The Dream Is Over!

The new book is a mystery: it is thrilling and brain-burning, full of suspense. Each copy is carefully designed. Please support me with bookshelf reviews! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Two chapters a day, with additional updates from time to time! [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] Whenever the clock strikes midnight, the resentful undead will be awakened and kill everything that spreads her name——[Supernatural Copy: School Tomb] In the bloody secret room, fresh organs were suspended in mid-air. Five men and three women were locked in iron cages and forced to participate in a gambling game. If you choose the right organ, you can survive - [Brain-burning copy: Killing Game] Subsequent copies are being made urgently. . . Everyone's support is the motivation for me to write. Don't leave, the excitement will continue. . . [Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention]

For me, the plot is pretty good, not scary, and occasionally funny. The points are deducted from the setting of the heroine Ye Yiyi (possibly). I also dislike the similar setting of Yu Nian'an in "The End of Ten Days" (although she is just a spiritual anchor). The emotional drama that exists in the memory of the male protagonist has no foreshadowing, and the male protagonist's deep love for the female protagonist will make people feel inexplicable and difficult to accept. Then Ye Niao Niao (the heroine's younger sister) and the male protagonist have been together again, and the seemingly non-existent ambiguity makes people feel uncomfortable. In comparison, I prefer the real Ye Niao Niao to the Ye Yiyi who only exists in the heart of the male protagonist. The parallel world plus conjoined twins is not enough to explain the settings where Ye Yiyi and Ye Niao Niao have almost identical personalities and preferences. If there is a parallel world, why are the male protagonists in the two worlds so different? (It is also possible that the settings will be added later)

The writing is quite good, the writing and plot are excellent, and the horror writing does have a scary feeling. However, the author seems to like to create some hints that are unique to the readers. For example, in the first copy, the female classmate has a weird skin color, but she turns into a ghost in the middle. In the second copy, the dog is scratched on the face by a cat, and the villain is a cat, but the protagonist does not care at all.

Surprise, I feel it is very well written. The section about Lin going to Ye Niaoniao's house and the section about Ye Niaoniao's house all show the same parts of Ye Niaoniao and Ye Yiyi, which is very suitable for my taste. The ghost dreams are also quite attractive, and the Mayan prophecy combined with reality also makes people feel more immersed. Personally, I feel that if the quality is maintained like this, it will be a 9.5. If the world view is bigger later, 9.5 Will be no problem. The author will also be very interactive with book friends. Come on, don't stop updating.

Okay, okay, it smells like Yu Nian'an, but I still hope it's a real person, after all, it's too fake. The author's writing is good, and the language rendering and reversal of the horror plot are good, but the description of the environment can be strengthened. The logic is very clear. As long as you keep updating the author, I will follow you. Although there are suggestions, I still hope you can stick to your own style and novel outline. Come on

It's very interesting, the story is novel and attractive [Like] [Admiration] The first dream was very scary, but after that I felt nothing at all [laughing awkwardly]

I feel that this book is similar to the series "The House", but it also has the flavor of "Before Falling into Eternal Night". Although it does not give me the surprise and unexpected conclusion of "The House", it is undeniable that the author's writing is a bit high, the plots are interlocking, and the results are confusing and addictive to read.

It's very well written, come on, the author [Like] [Like] [Like] The comment section has been talking about the plot and characters of Alien Beasts and Tokauri, but I think this book is unique in terms of the creations in the author's mind, come on ⛽

It's really so good. I've read The House three times. This book is my favorite out of The House and it's the one that suits my taste the most. It's really exciting and I like it. Please, author, please update it quickly. It's really not enough. I'm your loyal fan. The first thing I do when I come back from school every day is to open the novel and listen to your novel. It's really good.

I like this type of horror novel that is not brainless, intelligent and atmospheric. It's very exciting. It's so fun to watch. Please keep updating the author.

