A Passerby's Fantasy Journey Through the Cultivation World

It was well written, but it ended too suddenly!!

It's okay. My problem is that I can't help but notice that there are a lot of exclamation points. There will be two or three in four to five sentences❗I always feel like the protagonist is surprised 🤦

Red and fiery, in a trance

Update soon. I have been practicing Qi. When will Yuanying become a god?

Finished reading Chapter 2. Reminds me of Zhang Wuji.

Looks good, but a little lacking

The passerby A mentioned above is practicing too quickly. He can practice the third level of Qi in a month or a few days. Marked. 11111