Three Times***********

When I first started reading this book, I felt that the author was a novice and was not yet proficient in writing novels. But as he continued to write, he got better and better, and I really felt the changes. I wanted to quit halfway through, but luckily I kept reading, otherwise it would be a pity to miss it. This book is really great, very good-looking, and the characters are perfectly created. I really like it [Send my heart][Send my heart] I want to see how many hours I've been watching, I'm a little curious [thinking]

It looks good, but this linkage is really unpopular

Well... It doesn't require so much description of appearance.

It has a happy ending. My overall favorite is the middle part. In the early stage, there are lethal metaphors and descriptions of appearance, and useless parallelisms can be seen everywhere. I wanted to give up the article at one point. It is obvious that I am a new author. However, it got much better later on, especially in the World Championship. Big thumbs up for the choice of playing Japan's U17. It's hard to understand how the back-hill training in the original plot, which doesn't treat the players as human beings, goes on. It's really a pure tennis world. The emotional line is also very sweet in this section, but in the later stage, when the protagonist wants to avenge his mother The development of the plot is too tangled. He has powerful abilities but can't find his enemies. Until his enemies come and give him a knife, he is still helpless. Emmm... I can only say that this is a plot in a fanfic. If it happened In the criminal investigation novel, I gave up immediately, but then I kept lingering back and forth, and there must be some sense of ritual to punish the scumbag. I endured the craving for candy until the end, and found that it was all for the purpose of delivering a big knife at the end. . . I can only say that I am a little bit speechless. Fortunately, it has a happy ending in the end, but there is no need for such a plot. If you decide to write the front part, don't describe the protagonist so powerfully. Therefore, the most recommended part of the whole article is the middle part, which makes up for the regrets and has special development.

It's very Ness's writing, but if you look back and read it, there are still flaws. In fact, what I have always cared about is Yukimura's character. I always thought Yukimura should be gentle, ambitious, and occasionally a scheming teenager. The character of Yukimura here is a little too biased from what I know, but overall it is very Ness!

This is the first time I've seen these two anime combined. It's really good.

Come on, I wish Lihai University three consecutive championships.

I really look forward to seeing Aliya tutoring Kombu and Kombu crying in anger, and then Yukimura coming to help and retaliating silently from behind. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It looks great, but I don't know why it feels like AI expansion or writing?

It's a very nice novel that combines the Internet King and the kid I recommend. The setting is also very good, there are gods and the like, and the background design is good. I like Alya and Jingshi's mutual companionship and mutual redemption. The first cp book I finished reading was the master's novel. Always victorious in Hailida! ! ! O(＊＾▽＾＊)o♪

Super invincible and beautiful. The stars are ultimately in the hands of the Son of God. The stars are the salvation of the Son of God, but the Son of God is also the salvation of the stars. May you be happy forever! [Sending Hearts]

I haven't finished reading it yet. The author's writing style is not good but the subject matter is very interesting (it's not that the writing style is not good, it's just like the composition you wrote in school). If you are bored, you can choose to read it. You can also choose to read it when you are sleepy.

It's beautiful, please come on (ง•̀_•́)ง[Blow a kiss]

Very pretty, but the description of the appearance is a bit off 💋

The author has added more updates. It is really great to write about the planetary CP. The sprinkles are really sweet! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Sneak smile]

So pretty! So annoying! Reading three chapters in one day was so enjoyable Look forward to the arrival of the plot I recommended.

It's very interesting. The only drawback is that the author writes two chapters a day [I'm about to cry]

The king establishes the sea and is ever victorious. Yukimura's fine city is unparalleled in splendor.

Good looking, good luck to the author

I hope I can see the end one day, don't be fooled [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I like it, it looks good, it's cute

It looks good. I like it. I hope you won't give up [cry] [cry]

The plot is okay and the writing is not too immature. I like Li Haidai! That is, the last sentence of almost half of the paragraphs is "like..." "Like..." "Like..."

It's hard to comment because it's really beautiful.

It's really good-looking, please don't give up on Super Super Invincible Giant. I like it [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]

The author really loves what you wrote, it's so beautiful! ! !

It's really good to watch, the plot is super good, and the characters are well drawn.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Super pretty. There are also movies to watch

Very nice, I like Li Hai Da