The Yan Yun Calamity: The People Are Silent, So the Hero Speaks for Them!

Give me 5 hearts. I wish this book will get better and better. It's okay to read it as a different kind of Yan Yun. After all, most people want to read Yan Yun to redeem regrets and happy grudges. The most important thing is the martial arts in it. The author's book is very good, but how can I say it, it's not great. Qinggong, and no sword energy, it will feel very strange when you look at the back. Also, I think there is a small poisonous point, which is the kiss on the red line. I just saw that, and I hope this book will get better and better. After all, not many people who write about Yan Yun can read it.

As a gamer, I rarely read novels. I was playing "Sixteen Tones of Yanyun" recently, and I wanted to find a few related novels to read. I looked through various platforms, but found that there were very few related novels. After reading one of them, I was really disappointed. I was looking forward to experiencing the game's grand world view and wonderful martial arts settings in the novel, but I was disappointed. It is different from what many players expected. The novel greatly weakens the kung fu in the game, but still has to build guns later. This setting is so speechless. With guns, even the most powerful masters can be defeated with one shot. If we are talking about martial arts, we might as well read ordinary time-travel historical novels. It's really better to keep the original martial arts settings, at least it still has a martial arts flavor. Also, don't talk about the small soldiers in the game, the officers and soldiers of the Song Dynasty, etc. In the game, they are a means to restrict players, but looking at reality, how is it possible that every soldier can know martial arts? This logic doesn't make sense at all. Let's talk about the plot of the red line. As a gamer, I just felt physically uncomfortable after watching it. Rather than writing it like this, it is better not to save the red line. If the author writes some novel and interesting CP, such as the protagonist and Uncle Jiang, or Aunt Han, a gamer like me who just wants to have fun will not say anything, but he wrote such an uncomfortable plot. Overall, this novel really does not meet the expectations of gamers. I hope to see more exciting fan fiction that is more in line with the game setting in the future.

It is originally a game world, but you have weakened his martial arts. Most people are here for Yanyun Sixteenth Sheng. It turns out that you are just trying to hide it. I might as well go and see other games. At least they are written according to the game plot. There are a lot of little poisons. You have made guns. How many guns can these masters withstand? And you said it is closer to reality. If that is closer to reality, how can the officers and soldiers of the Song Dynasty and the Liao Kingdom all know martial arts? This is originally a setting of the game planning.

What a book, what a book. The writing is top-notch, the story is chilling, and there are lots of typos. It deserves to be a book written by me. That's right, I wrote this comment myself. Hey, I'm very happy 😘

Is the protagonist male or female? The writing is so messy, jumping around a lot

The Sixteen Tones of Smoke is one of the best fanfics. The plot is reasonable, the plot development is logical, and the story structure also fits the game. It's just that there are too few updates. I'll give you a few, 500 chapters in three days [get it]

It's so beautiful, it's one of the better ones among Yan Yun's novels.

I like this setting, but when will the relationship be finalized?

It looks good, I recommend everyone to watch it ^ω^