After Passing Through the Book, I Unexpectedly Captured the Chief of the Sect Next Door.

The writing is really good and very funny. There is only one problem. Qingyao has too many scenes and takes up a lot of space, especially her five boyfriends. The highlights are basically all on them...

It's pretty good, but there are too many scenes with Qing Yao, and Jiang Su is clearly the male lead [face covering]

Half of it, I don't know what happens next. After reading more than 40 chapters, it gave me the feeling that Qingyao and the five people are the main CP, and the two male protagonists are the deputy CPs. Moreover, after Qingyao's identity is exposed, half of a chapter deals with her relationship history. The most important thing is that Qingyao's five predecessors are very high regardless of status or strength. , To change the novel, it would be, the group's favorite junior sister and her five Taoist companions? (For the time being, I don't know whether these people are 1V1 or 1V5, but it will definitely take a long time) Her character design is very good, but the length is very long, and the male protagonist looks like a supporting role. Although it is a group portrait, there are not many other direct descendants.

The author's character and introduction are very attractive, but I feel that there are still too many descriptions of Qing Yao... The supporting role is a supporting role after all, and the highlight should not be too much more than the protagonist. Moreover, too much romance in the double male protagonist really affects the viewing experience. If we want to read romance, we will search for it ourselves. According to my personal experience, everyone does not like to see too much romance in Shuang Nan. I hope the author can delete some highlights about her. It's not that I don't like Qingyao, but the protagonist of this book is Xiao Jiang, and her highlights can be said to be much more than the protagonist. (Once again, it is best not to have too much romance in Shuang Nan! If there is a sub-CP, it should not be too long. We are here to see the protagonist fall in love, not the sub-CP!)

It's good, it's pretty good, the atmosphere is relaxed, but I feel that the scenes between Qingyao and her five brothers-in-law could be less. There is always an illusion that this is a heroine story where she runs away and he chases her, but she can't fly😭

It feels really, really good-looking. I am the kind of person who prefers to read deputy CPs, and this book completely satisfies this hobby of mine. I really like the feeling of losing friends when these talented people get along with each other in a very loving atmosphere. The protagonist Shou and the protagonist Gong are from two different sects. They take each other seriously during the competition and are very loving after the competition. I really like it. Shou was originally put in, but got along well with the male and female protagonists in the original book. Unlike the ones I've seen before that basically discredited the male and female protagonists, I actually think it's good to see that it doesn't necessarily have to discredit the male and female protagonists in the original book and that they get along well with each other. I hope the author will update it soon, I really can't wait. Super looking forward to it, super looking forward to the author's follow-up plot [Adoration][Adoration] Well, the author's subject matter is really new to me. It's just that some supporting characters use too much pen and ink. It will make the male protagonist look like a supporting character. Although this is a group portrait article, I still hope the author can make some cuts. I didn't feel bad, but after all, I mainly came to see the two male protagonists. Also, I would like to ask if Fu Rong and his third junior brother have a couple, right? I really hate them.

Give it a good review. The setting of this article is also very good, and the character of the main character really poked me, and the other characters are also very cute. But, I'm a bit of a romance fanatic. It's really hard to see the author spend so much time writing about Qingyao. I haven't even eaten much candy😭 Just looking at the romance, it's still more than 1v. I am also a deputy CP controller, but the length of writing about Qingyao is too long. Qingyao also has many highlights. This does not mean that the supporting role must be the foil of the protagonist. But this makes Qingyao more like the protagonist. I came here to see the two male protagonists😭😭😭The group portrait I want to see is not like this😭😭😭 Another point is that the protagonist progresses too quickly, and they kiss within ten chapters. Although candy is delicious, I also know that there are many people who like this. But this is probably a long article. If there are many chapters at the end, they all come together so quickly. So what should I read later😭😭😭Can I pull it out a little more😭😭😭

It's good-looking, but it feels like there's a bit too much description of Qing Yao, and there are more highlights than the main character.

Just watched a little bit. I gave it four stars because I felt that the junior sister had a little too much emotion. I came here for BL, so I felt a little uncomfortable. Well, I hope more focus will be placed on the protagonist in the future, and not take over the spotlight. Still waiting and watching [sending my heart]

