Ladybug Reddy's Daily Life

I haven't watched Ladybug Girls much, but I support it. A few small suggestions. When writing, try to switch to the next line after three or four sentences. The same goes for dialogue. Dialogue should be on its own line, so that it can be read more concisely. Try not to write the description and dialogue together. For example, the protagonist is talking to Master Fu. "Master Fu, I have a question." Ye Xingchen walked up to Master Fu and got straight to the point. "Did you choose them? Or was it the choice of fantasy energy?" Upon hearing this, Master Fu's heart trembled, a sense of crisis emerged in his heart, and he looked at the visitor with a wary expression. "Who are you? How do you know about fantasy energy?" As he spoke, Master Fu quietly put a hand into his pocket and whispered to Wei Zi. He would immediately transform as soon as the person in front of him made any movement. "Don't be nervous, Master Fu. I don't mean any harm." Feeling the magical energy in Master Fu's pocket, Ye Xingchen quickly waved his hand to show that he meant no harm and called out Bao Guang. "Baoguang, come out." As soon as he finished speaking, an elf came out of Ye Xingchen's jacket pocket. "Long time no see, Master Fu, Wei Zi." Seeing the familiar figure appear, Master Fu, who was very alert just now, instantly stayed where he was. "You... Are you Baoguang? Didn't you disappear with the other elves?" Master Fu's eyes widened, his face full of shock and disbelief. "Master Fu, have you forgotten what I represent?" It's more comfortable to write like this. In addition, the protagonist's mother and Marina's mother are best friends, and the protagonist is one year older than Marina, which is equivalent to the protagonist being Marina's brother. It would be better if the protagonist could be written to help Marina eliminate the fear of being bullied in school. I haven't read much of the original work but only watched it through short videos. It was okay at first, but when I saw that Malina didn't dare to respond to Ai Jun after being bullied at school, I felt a little sorry for Malina. Come on!

Give myself a five-star rating [cool]

It looks good, but updates are a bit slow, and when will the heroine be released?

This is very nice, it must get five stars.

It's so sweet, and it gets sweeter and sweeter later on, so sweet, so sweet [face covering] [OK]

Hope you can stick to it

Come on come on come on.

Come on, this book is well written.

Not bad, cheers for the author

Looks good, looks good, looks good.

Come on, come on, come on,

I also want to travel here

Beautiful, very beautiful

It's okay, just hit CP and that's it.

One of the few ladybug fanfics