[Apocalypse] She Was Once an Abandoned Child

If the level of the first 68 chapters can be maintained, it will definitely be a masterpiece. It is so beautiful. The various superpowers and mutually restraining skills can stir up small climaxes. There are single and dual systems, and there may not be bad players in three systems. This world view is grand, and the heroine's attack and support paths will become wider and wider.

I think it looks good, but the negative comments in the comment section made me feel angry. From the beginning to now, I can't find any big faults. The pace is very tight. The heroine's character can be seen as someone who dares to love or hate. She is sincere but not a virgin. I think it is normal for her to have a teasing mentality from time to time. (Because I am the same way. I have bad taste but it does not affect me as a strict and quiet person.) As for the love line, I don't feel much, or even feel it is a bit sparse and a bit vague. Maybe it's because the budding feelings are not obvious at first. I hope you can give me more love lines later|ω)

What I wrote above is great, but Base 7 collapsed from the beginning. As the author's first work, it is quite brilliant. I don't write bad words about evil people. Although I can't stand it anymore, I still hope to have the opportunity to read the author's new works again. The next time I can accumulate experience and be more exciting. [Punch out][Punch out]

I read this book in one sitting, and it was really eye-catching among the clichés everywhere! The plot is not templated at all, especially the apocalyptic superpower setting - not a simple elemental system (those of gold, wood, water, fire, earth), but an innovative and complex unique mechanism, full of novelty! The heroine's IQ is online throughout the whole process, she is calm and rational, decisive in killing, and is completely independent and self-reliant. Judging from the introduction, it still focuses on the career line + teammates' single arrow setting. The protagonist controls ecstasy [admiration]! Several times during the reading process, I was so excited that I wanted to discuss it with my peers, but I found that the direction of the comment section was completely different from what I thought... After reading it despite my curiosity and doubts, I became even more convinced of my judgment: I almost missed such a wonderful book, but fortunately I didn't give up! ——The following contains spoilers, please proceed with caution After carefully reading this book, I would also like to share my opinion: Temporary hibernation is necessary. This is not to feel aggrieved, but to pave the way for subsequent outbreaks. 1. From the perspective of the heroine's ability, if other people's abilities grow linearly, then her growth is an exponential leap, with potential far exceeding that of ordinary people, not to mention the possibility of awakening a second ability. In the later period, she is destined to be an all-round character, and her short period of weakness is just a need for the plot. 2. From the perspective of character design, Chu Xu's character is overly cautious and conservative, and his past life experience also proves that this character will pay a price. The setting of "the flower of the high mountain falls from the altar" actually increases the dramatic tension. The heroine's mental abilities (such as sensing emotions and influencing others) can easily cause fear. This setting actually makes the story more conflicting. 3. In terms of plot design, the counterattack after the trough is more layered than a mindless novel. Tomato has no shortage of pure and refreshing writing, but this kind of relaxed and relaxed writing style with recycled foreshadowing is rare and worth cherishing. 4. Regarding the management issues at Base 7, I think it is very true. In the context of the apocalypse, resources are scarce, rules are broken, coupled with Chu Xu's physical weakness and the family's tolerant policy, resulting in low organizational efficiency and frequent loopholes - this in turn gives the heroine an opportunity to rise rapidly. If the base is monolithic, how can she, a "dangerous element" who joined halfway and whose background is a mystery, reach the core in a short period of time? 5. Troubled times are the best stage for heroines. Crisis = opportunity, and her disadvantages (tabooed powers, unknown identity) have become the key to breaking the situation. Finally, I would like to say to the author: Your introduction mentions "trying to write persuasive plots and characters", and I think you've done that! The writing of this book is exquisite and the setting is novel. Although some details can be optimized, the flaws cannot be concealed. The current controversy may just be that the plot has not yet fully unfolded. If you stick to your style, more readers will understand and fall in love with this story. Come on ❤️!

The previous pace was pretty good and there were no problems, so I chose the five-star rating and didn't finish reading it. However, when I arrived at Base No. 7, Maybe due to the complexity of the forces and the different purposes of each person, the heroine's analysis of everyone's purpose in the article was a bit confusing. Many people's analysis was just analysis. Part of it is left there, so that the content analyzed by everyone is chaotic, but the description of the content integrated by the heroine is basically not included, or it is very sudden. The next time I describe this, it is as if it suddenly turned into a knowledge point and appeared in the heroine's mind, which is a bit fragmented. Secondly, the heroine can be arranged in an orderly manner when fighting in the previous article. In contrast to the multi-line operations, the heroine in the later part is not outstanding enough. I hope that while keeping it updated, I can also sort out the context of the text. The logic of the plot is basically fine. Come on, author.

Highly recommended! Sisters, come and read it. It's a very nice novel. The only flaw is that it's only 130,000 words. I beg the author to update it a lot [Sending my heart] More than 20 chapters a day is not too much. I'm about to cry.

The writing is so good, the pace is tight, the content is novel, and the heroine is calm and thoughtful. Why do I feel that the writing in the following chapters becomes more and more watery and not so amazing? Since I went to Base No. 7, Many descriptions are watery.

It's been a while since I read a post-apocalyptic novel. I like the heroine who grows up through adventure. Although, I still prefer stories with cp, and there is no need to describe emotions. I hope there will be someone who will always accompany the heroine. Speechless, just keep the first few chapters concise, but the later chapters drag on. The plot is okay, but it drags too much. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

This is the first time I rated it on 🍅. It's super good-looking. The heroine is very smart. It's not the smartness that makes the supporting character's IQ lower, but I feel like the author himself is very smart. Act decisively but not cold-blooded, very charming! And the writing style is very JJ style. Can you say that? 🤭 This is the most post-apocalyptic novel with a female protagonist that I have ever read!

Five points of encouragement The main line is worthy of recognition and attractive I like the author's settings, including but not limited to super powers, story background, technological development, etc. Have a sense of reality Regarding the interaction between the heroine and Chu Xu, I am not very optimistic about it Because I am a non-CP person, I don't like the descriptions and CP scenes of relationships between men and women in many romance novels. I prefer that either we like each other or neither of them likes each other. For example, if the heroine treats the leader of the base, I hope she has a reasonable goal, such as for profit or to gain a foothold. She had already fought with the forces chasing her when she escaped. If she hadn't happened to hitchhike from the northern base and go back to find her, she would have probably died. She knew that she was being hunted and she had a sense of urgency to survive, but the author ignored this. The interaction between the heroine and Chu Xu consists of inexplicable looking up to each other, and paradoxical remarks, such as whether the heroine can have mental communication, and why the heroine ran into the other party's room when she integrated space powers. I can only see that Chu Xu is casual and the heroine is defenseless. There is no emotional interaction between the two people, and the look and feel is rather weird. I have seen many stories about strong women and strong men, but before the heroine broke through the second power, her reaction when she saw Chu Xu using the second power was wow! These two superpowers are so powerful and so enviable! (Su Moumou, the male protagonist in the original book who chases the heroine, also has dual powers)