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It's a very interesting Tokaichi fanfic. Compared with other fanfics, I feel better about it (at least I don't have any inexplicable ambiguities with people, and I don't have a big drop in Qi Xia's IQ) and the style of writing (characters and characters) is one of the few Tokadai fanfics that makes me feel a little bit (maybe because I haven't read enough). However, it has been a while since I finished reading Tokadai, and the author is not good at all and the original plot is a bit uncomfortable. Anyway, it is still worth buying.

Come on, author, the writing is very good. I saw it at eight this morning and read it all at once. Then I felt a little uncomfortable. I found it too early and there was so little content [face covering] I really like the interaction with Tiantian. The protagonist gave her a little hope. In the original work, I feel that Tiantian's light is actually only Zheng Yingxiong, but he appeared too late. Finally, author, you must not stop updating!

Wuwuwuwuwuwu, I just came back from eating the knife in "The End of Ten Days", and I was attracted by the author's introduction. This is the redemption story of "The End of Ten Days"! Tiantian is really hard to get over, she is really too bitter, I hope the author will treat her well😭😭😭. And I should not mention it, this fanfic of Ten Days Ending is really well written, and the characters are very consistent. At the same time, most of the plot has been simplified, but it does not affect the follow-up. After all, it is only a single line, but the plot is pushed a little too fast. Originally, it was more than 600 chapters when Qi Xia and the others found the monkey, but now it is only more than 200 chapters. Author, to be honest, I really don't think you are stupid! Let's move what can be done in the original work! The setting of the protagonist is also intriguing! Looking forward to the next game between Qi Xia, Qiao Jiajin, Chen Junnan, Lin Zhi, Tiantian, Xiao Cheng and Zheng Yingxiong and the earth monkey Shuo Wangyue, the author burns his brain cells! ! Haha, joking author, come on! I hope my writing will get better and better!

The length of the novel is considerable, the protagonist's abilities are very useful, the characters are not OOC, and the plot of the original novel has been almost filled in. It is slowly implemented according to the original plot. The author has tried his best to reduce the proportion of the original text in order not to be clumsy. However, if you want to get a better look and feel, it is recommended that those who have read the original novel read this novel again (of course, if you don't have the patience to read the original novel, you can also read this article and go to the original novel to find the original content) There is no specific explanation for the ability of [All Creatures]. I feel that this echo is very strong, but I don't know where it can be used... It remains to be seen [laughing]

It's ok, but I didn't understand the relationship line with Tiantian at the beginning. Love at first sight? I feel like I talked about [grievance] without expressing my feelings. Maybe it's my personal reasons. But overall it's still very good! The dialogue between the characters is very funny and heartwarming, and I still look forward to the follow-up development. . .

It looks good, but the game chapter about Earth Monkey is too long [smile]

Looking at the full text, OOC does not exist (the full text of Qi Xia's IQ is online, and the pair of live treasures Lao Qiao and Lao Chen are also very interesting, but Lao Qiao's role is less in the later stages), and the plot is compact (the protagonist joins the plot from the first time the protagonist group meets Wen Qiaoyun, just look at the number of chapters) ), the emotional lines are reasonable (Lao Chen and Sister Dong, Xiao Zhi and Zhang San are so close to each other!!!), And the ending is wonderful (almost everyone has the ending they expect, and Lao Qi is back! How did he come back? See for yourself) This fanfic is simply wonderful! ! ! By the way, most of this article is a description of the original plot and characters, and there are fewer original games, so those who want to read new games can find new books.

I like it very much, it makes up for my regrets, and it's nice and not harsh. [Adoration]

Okay, it satisfies my views on fanfics. I just want to watch this kind of thing. Although other people have been added, the main plot has not changed much. It doesn't matter that the ending remains the same. It's mainly the main plot. Give it a five-star rating and support it

The best Tokadai fanfic except Jiang Ling's one

Nice. It can be regarded as a top-grade Toka fanfic It's just too little, it's best to update ten times a day [laughter]

Well written, the emotional line is also very good

The book is really good. Lin Zhi and Tiantian must have a good time [almost crying]

Nice! It's one of the best among the fanfics I've read! Lots of updates!

After reading the introduction, I saw that I was going to take Qi Xia home, so I came in. The content is also good and worth watching.

This Tokahi fanfic is not as inexplicable and illogical as the others, and there is no idea of abandoning it after reading it halfway. The timeline matches Tokahi, and there is no sense of separation. However, there may be some overlap in the early stage, but it will be fine later. I can only say that the author is also constantly improving. There will be some hot topics incorporated but not too abrupt. The subject matter is also novel. I am very curious about the ending. Cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

This is the most restorative of the fanfics I have read so far. Although there is OOC in some places, no one can do it the same as others, so it is understandable. The plot is also very good and has its own innovation. I hope the author can stick to it [Sending Hearts]

It's good to watch, very good to watch. The pace in the early stage is slow, but it looks particularly good from the middle to the later stages. All the holes that need to be filled in are filled in. The writing is smooth and coherent. I especially like the character of the protagonist. There is no OOC. It is considered a very high-quality Tokadai fanfic.

Come on, it's very interesting. I just hope that we can talk more about the excitement of all living things in the follow-up, and then I hope that the foursome can interact more after that. I feel that it is so interesting for the foursome to come together [laughs]

In Toka Doujin (which I have read), it is very good. Although there is a female protagonist, I personally feel that it is more like a kind of caring, and there are not many emotional scenes. Can anyone explain the resonance of all living things? I saw it, but I'm not willing to give in.

Not bad. Although sometimes the characters are a little OOC and feel weird, but overall they are pretty good-looking. Good luck, author! Author I will follow you forever

Got into the trap last night and commented this morning. It saved my book drought, great.

Good looking, one of the Toka fans that suits me best, [Adoration]

It's a very good Tokadai fanfic.

It's very cool. It's the best thing I've seen written there.

The best Tokadai fanfic I have ever read so far

It's well written, although it feels a bit OOC, but it's not a big problem. I hope the author will not stop updating

It's very good, very beautiful and the word count is not bad [like]

It looks good, the characters are not OOC, I hope the author can give me a good ending (˵¯͒¯͒˵)(.ˇεˇ.)♥ I hope there will be no heroine [shy]

Redeem Tiantian, the plot characters are not OOC, the logic is smooth, the writing is mature, there is no boring plot in the whole text, the male protagonist has two echoes (not cheating, not through the book📖), the brotherhood with Qi Xia and Chen Junnan is very delicately written, and the relationship with Tiantian is also step-by-step (not abusive but very sweet), the author updates very quickly, usually two to three articles a day, which is very suitable for keeping a book (if you don't read it for a few days, there will be many chapters)