It's not bad. I just finished reading the first copy. It's really detailed. Fortunately, I read it carefully. There are really a lot of foreshadowings. I really think it's well written. It's not clichéd and it's quite brain-burning. I also like single girls very much, but why do I feel that the heroine has a little bit of leftover energy [smile][smile][smile] @

Both the writing and the content are super nice and exciting! Moreover, it is a new type of weird novel. After reading the three copies, the one that scares me the most is the first one, which really brings reality into it. Underneath every school is a mass grave, brutal murders, and missing corpses. These are all familiar, but they are connected together in the novel, and the environment and atmosphere are really scary. Open the first one. And the identity of the protagonist is really confusing. I have read all the chapters but I still feel that there is something hidden. By the way, I have also read another book by the author, which is also a supernatural genre. This one is also super good!

It's very interesting to watch. The main character's IQ is online, the plot is smooth, and the characters are very well drawn. It requires some thinking but not too much. It's comprehensible and not boring. The background is also relatively novel. It's one of the better novels I've ever read. I highly recommend it.

The writing style and details are all very good. The description of emotions is not too boring. Highly recommended by a ten-year-old bookworm. It can be said to be top-notch. Come on, author, don't make it unfinished.

Nice looking, updated soon. The male protagonist has a calm personality and a delicate mind. Currently, he mainly relies on his intelligence to pass the test. His abilities are not stable yet. I hope they can be strengthened. As for many comments saying that the male protagonist is just a backdrop, I think it is reasonable to remain cautious and silent when entering a strange world for the first time. In the early stage, the male protagonist did not master the ability and there was no show-off scene, but he was still the main force in clearing the level. Let me complain about the existence of the female protagonist. As a reader, I have never experienced the acquaintance of the male and female protagonists, and the female protagonist currently only exists in the male protagonist's "imagination", so I have no emotions for the female protagonist, and it is somewhat difficult to embody the protagonist's state of mind when dealing with related matters. From the current point of view, the existence of the heroine should be one of the biggest pits dug by the author, and there is a long way to go. I hope the existence of the female protagonist is not to create the male protagonist's mentality and only increase troubles. That gives me the feeling that "the female protagonist is just adding trouble". In other words, the female protagonist is the source of motivation for the male protagonist to move forward and challenge the strange dream, but this kind of "single female protagonist" lacking emotional foreshadowing feels inferior to the "no female protagonist" who aims to "liberate all mankind". Maybe I'm overthinking it, but the plot and writing are both good so far. I hope the author can reasonably arrange the appearance of the heroine in the future. Five-star support.

A very, very good book. It is absolutely terrifying, weird and mind-numbing. I have been a bookworm for more than 40 years. I have rarely seen such well-written articles on Tomato. The author may have a broad-minded, calm, calm and rational nature. There is no common male protagonist in the works of male authors who is invincible, unruly and extraordinary. The male protagonist is calm, rational and intelligent. He is already a leader. He is a good man in my heart hahahaha. I discovered this article too early and it is not enough.

The plot has ups and downs, and there are many unexpected things. For example, the clever dreamer thought that the host might be the black cat, Snowflake, but it turned out that the clever man had escaped long ago. There are many details that you won't notice if you don't read the follow-up carefully. For example, the hospital copy took away Xia Chen's mobile phone and sent a message to Chen Shengnan accordingly. I personally prefer Mao Qiyue's dungeons. Each dungeon is described so vividly, as if the dream hunting team is right in front of you.

It feels a bit like Ten Days End. The settings of the female protagonist and the male protagonist are very similar. The writing is good. Come on.

Overall, it's okay. It's an okay novel that I've read in the past half year since I finished The Conspiracy, especially School Tomb! This copy is definitely one of the top among horror and suspense novels. The killing game is okay, nothing outstanding. It feels okay because of the school tomb in front and the four people in the protagonist's dormitory who are there to sensationalize it, so it looks okay. As for Nagato Hospital... I haven't finished watching it yet, but the first part is a bit boring. It can't even compare to a killing game. I might as well get my roommates to stir things up again. I hope I can give you some surprises later on! But I really didn't expect this book to have a 9.0 Rating. Maybe it's because I couldn't get enough of the ordinary novels I read in Guishe. I'm looking back and evaluating

There is a hint of comedy in the spooky horror, and the combination is very harmonious without skipping the scene. The supporting characters are also designed with flesh and blood. There is hilarious brotherhood and amazing love here. If you want to watch a thriller, you can try it. The shortcomings are also quite obvious. It can be seen that the design of the protagonist's love line has some reference to Tokazu Yan. The same is true for individual disposable NPCs. There are too many labels on individual disposable NPCs, but they only appear once, which makes them appear abrupt and stereotyped. Of course, I personally think this is harmless.

