Little White Flower Heroine? I Didn't Say She Was a Yandere!

Not bad, but there are suggestions The following is purely subjective and without any malice, and represents only my personal feelings. So far, I feel like I'm very tired from reading. There are a lot of modifiers and sentences, and it takes a little concentration to connect these words and sentences, which makes reading more difficult. Appropriate subtractions can make sentences and articles more concise, lower the reading threshold, and there should be more readers. After all, writing is a process of continuous addition and subtraction ( Of course, this doesn't mean that this is bad, it's just my readers' thoughts and suggestions.

The plot is well written, (but I really don't understand how the author can enter the dark room even if he writes some ambiguous plots. I don't think it's okay if the hints in other writings are particularly obvious). Now I'm just waiting for Li to turn into a yandere, and I must "punish" Lin severely [laughing]

It looks good, the writing is good, and some plots are not obtrusive. Although it follows the same routine as other works on the market, the author has his own characteristics. It is not boring to watch. It is a bit novel, but not much. I hope the author can break away from the template and write his own book. The author is of good quality and I hope he can write more novel works.

I give it 𠆤 five stars. When I read a plot that was somewhat similar to this book, the knife and torture I was looking forward to did not appear (maybe I am used to knives). Instead, I thought this book was sweet (I hope Xiao Ning is well [I almost cried]). To be honest, the rest is just like that (but the author's writing is okay). The new evaluation is my sincere evaluation. I spent a lot of time reading it in the past few months, but I couldn't watch it every time. It was completely unattractive (personally). No way, this time I still can't let me read it... [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

Birds, why do they fly? People say that birds can fly naturally. This is due to their biological structure and instinct, and is a gift from nature to their evolution. Romantic philosophers say that because birds want to fly into the sky, this is the freedom they long for. Birds want to fly into the sky, so they build wings for themselves. But this is impossible, this is just wishful thinking of romantics. Although I have the same idea, that is, the desire to transcend childhood, I cannot do it just because I want it. Why do birds fly? Because, they must fly into the sky. When the final meteorite falls in the Cretaceous Period, only the free-flying birds can escape from their destined demise.

The author's writing style is pretty good, and there are no toxic points so far. Maybe it's because I'm resistant to poison. I think one thing that's lacking is that the female character is a bit weak and she feels she's too well protected by the protagonist. Can I add the remaining one star when it's finished?

It's so good-looking and so sweet. Although it has a knife, it's very sweet. Are Xu Wan and Bai Tofu a couple? Did Xu Wan and Bai Doufu meet after the restart? Have your sister and mother come over? (The world after restarting). Xiaoxue returned to Yueyue's original world, Xiaoning was resurrected, and Xiaobai Yiyi also came. Xiaobai was so good to the protagonist. What a good manager!

The rating shouldn't be so low. I have read countless books by Bai He and have a sharp eye. The rating of this book must be low.

It's not too much to give yourself a five-star rating [note]

I like this book very much. It's sweet in the beginning, like a bite of iced watermelon in summer. The light fragrance lingers in my mind. The yandere's little dark room at the back is also quite interesting. The author keeps up the good work [laughing] [shy] Secondly, there are some plot settings. The suspense creation settings are quite good and very novel. The author's writing skills are still there. At least it is not funny. If you like Yandere Lily, you can come in and take a look.

What I wrote before is still okay. I really don't like forcing him to do this type of thing. If you want to write, leave a little leeway. But at this point, the book is almost finished. I still hope it can be written better.

The whole story is sweet, and there are some bits of abuse in it, but it didn't abuse me. Shuangjie, HE, a very good book The main reason is that it is basically not too toxic and has no industrial saccharin smell. In fact, the number of words is quite a lot. The author can work harder on the topic. (Oh, stop reading books. When you follow them, you can comment more and support the author!!!)

It's very interesting. I'm planning to write one of the Lily books I've referenced. This should be the tenth book I've referenced. Let's start writing this National Day.

Super nice Bai Hewen

Overall, it's very good, but some chapters don't have green continuity.

Look, don't be fooled by his ratings

It looks good, look at it and cherish it [smile]

Give a five-star review

Not bad, give me five stars for encouragement [smile]

Posting is the best [Learned] 🍅So good at collecting books

Come on! The big sister who writes books I give it to you, I give it all to you😡

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's still the same sentence: It's just the author's mission (fog)

I don't know. The author said he wanted to rate it, so I came here [Thinking]

It's really good. I haven't finished it yet, so I can't analyze it in detail. I gave it five stars. It looks very good. I changed it from four stars to five stars. Don't let it cool. Steam it again.

Very cool, five stars

The author is miserable, give it a good review. The writing is also very good.

A very nice book

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Very good-looking, very invincible