天仙拿走了大佬的系统

(Superior) Five-star Orange•Level 18 Sense of substitution S, plug-ins B, setting B, writing style A, imagination B, rhythm A, main line B, character design S, logic A. Extra points: none Personal feelings: After reading it in one sitting, the combination of reality and novels is very harmonious. There are no deliberate contradictions, only the direction of continuous development. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. This way it should not be blocked. 1. Evaluation Criteria·Ninth Edition 2. Sense of immersion: attractiveness at the beginning, credibility of the worldview. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Do making money, practicing cultivation, etc. Conform to basic cognition? 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 9 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang·Five-star Red: Level 24+ (2) Superior•Five-star Orange: Level 18+ (3) Shangxia•Five-star Purple: high-level online writing, level 12+ (4) Upper-middle level·Five-star blue: standard online writing, level 4+ (5) Next in the middle • Four-star green: high-standard online writing, level 0+ (6) Middle to lower level 2·Samsung white: standard web text, level -2+ (7) Middle and lower three • Samsung gray: defective web text, -6 levels + (8) Lower and higher • Difference: -Level 14+ (9) Xiaxia·Malicious (10) Medium•No evaluation (11) Inferior • No evaluation

The story is very interesting and interesting. Also, don't tell me what Liu Yifei is like in real life. What I like is the Liu Yifei in my impression, the one she played in The Condor and Sword of Condor trilogy. As long as she doesn't cause a huge scandal in real life, I don't care whether he lives or lives.

The writing is very good, and the logic is flawless. I don't understand these professional things. Ordinary people can read it without any problems. The emotions are also well written. The characters are very vivid and flexible, which allowed me to give full play to my imagination. The pictures came out. You are really a great author. It's just that there are too few chapters. I read Chapter 50 for more than three hours.

I like it if I want to read it. I can write about daily life. Although the business is not professional and I am in a hurry, it is still smooth. Please keep updating the author. The first 200 chapters feel good, but I really can't understand the heroine Liu helping the protagonist start a harem in the back. Mainly because the characters in the story don't match up? The protagonist and Liu Yifei met in Weimo, and Liu's status was even higher at that time. As a result, after the protagonist's rapid development, the heroine Liu felt that she couldn't keep up with the protagonist. This is normal. However, the heroine the author wrote was not to improve her own abilities, but to help the protagonist open a harem [laughing]. The most important thing is that the heroine has systems that can be added. It is really an explosive plot.

Although I have only read a little bit, the author's writing style is really good, and there is no lag in logic. Every line is full of kindness to Sissy. I was so sweet, and I have read other similar books, but I licked them to death. This one is just right. I hope the quality will be maintained until the end of the book. I will give you five stars to encourage you. It's too much, I said it too early, I'm still tired 🤮

Okay, okay, the author's writing is very good, it's the best Liu Yifei I've ever read (I'm not a porn star). The length of filming and life is just right. Making money, career, and character are all well portrayed. The only shortcoming is that there are too few words.

This setting is okay, but don't go for a vulgar romantic drama. Remember your own setting and be a reborn successful person!

This is the novel with the highest content at present, and the plot is very good. The emotional scenes are very comfortable to watch. Highly recommended.

So far, there are no big poisonous points. Some small details will not affect the enjoyment. I hope you don't open up a harem. I'm a bit tired of reading too many harem stories. It's good to have a little freshness once in a while.

It's well written. Except for the fairy tale in Nantianmen, this is the most comfortable fairy tale I've read so far. Don't keep updating, author.