The writing style is quite good, and the writing is also very good, but it is easy to be unreadable in the early stage. The scenes of the female supporting character Qing Yao are too much in the early stage. If you want to see group portraits and are receptive, you can watch the full text. If you want to see the dual male protagonists, feel free to skip and read the early stage. I am not sure about the later chapters because I have only seen forty or fifty chapters, but there are too many scenes of Qing Yao and her 5 CP in the early stage. It's easy to trigger a minefield (I'm not saying Qing Yao is not good, I'm just discussing the number of roles). As for the group portraits, the author can also consider changing it a little. At least everyone is working together, instead of waiting for others to find cheats. The ones looking for cheats are the supporting characters. Personally, I feel that Qing Yao's character performance is very full, but the protagonist and other supporting characters are a bit stiff (again, I am not saying that Qing Yao is bad, just that (I feel like it's written a bit too much) There's also the problem of character setting. Normally, all the good stuff is given to the protagonist and supplemented by the supporting characters. But this is a group portrait, so I think it should be divided equally between the protagonist and the supporting characters. But according to the plot I watched, the protagonist and other people got a little less (at least not enough to leave a memorable point), while the female supporting role got something. There are a lot of them, like Little Phoenix and a bunch of big boss CPs, and she even has the protagonist's time-travel identity. It feels like it's putting the cart before the horse. In terms of the early articles, it's a bit like the heroine's love story, but there are a lot of people who come here for the two men. That's about it. If you can accept this point of recommendation, give it a read. After all, this article is very well written. Later, the author may also change the way he writes. After all, the above remarks are based on chapters one to forty or fifty that I have read.

Geniuses are geniuses, but it's not good to exaggerate too much. Most of the fighting scenes are fleeting and not detailed enough. It's not very good if it's detailed, but it's understandable. After all, the writing skills are practiced step by step. The protagonist's emotional scenes in the previous are very strange, and they got together inexplicably. Shen Jingzhi can be said to have fallen in love because of something that happened in the past, but I said before that I only have appreciation, but it's understandable if I had a good impression and then fell in love with Jiang Su as soon as he pursued her. There's nothing I can do about it, but what about Jiang Su? He doesn't remember what happened before, and he is just interested in Shen Jingzhi. Maybe it's a bit perfunctory, or maybe I misunderstood the meaning, and they are not together, but then again the author can still write well, at least he dares to think and do, but if it is too complicated, novices should try not to contact it, but People make progress little by little. No one is born a literary giant. Even if there is one, there are very few. As for Qingyao's emotional line, just solve it step by step. Don't let the words of netizens affect your mentality. You can review the previous articles and see for yourself what you don't like. Anyway, keep working hard and believe in yourself.

I like it so much, it's so well written. It's very funny and funny. It's too satisfying. Although there were too many love lines for the younger junior sister, it has been reduced. The personality of the younger junior sister is also very good, too cute (abstract). And the character of the third senior brother is really good, can you give me a love line (double male)? (🤏Yididu) If possible, I really want to see it, please please [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

It's pretty good, but one thing I don't understand a bit is the micro-group portrait. Qing Yao's role in the previous scenes has almost caught up with the protagonist, so this shouldn't be considered a micro-group portrait. Difficult to comment(⇀‸↼‶)

It's good-looking. I was immediately attracted by the setting. But when I watched it halfway through, I may have had a different understanding of the teacher's group portrait. I think all the group portraits are outstanding, but after all, the protagonist still has the focus of the plot. Hmm... I feel that this is a supporting role. There are too many scenes, such as Qingyao's emotional disputes. (I don't mean to say bad, I'm sorry, it's just a personal opinion), but the article is really well written [crying], but I heard from book friends that it will be better later.

It's actually very interesting, but Qing Yao really takes up too much of the plot. Some people say it's because of the group portraits, but among so many geniuses, she has the most plot. She's excellent, I don't deny it. The author also said that he didn't want to write a side story, but since she takes up so much of the plot in the book, it's better to write a separate side story. Many of the highlights of her spotlight seem to have three protagonists, but if they were placed on other geniuses, they would look like a group portrait. And after seeing Qing Yao all the time, I will definitely want to watch the protagonist's plot or the protagonist's love. It will make people annoying when she appears in the plot. It is impossible to skip it, and the plot will be inconsistent. However, the author really writes it very well. The emotional foreshadowing of the protagonist is very sweet, and it is very refreshing and comfortable. Okay, Qing Yao's role will be much less later.

It looks good, but I was a little confused and didn't understand it, but it was also very clear and strange. The protagonist's character is very colorful, and each character is brought to life by the author. Each cp can be written as a separate novel, and it is well written. Each one is a good baby. Whether it is Jiang Su or Jiang Wu, they are both very good babies. The author loves the characters he writes about. These characters are vivid and interesting in the author's descriptions, and the author is also very interesting [Thinking][Like]

It's beautiful. Is this the charm of group portraits? People who watch it can't help but smile. It's just that I don't like the romance part. It's mainly for the two men [cover face] [cover face]

I like this article very much. The setting is very suitable to my taste. However, although it is a micro-group portrait, Qingyao, as a female supporting role, has too many scenes and highlights.