Okay, this is a short play I watched and I found it and read the book. It's also a very good book. Many books are meaningless just by looking at their names. Every character is lifelike. [Blow kiss] Keep up the good work, author. I think the male protagonist is very real. I have loved someone for so many years. How can I just let it go? There are family and friends in another world. There must be shortcomings. I can only say that he is more flesh and blood than most.

I feel that it is well written. You can feel the tension in the novel. The author's description of the environment and characters is more vivid and three-dimensional. The special characteristics of the protagonist are also described in the book. However, I feel that the number of people in the special unit is not high compared with the importance of the country. It is unreasonable. After all, the scope of supernatural events in a country is very small. It may be that I have missed something. There are certain pitfalls. For example, the protagonist's embodiment is stronger in dreams, why is it not embodied? The box and the protagonist's abilities seem to be on a different level compared to others. A dream is useless in reality and can only be used in dreams. A concrete ability such as rules is different from other people's abilities. For example, others can become larger or transfer damage. They are all applied to oneself and then reflect the situation of others. However, after the protagonist is embodied, anyone can use it and can even replenish bullets without touching the gun. Overall, it looks good and the future is promising.

I finished reading it in one sitting. It was pretty good, and the writing was really good. I have read many novels of the same type, and this one by the author has the potential to become a hit. Come on!

The writing is very good, the plot is smooth, the setting is relatively novel, not too brain-burning, and the several reversals are very well done. The 400 chapters can be said to be a large volume. So far, no major poisonous points have been found in Chapter 69. Friends who like suspense and brain-burning can give it a try.

It's quite good. It makes readers want to keep reading. It sets up some suspense. The copy is also very good, especially the one with the clever one. It has a lot of twists and turns, has a scary part and a funny atmosphere. It's very good-looking and very strong, but it felt a little boring at the beginning. It's just me. Hahaha. It wasn't until later that I found that the protagonist was completely different in other people's memories. I suddenly wanted to watch it. It's very good. It also includes why his girlfriend disappeared, who is Bing Tilian, and who is Ye Hao Niao. It's very good-looking and very novel.

I saw that the rating of the comprehensive evaluation book should be above 9 points now, instead of 8.7. I looked through the comment area and found that the negative comments were either hasty or had no reason. I looked at the homepage of the one with no reason. They were all negative reviews without saying anything bad. It is difficult not to doubt the professional. Professional, the horror level is 4 out of 5 for me personally. The writing is also good. Compared with most authors in Tomato, they are very good. No matter the positive characters or the negative characters, there is no IQ below the line. If you like to read horror movies, then this is still worth reading.

It's good-looking, scary (? Although the description is indeed quite good in this aspect, but it feels okay, I am immune after watching too much anyway), it is also funny, and it also has reasoning parts, so it is quite watchable 😂😂

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! Every copy is so beautiful! ! ! Highly recommended! It's so great to see this kind of fairy! ! ! ! I hope it will be a single-female story. Although Yiyi has little presence in the first two hundred chapters, I still like this character very much! Every copy is very well written. The copy rating at the beginning of the article and the one-star copy are also very nice! !

It's great. It's the first time I've read this kind of subject. There's no nonsense and the plot isn't cliche. [Thinking] Can I update fifty chapters a day? [Thinking] The first two units are the best written, but the later ones feel a bit too lengthy.

The copy is pretty good, very satisfying. It's just that the protagonist group looks a bit weak. It's normal to be passive when facing ghosts and rules. Backed by GJ, they are passive in reality. They have super powers and weapons and are still passive when facing ordinary people. There is no need to deliberately weaken the protagonist and others to increase the difficulty. Take the latest dungeon for example. In this dungeon, the protagonist is completely passive and waits for passers-by to die to test the rules. He takes it one step at a time. Even if the NPC runs away, he doesn't do much to stop him. When he senses that the situation is getting out of control, he can use his gun to control the situation. Unlike the heroine's hospital dungeon, she can actively trick NPCs to determine the rules.