Game, My Goal Is Eternal Life

Lightning protection, joined the official department [Chigua]

It's okay. Although it can be seen that it is written by a newcomer, there are always some omissions in the setting and background, but the writing style is smooth and the story is novel. It seems that the flaws are not concealed so far, so I still give it five stars for encouragement. Don't look at it, you're dying.

It can still be an invincible text, right? The second talent will be an invincible text as soon as it comes out. You can bring your opponent to a level where you are alone. If you are lucky, you can seriously injure him with one sword. If you have another good luck, you can kill the top monster with two swords. I think it is an invincible novel. I don't know if it is a cool novel. It was the first time I saw a battle scene. I only swung 6 knives and dodged a few times. I had no physical strength. Is it because of my skills? Then 10 minutes passed, not to mention a fight. I killed 6 people in total with one knife, one at a time. 10 Minutes.

It's okay, that's right, let's just talk about why the heroine whispers to herself from time to time, murmurs to herself [cover face] It feels more appropriate for her inner thoughts [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

Sister, stop reading. It's so embarrassing that you keep whispering to yourself.

It was very exciting at the beginning, the kind that could stay up all night to chase, but after coming out of the escape road, the plot changed drastically, and all kinds of aristocratic families came out [face covering]

It's a very interesting game invasion, and I'm very satisfied that there are no inexplicable family disputes. If I play tomatoes, it's either my ex-boyfriend, my parents, my siblings, etc. It makes me want to vomit.

Wow, I actually found a treasure on the homepage! ! ! ! It's super beautiful, the writing is great, and the plot is interesting. The author must have read a lot of similar novels, but the writing has his own unique style. There is no poisonous point in the whole process. The character of the heroine is also likable. I hope the author can keep writing! This book is going to be popular. I just want to update ten chapters tomorrow. I just saw something interesting.

In fact, I think this book is quite good overall. There may be some flaws in the character design in the early stage, or the writing is unclear in some places. But the world view of this book is quite large, and the settings in many places are very novel. It feels like a fusion of multiple elements. The settings such as road survival, potions, ancient martial arts levels, talents, etc. Are all very interesting. And I think some people say that it would be strange for the heroine to have many men without cp. The female protagonist is good-looking and has a very attractive temperament. In many stories about the male protagonist cultivating immortality, there are also many passers-by or supporting characters who like the male protagonist, such as confidantes. If you just write an upgrade story, it may feel boring or too compact, not to mention that the female protagonist does not have any emotional scenes with them. The author should work hard to write it! The more you write, the more exciting it becomes!

It looks good, I hope the heroine will continue to be strong. To be honest, I don't really like this kind of joining the official department, because in 9 out of 10 books, I can't see what the benefits are of having the heroine join? I hope this one is not one of those 9. To be honest, I don't understand why the heroine can't compare to those people even if she cheats, but she still gets hurt. It means that this hook is still not big enough. Can it be made bigger? I want the female lead to always be number one. Until now, I have never seen a female protagonist take first place. Doesn't it mean that the female protagonist has top cancer? Why is there still no first place? Hope there is no CP.

It's not hard to tell that it's a mess. The author should have spliced ​​several paragraphs he wrote into this book. I personally think it is quite well written, and the author can rewrite it when he has time. Or re-write on a similar topic. It seems that the author is also very good at writing. It is powerful. The theme of this kind of game invasion is not unpopular, and if it is not unfinished, it should not be as unpopular as this one. I really want to hit 1⭐️ha and 5⭐️ for encouragement. I wonder if the author can see it.

Give me a good review and hope the author can work hard! ! In addition, I hope that except for the heroine, the other excellent supporting characters will not be all male (personal opinion). Overall, it is a good growth story about strong women, with flaws that do not hide the good points, and it is watchable.

I like it very much at the moment, it's a relatively novel theme, [Blowing Kiss] [Adoration] but I really like this kind of theme. Except for the occasional embarrassing plot, everything else is within my acceptance range. After all, I didn't pay any money, so what else can I say about free prostitution?

I really like the type of game world where the heroine is constantly upgrading, and the heroine tends to be a lone wolf! Like it even more! And he is a cautious lone wolf, so write well! I will keep chasing you! We grown-up women love to see these! !

After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the outline may have been changed later, or the author was inspired to write whatever comes to mind. The plot is like a wild horse that has escaped the reins, and I can't pull it back. I can communicate with others, so what do I kill before? Why are they integrated into the God's Abandoned Continent? There are some other pitfalls, but it is still very interesting.

Not bad, but I wish there were less descriptions of the supporting characters, especially the male supporting characters.

I came from Shang Shang Ben. The teacher gave up on supplements. I still like Cthulhu The Fourth Natural Disaster. It will be popular.

I came here from the novel "The Witcher". To be honest, this novel is not as good as the novel "The Witcher", but I found one of the strengths of the author is that he is very imaginative. He doesn't have the hollow feeling that many novels give me. At first, this novel had such a low rating that I wasn't ready to read it. But then I couldn't help but read it and I really liked the author's imagination.

The subject matter is very novel, and I picked it up from the author's previous book! I'm really sorry that I didn't finish the last book. I hope the author of this book will work harder.

Look what treasure book I found. I have read several books that combine world genres before. If I can keep writing, I hope it can replace meal cyber! The world view of this kind of article is grand and the author writes it very well. The pace is tight and it is very interesting to read! Come on!

"It is a happy thing to die on the way to pursue your ideals." I really like this kind of refreshing novel with a heroine who is unswervingly moving towards her ideals. Moreover, the plot is very smooth and the image of the heroine is vivid and three-dimensional.

It's very beautiful. Here you can see the heroine who is getting better and harder and working harder, gradually growing up; you can also see different weird or survival or weird worlds, and the logical and plot connections are silky smooth, not too abrupt, it's really very interesting to watch.

The background complexity and structure of the novel are very attractive, the plot is original, and the story rhythm is well grasped. It is a rare and very good game advent novel. (I hope the author will not stop updating)

I really like the author's narrative style. I also read the last game novel about Rebirth. Unfortunately, both books ended very suddenly. A little bit unfinished. I hope the author will work hard! There are still many small bugs. But I think it's harmless.

It's okay, the ending is a bit rushed, the content is okay, relatively novel, the rest is nothing, you can check it out I can't stand it anymore, all bad endings will be given 3 stars

It looks good, but sometimes I can't tell the difference between the upper and lower lines.

It's good-looking, the heroine is more of a lone wolf, more cautious, but I don't know if there is any cp (I hope there is no cp)

I was so stimulated by one sentence that I decided to rate it [laughing] The ending was a bit hasty [grieved]

I like it very much. It's a rare product and edible.

This is the author's second novel I've read. It's okay, but a bit short.