The author is so great. I like the author. Keep writing. I feel that the mermaid brother will also feel better. Hehe, can you arrange a husband for him? I like this kind of group portrait, and I don't think it will overwhelm the protagonist and steal the protagonist's light. It's very well written @Ti

It's great to watch, and every step of the plot develops in a direction I didn't expect. I really like how everyone in the Shangqing Sect gets along with each other. There is also a good rapport between the CPs. I hope the author can update more [please update]

Don't abandon the book just because you say Qingyao is a supporting character and the protagonist is highlighted. In fact, the author said that there won't be many parts about Qingyao later on. And I remember that Qingyao said something about micro-group portraits before, and I think the characters are all evenly written. I remember Qingyao said in the book that the protagonist deserves to be Bai Yueguang, which shows that he is a supporting character. This book is very nice. Because it is a serial, I haven't watched it for a long time and I don't remember the plot. When I remember, there are quite a lot of twists and turns.

I like it very much myself. The male protagonist is very, very attractive and very powerful. When the two male protagonists get along together, it makes my aunt laugh. If you like group portraits, you can be okay. It is very interesting and relaxing for everyone to get along together. Qingyao spends more time in the first ten chapters, but you can go Later, I saw that the personalities of each of the direct disciples were well described, and there were also explanations at the end about why Qingyao had so many appearances in the past. Furthermore, each direct disciple had his or her own highlight moments, and had different highlights in various aspects.

The writing style of this work is excellent, concise and full of tension, and the flowing narrative style makes people immersed in it, as if being pulled forward by an invisible force. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs, full of unexpected turns, and every chapter is full of surprises. It is addictive to read, and humor and suspense coexist. The character creation is very complete. Whether it is the growth process of the protagonist or the unique charm of the supporting characters, each has its own personality and characteristics. Their stories make people empathize with them.

It's okay, the author has a lot of jokes, and the writing is quite interesting. The writing style is light and lively, which is good for passing the time. But it's more of a group portrait. The male protagonist is not very outstanding in the early stage, but the male protagonist's character is still very good and lovable. He is not weak, but just sentimental. The love line is not as emotional as Qing Yao's, and the two characters are similar. The male protagonist's love line develops a bit quickly. Without the ambiguous pull, there is a lot less interesting. The relationship is basically determined in the early stage. I prefer to watch the process. After the protagonists get together, It feels a little less interesting, and there are more plots about Qingyao in the early stage, so it seems that the male protagonist is not very outstanding and has no memory points. I can't even remember the name of the male protagonist when I write it now [facepalm] Now the emotional line between Qingyao and other male characters is more attractive. I'm sorry. I read in the comment section that the protagonist will have more scenes later on. I don't know what else to write. I quite like the writing style in the early stage. I like the brisk writing style. I hope that later I won't deliberately write cruelty to add to the plot. I don't like knives. I can pass the time now.

It's really good to watch, but when I saw the latest chapter, there was a force of heaven that was forcibly restoring their world line or changing some irreversible things for them, and our male protagonist Shou was a breakthrough point, I felt like it. Every character has a clear breakthrough, and every supporting character does not just exist for the protagonist, but exists because of its own cause and effect. They are not just geniuses, but I think in my eyes geniuses also have their own lives and problems that they cannot solve, and the male protagonist seems to be able to solve this problem. As for the plot, I feel it is quite good. I hope the author will not write the plot too fast or too slowly and write it according to his own will. I think this author's book should be on the list for a long time to come. I hope that the author will not burst out of updates suddenly, nor stop updating suddenly, but stay in his own state and present the most perfect work. And the above is my personal love for this work. I hope that all friends who read the review will be happy every day.

The protagonist is a true genius, super strong but also clear about love and hate. The description of the group portrait is also very touching. A group of proud people form a noisy family. Everyone is a person of flesh and blood, and each of their lives has escaped the tragic ending in the original book with the help of themselves and their companions.

This book is quite good, but there are really many scenes involving Qingyao. In fact, it took me a long time to write a review after watching it, even though it was a group portrait. But there are too many supporting characters. Many of them appear a few times and then stick to the point (personal feeling), so I didn't watch it later. I came to write a review because I saw that the ratings dropped a lot. I didn't mean to say it was not good to watch, but I felt a little uncomfortable watching it. The plot is well rounded, and every link is fastened. The emotional line is also quite comfortable. Also, I think if modern times are added, the plot feels messy for some reason. I personally can't remember it when I watch it. Plus there are so many characters (even though it's a group portrait), it's a bit like a male video? . I just feel like it's cool to be pretentious. . . But the plot is really novel. This is the first time I have seen this.

This book is really well written! Whether it is the world view or the plot line and emotional line, and the group portrait is Wenye, the lively scene of a group of people makes people's hearts warm [Admiration][Admiration][Admiration] This book is moderately sweet and makes me feel happy to read it. It's really good to read [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The title of the book lowers the grade of this book. It is really good. I originally read it with the mentality of giving it a try, but the more I read it, the more I became more and more engaged. The plot has many hilarious points and I still have more to say. Hurry and update [smile][adoration]

Very good looking, highly recommended! ! ! The cp and cb in it are very vivid and distinctive. Before, the direct disciples in it seemed like they didn't know each other, but later, after being influenced by it, they were like the same sect, and there were no big boundaries [shy]