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I came from Xiaohongshu. From the character dialogue in the early part of the novel, I can guess that the author should be very young. I didn't expect that he is indeed young. It is excellent to be able to write like this. However, I feel that the dialogue of the characters in the early stage could be written better. I hope that the author will perform better and write better works in the future. What attracted me was the sentence "brother", which reminded me of Sanlang Huahua. This really had a huge appeal to me, and I wanted to continue reading. I actually quite like the character of the protagonist, and the plot is logical and coherent. The only thing that makes me feel a little awkward is the dialogue of the previous character. Ignoring this, this is a good novel. Finally, when I reached the end, I realized it was an unfinished article, and I burst into tears.

The writing is quite delicate, and the story rhythm is also good. It feels like a supernatural suspense fairy tale. Hahahaha. I prefer slow-paced romance books. There are so few books like this in Tomato. If you follow me, the author will update it soon [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Well, I wanted to post a long review, so I deleted the previous book review and reposted it. Seeing it now, after chasing it for several months, I can only say that it is awesome... Every subsequent case file is awesome, even better than a fat cow(?). My favorite is The Twins Appearing as Ghosts in Costumes, it made me cry, and The Broken Temple. When the rain fell at the end, I already got goosebumps. Persimmon handles every character very well, not only the protagonist, but also the subtle changes in the character of the master in the previous life, as well as the change in his attitude towards Gu Chengyuan, are handled very delicately, which is super easy to understand. The other supporting characters are also written very well. I have a feeling that Xiao Chengsi will be very sad in the future, and Persimmon writes her very casually, you know, uncle said, and then the characters are promoted to make each story happen naturally... And then give you a hard blow, that Rouge, I really, it is a stroke of genius! Every character is super good, including the grumpy old man but soft-spoken Shen Mo Shi, the gentle, powerful and stable child slave Qin Xianglan, the lively, gentle and cheerful elder sister and mother-control Qin Wanxi, and the poisonous-tongued, calm and impulsive sister-control Shen Zenan. Of course, there's also our little cute Su Chiyan! Woohoo, I really want to see Su Chiyan! But there seems to be no role for him in the previous life. Including there are many supporting roles, such as the heroic Qiu Li and Bai Youwei's fan Luo Wanyue, I can't even mention them all. The author's writing skills are terrifying, and the foreshadowings are all gray and snake-like. It looks very cool to be able to match everything. The writing style is also very good, smooth and elegant. It is really worth reading! But I also know that it's difficult to write articles like this on Tomato. After all, few people here can calm down and read articles. But Boss Persimmon, I will always support you! Come on, feel free to write! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It was a little green at the beginning, but I found that the writing got better as I went on. Come on! After reading the comment section, I realized that the first one is great. The main character interactions are also interesting. Very cp feeling. It's fun to call me brother [laughs]

Persimmon, I have read all the chapters you have written so far. Your writing style has an aura and a very unique feel. I originally thought that I would never be able to read any novels, but boss, your writing is so cute. . Last night, I planned to read one chapter before going to bed, but I ended up reading ten chapters. Until my phone ran out of battery and there was no signal on the train, I turned on airplane mode to read your article (laughing). The characters you write have their own thoughts, there are no conventional routines, and they don't torture for the sake of torture, but just let nature take its course. In this article, each supporting character can have his or her own story line, such as the Xia family brother and sister (who is so unhappy). When I read it, I just wanted to put the fake Jin Tong into a cannon and let him fly. Now I think it is because you wrote him so vividly, like a living person, which made me feel his badness. Moreover, a person is multi-faceted. Bai You looks selfless and cold, but you can see from all the details that he is very cute. What impressed me the most was the part where I turned into a small animal. I'm short of words and it was so cute (thumbs up). The author has written many operas, but I didn't understand much of it. I searched the meaning one by one and pieced it together. The scene of the opera can no longer be described as shocking (but I am short of words). All in all, Persimmon, don't be tired and don't rest. As long as you write, I'll be there for you. [Pout] Come on, come on, come on, come on.

Unfortunately, I am uneducated and don't know how to write a high-quality book review, but my feeling is that it is good and worth reading.

I can't find any other good-looking ones. I can only say that it has given me a strong attraction after seeing it. I hope it won't stretch my hips in the future.

I like this type of writing. The plot of this book is not cliché, and the content is also very detailed and beautiful.

The language is vivid and interesting, the story plot is ups and downs without being abrupt, and the personality is vivid. It is a great book!

I've struck gold. I finally found the ancient style of writing. I'm really tired of the fast pace now.

Very good, a very clear book. The author's writing style is also very good. The case is also very fascinating

It's a very good book. I just wanted to see how long I've been reading it. It's not that long, so I'll keep reading.

This is my first book review. It's so good. I can only read this sentence. It's really good. I must read it to the end in one go.

It's quite good-looking. I didn't take it seriously at first, thinking it was just a boast from the bookstore, but I didn't expect it to be really good.

The writing is quite good, especially the characters, clear thinking, and vivid descriptions of human nature. The more I read, the more I want to read back.

This is the longest book I have followed since I downloaded Tomato. Both the logic and the character creation can be said to be quite good.

It's so good. I really like the characters. I haven't seen much of it now, but... I'll update it soon! ! ! It's so powerful. It's the first Tomato novel I've read. The writing is also very good! ! Come on, Persimmon qwq! ! !

Not bad! It's rare to find one that I can read, and this one is really good.

I have to say that this book is really good and it's hard not to love it.

This is my first time to write a review. This book is really good-looking and different from other books.

It's great, the writing is good, the logic is clear, and it fills in the gaps. The characters really poked me.

It's okay, the logic is normal, the plot is reasonable, and the content is quite exciting.

The writing is very good, and every character is very vivid, full of perfection, and also difficult to resolve.

The plot and characters in this book are all top-notch. It is worth reading and has a strong sense of immersion.

It is a good-looking novel, with plots that follow each other and perfect characters.

It's really good-looking. I can only say that the author is great. Many plots are beyond the imagination of ordinary people.

The writing is beautiful, and I feel deeply after reading it for so long.

The content of this book is the type that I like very much, and it is very attractive.

I didn't expect it to be so beautiful. It's really a masterpiece.

Very interesting. I have never read a book like this before. It is very well written.