Xuan'an of Red Mansion

Now that I have read Chapter 96, I can only say that this commercial tax is too idealistic. In the past, big businessmen had people above them. In the absence of a protagonist, taxation only puts pressure on end consumers instead of businessmen. Without price coordination and management, many people will die if this is implemented. With the protagonist, the situation will probably be better, but not that much better, because the protagonist cannot search for souls all day long. Everything else is well written, but this part feels too rushed. The current progress is Chapter 116. Although it is nonsense, it is very refreshing [laughing] To be honest, the Jia family can be regarded as reborn from the ashes now. After those dirty things are dealt with, they can still live well with their land and property, and they can even live better without the greed of their servants. With the protection of the protagonist, no one dares to touch them even if they don't have a title, at least they get rid of the completely white ending.

It's quite interesting. I suggest that the plot of Daiyu and Xuan'an's relationship be written more delicately. Daiyu is no longer dependent on others as in the original work. It is best to show her talent and aura (naughty is okay). Xuan'an is a cultivator who combs Daiyu's meridians. Also, don't design it to collect all the gold hairpins, that would be too vulgar.

The author is so talented! Nice!

I have watched several Dream of Red Mansions movies, and this one is right for my taste. Sister Lin survived. Nice

Very good article

Not bad! Good writing

The pace is pretty good and the writing is okay.

It's beautiful, come on, duck

A very good book

Good, good, good, good👌🏻

Jump to chapter 188 waning interest Please keep up the good work

Good, good, come on, come on, come on, come on

Finishing writing Red Mansions is equivalent to being finished.

Good,

It seems pretty good so far, I hope I can keep it up in the future, keep going [laughs]

Why are you looking at Chengwenwen?

It's very good, but it's too short. Can't you, the author?

It looks good, but the writing is a bit laggy

It feels very good to read, and it is not written based on the main plot of Dream of Red Mansions. Cut from the side, it feels good and novel

Okay, I've read a lot of fanfics, and they're pretty average.

It's so beautiful. I checked in at the end. I thought I was going to the small world to develop, but I didn't expect it to be the finale.

The article is novel, so you might as well read it if you are short of books.

A different red building, not bad