Tomb Robbery: Snake Tangle

The writing is very good, but the characters are not very consistent with the original characters, such as the black blind man. Generally speaking, the black blind man will not take off his glasses easily. The description of the black blind man taking off his glasses to clean them can be modified. However, the writing is still very good. Some minor issues can be slightly modified. After the modification, I believe that the big book will be popular. Come on! The author greatly [sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart]

The author really writes very well. It's so touching, okay? It's completely a reopening story. With the original characters as the main theme, the newly added characters just add new vitality. It's great to be leading a new and different story, with the general outline of the story and the perfect synopsis coming back. The surrounding story is also very touching. Xiao Shen and Hei Ye's CP is really good. They are completely pulling each other and completely indulged in tolerance, like two cold snakes clinging to each other, entwining each other and giving each other warmth. And I really feel that Heixiazi fits the character of a snake. He is cold yet just right, with an inadvertent warmth, just like a snake turning its belly in front of you. The snake's tail wraps around your arm just like his eyes. It is sticky and wraps around you like a snake's temperament. Watching and following you all the time. The smile at the corner of his mouth was like the occasional snake bite, seemingly harmless but hiding a threat. The small subconscious movements you make when encountering danger are like a poisonous snake occasionally showing its teeth, threatening you. Make an effort to update!

What's going on? [Laughing] It's so hot. What did you add to the book? [Laughing] [laughing] It's very beautiful, darlings.

It feels very good. Although it is not a change like other articles and the author has written a new plot, it is really good and logical. I feel that the author's writing style is very good.

It's super, super nice. I really like this style of writing and it's also logical.

@DIed in the arms of the black blind man Come and take a look, this is very beautiful! [Adoration][Adoration]

After reading, there is only one word left: awesome!

So pretty! Love this style very much!

Come on, the author is great, very good-looking

It's so good that I can't describe it ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა

Wow, highly recommended. The protagonist is indifferent from the beginning to full of fireworks at the end. The author's storyline is very exciting and innovative. Highly recommended.

It's beautiful. It's the first time I'm so fascinated by a book.

Nice! ! ! It's really beautiful! ! ! ! !

This book is very nice

I feel sorry for Nan Xun [crying] [crying] but it's really beautiful (♥∀♥)

The nervous movements all the time look a bit funny

I like it, I like it, it's very to my liking (The author is great, when I draw a fanfic, can the protagonist wear ancient costumes)