One Spiritual Stone Per Second, I Will Be a Big Boss in the World of Cultivation

It looks good, but there are some imitations, and there are also loopholes and shortcomings. I prefer the setting of the protagonist, who is dull and clever. Updates, updates, not enough. There will definitely be negative reviews, and there will definitely be people looking for faults, mainly for those who like to watch it.

Overall, it's pretty good. The writing is still enjoyable, but some specific details could be polished. I gave five stars because, although this book has some poisonous points, it has a pretty good advantage: it is fast-paced and not too poisonous. Of course, I only give it 5 stars if it's not poisonous. If it's good, it can barely get 4 stars. The cool writing is pretty good.

It's very interesting. The author will hurry up and update it. Don't let it be unfinished! Since I didn't have a salary, I bought a power generator for love first. Once the salary is opened, it will be greatly improved.

The side tasks are clear and the content is not verbose. The main plot is also okay. I recommend reading it.

The fights in Jindan period are just like ordinary street gangsters, fighting each other in an unstructured manner, hahahahahaha, very innovative. The protagonist is crazy about dying when he has no strength. He exposes his wealth and offends people. He specializes in provoking people with some strength, and then lives by the protagonist's aura [face covering] to make the most of the protagonist's aura. I read more than 200 chapters, which is quite interesting. It's much smoother than what I wrote before, and I can't feel the inconsistency anymore.

It's quite good. I actually get tired of reading so many cool articles. But even if this book has a system, it's not that cool, but it's not the kind of book that no one can beat. The plot is also okay and the ideas are pretty good. This book is good, recommended

It's very beautiful. I stayed up all night for several days and finally caught up on the latest version. I highly recommend it. Although I don't know why the rating is so low, maybe it's because it wasn't very enjoyable in the early stages, but it was quite enjoyable after watching it! ! !

Not bad, and after more than 800 chapters, it is still written very carefully. At least this is the first online novel that I have listened to in one sitting in almost ten years. I listened to it for almost ten hours a day for a week. The last time was fighting against Po and Devouring the Starry Sky. Generally speaking, online articles lose their meaning after a few hundred verses. I saw that the author has good experience, even an uncle like me would be attracted to it. It's been many years, and the ending is good. In fact, I can ascend to the divine world again, which is not bad. Write a comment, encourage the author, come on. You can create a cosmic world. However, none of the multiple female protagonists allow the protagonist to have multiple emotional entanglements. This is a double-edged sword. It is not good or bad, but the audience is different. It's pretty good, just be cool and cool and that's it.

It's a good-looking, martial arts novel with the title of cultivating immortals. It's worth owning.

After reading it for more than 50 hours in a week, I felt sad and sad when I closed the book. The author's language skills are not bad, and he comes up with humorous sentences from time to time. His writing is layered, and the more you read, the more you read. Especially Immortal World was written very well before. After writing the fairyland, the plot speed obviously accelerated, leaving a lot of regrets, and laying a lot of foreshadowing, but it could not be concluded. The final destinations of Yun Man, Lin Shimeng, Ling Ruoxue and others were also unclear, and none of them had a complete ending. Moreover, the emotional lines in the book are too few and too thin. Whether it is the bond between master and apprentice, or the emotions between the characters, they are all touched on, and there is almost no delicate emotional portrayal. The plot structure and detail polishing can be regarded as a high-quality cultivation novel. Unfortunately, the ending is rushed and leaves too much blank space. The foreshadowing is discarded, the ending of the characters is unresolved, and the emotional drama is seriously lacking. After being fully immersed, only full of sadness and sadness are left. [Grievance] But after all, the author left it blank, and the 3,000 disciples flew out of that small world. I hope that the author will suddenly be quick-thinking and burst out with inspiration one day in the future to complete the future plot of the God Realm. [Make faces]

It's good-looking, very good-looking, refreshing and not brainless. It gets better and better as you go to the back.

Fine. I have read more than 30 chapters, and there is nothing sinister about it, and the story flows smoothly. However, for people who often read fairy tales, this beginning is still relatively ordinary. Whether it is the character's personality or the story, there are no very distinctive characteristics. It is suitable for readers who have not seen similar themes before, so it is easier to find freshness.

The novel is unique in conception and fascinating. It must be praised with five stars. On behalf of the 47-year-old hard-working king, come and read the masterpiece! (His works include "I am 18 years old, the peace elite has become a god", "The founding emperor transformed into an abandoned prince", etc.)

The structure is very clear, and the human world is also very good. I feel that the author is from within the system [laughs]

The writing and plot are both good. Cultivation of immortality is like scientific research, and results will be produced if there are funds. Isn't there no way of heaven and disaster?

It is a good book with a clear structure and deserves praise.

The novel is well written, with novel ideas, fluent language, and clear layers. The plot has ups and downs and is fascinating. Praise

It's not bad, it looks funny but it's fun

What I wrote in Tomato is pretty good. It's a bit verbose in the early stages, but the rhythm is okay later on, and it's a bit counter-routine. Whether it's enjoyable or not depends on how you interpret it. If you really want to watch the whole thing enjoy, it's better to read Invincible. As for the poisonous points, I can accept it. After all, it's a light-hearted novel, not a serious history, and the author is quite interesting.

It's pretty good, the only drawback is that it's not finished

The story is so well told, with ups and downs, intriguing, and the man is very domineering. You must watch it.

This is the most reasonable and good-looking novel about cultivating immortals that I have seen. I will give it a five-star rating.

It was so beautiful. The author wrote it with great care. I read it for four days and five nights! Dear author. Quick update!

It's beautiful. It's very beautiful. I hope it will become more and more exciting in the future. I hope the fairy world will be even better in the future.

Good looking! Not sloppy at all, the plot is really good

It was quite enjoyable to read, but there were too few chapters. I had to wait too long to read it, so I lost interest in reading it.

Haha, the beginning of the story is quite fascinating. I don't know what will happen next. I'm looking forward to it.

In fact, the writing of this book is quite good, and it can be seen that it was written with some experience. Although there are many similar works, this one is still quite interesting to read.

It's so good. I haven't stayed up late to read a novel in a long time.

It's a very good novel. I'm an old bookworm. There are few novels that make me stay up late and watch it so seriously. It must be five stars.