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The writing is good, but Yunxiao's most powerful thing should be the way of space. Now that Chaos Nian's way of time and space is the most suitable for her, it's just a pity that she killed three corpses. It would be best if she can destroy the three corpses and go back to the path of Hunyuan! ! !

I really like Fairy Yunxiao in Senior Brother. This book is very good. Although the update is a bit slow, it is very good. Like Yunxiao.

The writing is very beautiful, I also like Yunxiao very much

Ahem, I mainly write daily articles about cultivating relationships. I feel that they are better than those that I just skipped over. I skip them at every turn. There is almost no reference to daily life. The emotional process is over in one or two chapters. I think it is the same as reading the catalog. There is no trace at all. The sense of immersion, but this article is very good. The description of the characters is very three-dimensional. The main reason is that it is too little and not satisfying. I hope the author can write more. He can publish more than a dozen chapters a day. The word count would be even better if he can write two to three million words. 😁😁️😁️ Such a good-looking novel must get full marks. If you can write more about daily life, it would be better to give Yunxiao more opportunities to appear in the later calamity. Other Honghuang simply expressed the relationship with Yunxiao and went through the motions. The whole story is just a plot. I hope this novel will not live up to expectations. Keep up the good work!

The writing style is delicate and the emotional description is very good. The 7.0 Points for this writing style are too low. I feel it is much better than many 8.5 Points. The characters are very lively and lively, which makes people want to watch more and more. I also like Yunxiao very much. I feel that she meets the image of the ideal woman in my mind. It means that the author should not stop updating, even if he only updates one chapter every two days, please don't stop. If you have something to stop, it is best to tell the readers. Daily pure love articles are really rare nowadays, so don't stop updating! I just feel that the plot of Yunxiao is still a little lacking. Most of the people come here because of Mu Yunxiao, and other human wars can be ignored.

No matter what, if you can intercept Yunxiao's glimmer of life, I will give it five stars. Follow-up, um, let's see, can I ask a question, why is there no fanfic of senior brother? Is it a copyright issue? [Thinking]

This star is for Fairy Yunxiao

How do you evaluate it? Wearing it is not soul wearing. Mortals the day after tomorrow eat the innate spiritual fruit for three years. They can compare to the sky with their feet. Saints cannot see through it. Honghuang Wen. Three years [laughing] Can you still read it? After eating it for 30 years or 300 years, does it mean that you will be able to follow your feet directly?

Okay, very good.

This book is very popular with me [laughing]

I hope the author can finish it with 2 million words. No matter how bad it is, it will have to be more than 1 million words @2. As long as you write a new book with the heroine Yunxiao in the future, I will definitely come back.

It's very charming, and it will last for a long time.

The emotional description is delicate, unlike some articles where you don't know why we are together at the beginning.

I feel good about myself. Anyway, I quite like watching it.

I think it looks good

Is this a fan of senior brother?

Come on, I support you [blowing kiss]

Super good-looking

I'm a native dog and I like to watch, [make faces] [make faces]

Very beautiful, I love it

I like it very much haha

I feel very good-looking, I have been in the sky for a long time

Very well written, come on, come on, come on

I think it's pretty good-looking. Why is the rating so low? [What][What][What]

The single female protagonist Yun Xiao, I think is still very good-looking

So far so good, but some punctuation is wrong

Not bad, keep working hard!

I like this book very much

Not bad, very pretty

Will the author write about Li Changshou in this book? Who is the fellow in this book? Besides the protagonist, are there other time-travelers?