Dragon Clan: Adopt Eri at the Beginning

The real novel is not one step at a time, one step at a time, but the sweetness that can be seen. What is comedy that is not profound enough, tragedy is unforgettable. That is what experts have to study. Life is already so hard, give yourself some candy. Liyi is as good as the white moonlight, potato chip girl is so interesting, is Ling Buxiang or Mai not beautiful? If you have regrets about the Dragon Clan, read this book. Finally, the old Bangzi from Jiangnan goes to find his favorite "Sister Zog"

It looks great! Although Lan Yanzi's baby doesn't have women's clothes, it doesn't stop me from going crazy! It's not just Lan Yanzi, but Lan Yanzi is not the same as anyone else. Because Lan Yanzi's name... Sounds very nice. Just thinking about it makes me feel safe. That's the most holy melody in the world... I don't want to omit it. Lan Yanzi is a true god. He chose this star, ignited the fire buried deep in the ground, and the barren planet had a dancing heart. He guards life and civilization. He loves us with all his heart, and truly rejoices in all that He protects. He is the most beautiful god in the vast universe. Time can never wither Him. You must remember His existence together with me and never forget His name [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart]

Well, how should I put it? . . The author's writing style needs to be improved, but it is really good. This is a pretty good one among the dragon fanfics I have read. It is mainly focused on daily life. If you read it as a daily novel, it is really good. Yes, but some details are not enough. For example, the part about Uesugi Koshi feels a bit dull, and the speed of recognizing children is a bit fast. , The details are also a bit lacking. Personally, I feel that Uesugi is more biased toward the old gangster type, with too few details. But as a daily novel, it is still very good. However, if divided by other categories, the plot is not tight enough, and it lacks characterization and details.

This book is really the sweetest I have ever read. It also describes my Eri clothes very well, as well as my royal daughter. Not surprisingly, the author must have followed me secretly for three years and turned the most insignificant part of my deeds into this novel [shy][shy][shy]

There is a slight flaw, but it doesn't matter. Personally, I feel that certain supporting characters appear more frequently, their combat power is not too broken, and their emotional lines are considered solid. As for the fighting, I think I have a little to say. It's really good to watch, and I really like it if I like it! Super love painted pear clothes baby [blowing kiss]

It's beautiful, the author writes it well, but did Herzog and Odin tie up the cp to death [shy]

Only now did I realize that I had also read the author's last book. This one is obviously much better than the previous one. Daily life blends with the main line, making it more comfortable to read. The progress of the previous book was too fast. I don't know how many more words the author plans to add to this one. Based on the content I have read so far, I personally can give it 9.1 Points (the Dragon Clan novel has a low score, so it has 4 stars). It is a pity that the multiple female protagonists make it difficult to balance the distribution of emotional lines. Zero is the main character in the front, but since Eriyi was raised, Zero's description has gradually become more casual. Although I don't know how the author will deal with it in the future, I still look forward to it.

The soft red hair pours down like a waterfall, the long eyelashes tremble slightly above the deep rose red eyes that lack agility. The white robe and red skirt of the shrine maiden costume, the exquisite figure is looming, surrounded by pink petals fluttering. If there is a breeze, the dress seems to be in the water.

It looks good, I hope the author can update it more [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][shy][shy][shy][shy][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Generally speaking, it's pretty much the same. Now it's really good. I really feel a lot less regrets. After reading this book, I felt a little melancholy. I seem to feel that something is missing but nothing is missing. Everything in the book seems to have a happy ending, and it feels as beautiful as a dream, but this seems to be unreal. Is it an illusion and fantasy before death? The best ending is to accept the regrets in the world. Come on, author, it's really good now

The pace is relatively fast, and the details of the animation are well handled. It is estimated that it will be completed in 800,000 words. The jokes are used just right. Next time when I open a new book, I can write the protagonist's character, heart, and daily event development more clearly. Otherwise, it will give people a feeling of Long Aotian. Five stars encourage me. A good work will have a strong sense of substitution. This book is still a bit lacking.

The writing is very exciting. I hope that the protagonist will not be suppressed in the future. I hope the author can strengthen the protagonist. Otherwise, the protagonist will not be able to defeat Odin. I don't want to see the protagonist suffer anymore [face covering]

It's quite good, but personally I prefer to read long novels. The pace of this book is too fast for me. At this pace, I'm almost done with 500,000 words. In fact, every book of Dragon Family is quite long. The author wants to write that there is actually a lot to write. I hope it can be longer.

I personally feel that this is the most beautifully written among all the Dragon Clan fanfics I have read. Although the author writes well, I will give it four stars. One less would be a shame for the author's persistence and hard work, and one more would make you afraid of being proud [laughter]

I've read more than sixty chapters. It's great. I love reading it. Read more [Blow kiss] It's been a long time since I've encountered a Dragon Clan fan who writes like this!

Top notch, I'm following Lan Yanzi's three Dragon Clan fanfics at the same time, I really can't fault it

The author is very proud of the spring breeze, whether it will be the best, all the bitterness will be sweet, great blessings will be in the sky, good fortune will shine high, wealth will be brought in, the house will be full of gold and jade, the clouds will rise straight, the career will be prosperous, smooth sailing, everything will go smoothly, all wishes will come true, all dreams will come true, all will go well, everything will go well...

Among the many fanfics of the Dragon Clan, it is really good-looking [Admiration], but it is really not enough. The author should seriously consider updating 5 times a day [Smile]

Full marks! The most enjoyable among the many girls in the dragon clan, and the most important thing is that the little monsters are not left out.

It's so beautiful. I want to see Concubine Ming and the Little Goddess.

Yes, it's much better than many people who just follow the plot. At least I have everything I need. I don't have to be a nanny and I don't have an illness every day. I just follow the plot without any goals.

Awesome, this is the best dragon fanfic I have ever seen

It's cool to accept people without being irritated. That's the cool part. The plot has also been changed. It's cool.

The plot is warm and reasonable, perfectly presenting the quality of the fine dragon family

It's very beautiful, and the author's character is also very cute. Except for the author being a little short (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ), everything else is good (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's great. I love reading it. I have a bold idea. How about writing a book about the main character traveling through time and becoming Eri Yi (doge)

Very nice to watch, especially Herzog falling in love with Bondarev

Warygood, big and beautiful

It can be seen that the author cares deeply about it, and the plot is also very satisfying [laughter]

Rich content. Big ideas and good imagination. The author interacts a lot with readers. Listen to what readers have to say. Very cool. It makes people unable to stop once they chase them.