a little unclear😂😂😂