[Deep Sea] [Weird] [Survival] [Props]
When Ye Wu woke up, he found that he was already in an endless deep sea, and there was only a small shelter to protect him.
"The world is broken, welcome to the endless sea of confusion, where you will have unlimited possibilities, of course... Provided you survive!
I will give you some small help, thank you, little human beings. Finally, I wish you a happy life~~"
The world is shattered, and all mankind has fallen into a strange endless deep sea. The only thing that can protect them is the shelter they had at the beginning.
This is the endless sea of confusion, the cemetery of gods, the residence of great beings, and the crusher of the world.
So survive! Fall! Just struggle to survive! Until... Fall into madness, or become great!
Reader comments
It's pretty good. Overall, it's above average. The writing is a bit lacking, but the excitement and fast pace of the plot and the interesting settings of some of them make up for it.
At least the plot design and speed are quite satisfactory. In some places, the main character's motivations are not very reasonable and could be polished. There are also some operations that are a bit unintelligent. Reasonable factors, such as spiritual body erosion, can be added to promote the plot.
Finally, every plot is too extreme, which may make some readers uncomfortable. Moreover, the process is a bit vague, and there are too few details. There are 5 life and death crises in just over 30 chapters. There are too many, which will make readers who want to read a refreshing article uncomfortable. However, you can create a new sense of satisfaction by comparing with other survivors.
Also, if the resources that can be explored in the world bubble are not fully utilized, it may become a poison point. The author can mention it later. After entering, you can re-enter at any time, or you can mark the world bubble for later exploration.
The heroine's emotional line is not particularly rough. She can quickly skip the early emotional accumulation part through the twists and turns of the plot, and it will not appear stiff.
It can be regarded as supplementing the protagonist's IQ. Overall, it can be regarded as a boost, and the writing is not annoying. However, in the world bubble, the heroine's operations such as "revenge" and "hurt the protagonist" may also become poisonous points (after all, the life and death crisis, it feels that the sense of crisis is somewhat diluted, but it can also be emphasized that the behavior of the two is to release psychological pressure in other ways). It can be modified, add more reasonable factors, and describe some of the psychology of the male and female protagonists to supplement it.
I hope a single female protagonist is enough.
After all, the heroine is not so acceptable to some readers in this kind of subject matter. Too much will increase the discomfort. You can add it in the introduction. Otherwise, writing about the heroine in the early stage may make people mistakenly think that it is a harem novel.
I can watch it, the plot is okay, but the writing still has room for improvement. There are too many repeated words in many places, and the word order is wrong in some places. Reading the book has little impact, but listening to the book is a bit torture.
It's pretty good. Overall, it's above average. The writing is a bit lacking, but the excitement and fast pace of the plot and the interesting settings of some of them make up for it. At least the plot design and speed are quite satisfactory. In some places, the main character's motivations are not very reasonable and could be polished. There are also some operations that are a bit unintelligent. Reasonable factors, such as spiritual body erosion, can be added to promote the plot. Finally, every plot is too extreme, which may make some readers uncomfortable. Moreover, the process is a bit vague, and there are too few details. There are 5 life and death crises in just over 30 chapters. There are too many, which will make readers who want to read a refreshing article uncomfortable. However, you can create a new sense of satisfaction by comparing with other survivors. Also, if the resources that can be explored in the world bubble are not fully utilized, it may become a poison point. The author can mention it later. After entering, you can re-enter at any time, or you can mark the world bubble for later exploration. The heroine's emotional line is not particularly rough. She can quickly skip the early emotional accumulation part through the twists and turns of the plot, and it will not appear stiff. It can be regarded as supplementing the protagonist's IQ. Overall, it can be regarded as a boost, and the writing is not annoying. However, in the world bubble, the heroine's operations such as "revenge" and "hurt the protagonist" may also become poisonous points (after all, the life and death crisis, it feels that the sense of crisis is somewhat diluted, but it can also be emphasized that the behavior of the two is to release psychological pressure in other ways). It can be modified, add more reasonable factors, and describe some of the psychology of the male and female protagonists to supplement it. I hope a single female protagonist is enough. After all, the heroine is not so acceptable to some readers in this kind of subject matter. Too much will increase the discomfort. You can add it in the introduction. Otherwise, writing about the heroine in the early stage may make people mistakenly think that it is a harem novel.
I can watch it, the plot is okay, but the writing still has room for improvement. There are too many repeated words in many places, and the word order is wrong in some places. Reading the book has little impact, but listening to the book is a bit torture.