Ten Days to the End: I Am the Variable

It's a very interesting Tokaichi fanfic. Compared with other fanfics, I feel better about it (at least I don't have any inexplicable ambiguities with people, and I don't have a big drop in Qi Xia's IQ) and the style of writing (characters and characters) is one of the few Tokadai fanfics that makes me feel a little bit (maybe because I haven't read enough). However, it has been a while since I finished reading Tokadai, and the author is not good at all and the original plot is a bit uncomfortable. Anyway, it is still worth buying.

Come on, author, the writing is very good. I saw it at eight this morning and read it all at once. Then I felt a little uncomfortable. I found it too early and there was so little content [face covering] I really like the interaction with Tiantian. The protagonist gave her a little hope. In the original work, I feel that Tiantian's light is actually only Zheng Yingxiong, but he appeared too late. Finally, author, you must not stop updating!

Wuwuwuwuwuwu, I just came back from eating the knife in "The End of Ten Days", and I was attracted by the author's introduction. This is the redemption story of "The End of Ten Days"! Tiantian is really hard to get over, she is really too bitter, I hope the author will treat her well😭😭😭. And I should not mention it, this fanfic of Ten Days Ending is really well written, and the characters are very consistent. At the same time, most of the plot has been simplified, but it does not affect the follow-up. After all, it is only a single line, but the plot is pushed a little too fast. Originally, it was more than 600 chapters when Qi Xia and the others found the monkey, but now it is only more than 200 chapters. Author, to be honest, I really don't think you are stupid! Let's move what can be done in the original work! The setting of the protagonist is also intriguing! Looking forward to the next game between Qi Xia, Qiao Jiajin, Chen Junnan, Lin Zhi, Tiantian, Xiao Cheng and Zheng Yingxiong and the earth monkey Shuo Wangyue, the author burns his brain cells! ! Haha, joking author, come on! I hope my writing will get better and better!

The length of the novel is considerable, the protagonist's abilities are very useful, the characters are not OOC, and the plot of the original novel has been almost filled in. It is slowly implemented according to the original plot. The author has tried his best to reduce the proportion of the original text in order not to be clumsy. However, if you want to get a better look and feel, it is recommended that those who have read the original novel read this novel again (of course, if you don't have the patience to read the original novel, you can also read this article and go to the original novel to find the original content) There is no specific explanation for the ability of [All Creatures]. I feel that this echo is very strong, but I don't know where it can be used... It remains to be seen [laughing]

It's ok, but I didn't understand the relationship line with Tiantian at the beginning. Love at first sight? I feel like I talked about [grievance] without expressing my feelings. Maybe it's my personal reasons. But overall it's still very good! The dialogue between the characters is very funny and heartwarming, and I still look forward to the follow-up development. . .

Looking at the full text, OOC does not exist (the full text of Qi Xia's IQ is online, and the pair of live treasures Lao Qiao and Lao Chen are also very interesting, but Lao Qiao's role is less in the later stages), and the plot is compact (the protagonist joins the plot from the first time the protagonist group meets Wen Qiaoyun, just look at the number of chapters) ), the emotional lines are reasonable (Lao Chen and Sister Dong, Xiao Zhi and Zhang San are so close to each other!!!), And the ending is wonderful (almost everyone has the ending they expect, and Lao Qi is back! How did he come back? See for yourself) This fanfic is simply wonderful! ! ! By the way, most of this article is a description of the original plot and characters, and there are fewer original games, so those who want to read new games can find new books.

It looks good, but the game chapter about Earth Monkey is too long [smile]

It can be seen that the author has worked very hard, come on!

I like it very much, it makes up for my regrets, and it's nice and not harsh. [Adoration]

The best Tokadai fanfic except Jiang Ling's one