Winning Over the Heroine, So Why Are You a Yandere?

Not bad, but there are suggestions The following is purely subjective and without any malice, and represents only my personal feelings. So far, I feel like I'm very tired from reading. There are a lot of modifiers and sentences, and it takes a little concentration to connect these words and sentences, which makes reading more difficult. Appropriate subtractions can make sentences and articles more concise, lower the reading threshold, and there should be more readers. After all, writing is a process of continuous addition and subtraction ( Of course, this doesn't mean that this is bad, it's just my readers' thoughts and suggestions.

The plot is well written, (but I really don't understand how the author can enter the dark room even if he writes some ambiguous plots. I don't think it's okay if the hints in other writings are particularly obvious). Now I'm just waiting for Li to turn into a yandere, and I must "punish" Lin severely [laughing]

I give it 𠆤 five stars. When I read a plot that was somewhat similar to this book, the knife and torture I was looking forward to did not appear (maybe I am used to knives). Instead, I thought this book was sweet (I hope Xiao Ning is well [I almost cried]). To be honest, the rest is just like that (but the author's writing is okay). The new evaluation is my sincere evaluation. I spent a lot of time reading it in the past few months, but I couldn't watch it every time. It was completely unattractive (personally). No way, this time I still can't let me read it... [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

It looks good, the writing is good, and some plots are not obtrusive. Although it follows the same routine as other works on the market, the author has his own characteristics. It is not boring to watch. It is a bit novel, but not much. I hope the author can break away from the template and write his own book. The author is of good quality and I hope he can write more novel works.

It's so good-looking and so sweet. Although it has a knife, it's very sweet. Are Xu Wan and Bai Tofu a couple? Did Xu Wan and Bai Doufu meet after the restart? Have your sister and mother come over? (The world after restarting). Xiaoxue returned to Yueyue's original world, Xiaoning was resurrected, and Xiaobai Yiyi also came. Xiaobai was so good to the protagonist. What a good manager!

Birds, why do they fly? People say that birds can fly naturally. This is due to their biological structure and instinct, and is a gift from nature to their evolution. Romantic philosophers say that because birds want to fly into the sky, this is the freedom they long for. Birds want to fly into the sky, so they build wings for themselves. But this is impossible, this is just wishful thinking of romantics. Although I have the same idea, that is, the desire to transcend childhood, I cannot do it just because I want it. Why do birds fly? Because, they must fly into the sky. When the final meteorite falls in the Cretaceous Period, only the free-flying birds can escape from their destined demise.

The author's writing style is pretty good, and there are no toxic points so far. Maybe it's because I'm resistant to poison. I think one thing that's lacking is that the female character is a bit weak and she feels she's too well protected by the protagonist. Can I add the remaining one star when it's finished?

The rating shouldn't be so low. I have read countless books by Bai He and have a sharp eye. The rating of this book must be low.

It's not too much to give yourself a five-star rating [note]

When the last black hole evaporates in Hawking radiation and even the wrinkles of space-time itself are smoothed out, the box containing wild dog milk floats quietly in absolute nothingness. The last embers of proton decay have just been extinguished, but the dewdrops on its surface still maintain the curvature of the condensation. The ultra-future civilization touched its edge with a probe woven from dark matter, and the number that popped up on the detector plunged the entire constellation into silence for 300 million years - that scale showed that the universe had just passed its first Planck time since its production date. The shelf life of wild dog milk is the only constant written in the wrinkles of time. The white-haired and blue-eyed supplicant!