A top scholar who seems aloof but is actually a scheming flirt x a wealthy female merchant who seems worldly but is actually slow on the uptake
[Marriage First, Love Later + Mutual Crushes + Two Strong Leads + Devoted to Each Other + Mutual Healing + Lighthearted Comedy]
Don’t throw away that frail, miserable, skinny little live-in husband you just married. Give him some time to grow, and he’ll turn into a handsome, fair-skinned dreamboat.
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“Yan Baian?!”
The cold wind swept up fine snow, which settled on the boy’s temple. His gaunt, bony figure from their first meeting was gone, replaced by broad shoulders, a narrow waist, long straight legs, and a back as upright as a pine, tall and slender as green bamboo in spring.
His ink-black hair flowed like satin, loosely pinned up with a single peachwood hairpin. A few loose strands fell against his pale neck, making his skin look like jade.
His face was even more breathtaking, impossible to look away from. His sharp brows swept toward his temples, framing narrow, deep black eyes. His high, resolute nose gave his face a captivating air, caught between boyhood and manhood.
His thin lips, usually pressed together in silence, looked a little pale, perhaps because the night was so cold.
Suddenly, the boy’s lips parted. His clear, distant voice carried on the cold wind to her ears.
“Mm.”
“You’re Yan Baian!!!” Wu Leyun cried, raising her voice in disbelief, nearly breaking into a squeak.
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The male lead is great at studying and housework. The perfect live-in husband! My heroine deserves to be happy!
P.S. I’ve always struggled with romance, but I’ve made huge progress this time. Come enjoy something sweet and have a laugh!
Don’t worry about the writing, it’s definitely not amateurish. Feel free to offer corrections, just be gentle. I’ll keep working to improve!
It's really super good-looking. Reading books and articles focuses on finding a chance, and then I was lucky 😳, so I met him. Thanks to the delicate author for allowing me to taste fine chaff. This is what I want, which has a long history, is warm and delicate, refreshing when you smell it, fragrant when you drink it, comfortable and joyful 😘 There are a few comments here. The transition between sections can be more vivid, and there is room for improvement. For example, the transition between the heroine losing weight and the male and female protagonist confirming their feelings is not very good. First, because the practical problems are not proportional to the efforts. It was foreshadowed in the beginning that the heroine is fat, and this point of transformation should be written out in the later stage. No I should have written about eating whole grains and skipping rope in two months and losing weight in one sentence. Secondly, because of my pure view of love, I kissed each other, had a heart-to-heart talk, and after reading a chapter, the two of them were together. It's just that both sides lacked determination and attitude. (Although there are some psychological activities of the male and female protagonists) It reads strangely sloppy. Come on! I'm looking forward to your article and subsequent discoveries [sending my heart]
It's almost equal, and it's pretty good. It's the first time I've read this kind of article. The male protagonist is a son-in-law, the female protagonist is a businessman, and the male protagonist is a student who will probably become an official in the future. At first I was a little afraid to keep describing the scenes of the heroine losing weight, but then I found out that it was okay, just a few sentences, and then the time jumped very quickly. It felt like there were not many chapters, and the heroine successfully lost weight. Then, after the heroine realized her feelings for the hero, she was seduced by the beauty, so she kissed him and confirmed the relationship. There was no complicated way. I just didn't know when I could tell the story between the hero and the princess. I don't believe in Bai Yueguang. I hope the hero and heroine can get along with Meimei. Chapter 89 makes it clear
Good-looking 😳 This rating is outrageous Anyway, they kissed each other to confirm their relationship without any ink stains. It felt so good, so good [licking the screen] If I don't express my opinions on what many people in the book think they are more worthy of the male protagonist than the female protagonist and then say and do things, I can't think very well while listening to the book and playing mini-games. So if Pure Sweetness is not sweet, don't blame me. I read this book after such a long time and I can't remember all the previous parts 😄 The finale... Sigh:-(The chapter ends with the sentence "I miss you" and then the extra chapter is not finished yet. But it doesn't matter! No matter how you say it, it's not even close to 6:00. The ending is barely acceptable. If the side story is not finished, it's not finished yet. It's already a side story. 🥺 High score, high score, high score. Come from all directions [code hold] [code hold] [code hold]
It is full of human touch, and the author is very suitable for writing about daily life. It is beautiful and beautiful, and the characters are very vivid, so it is inevitable that each character has his or her own shortcomings. The two protagonists also have some shortcomings due to their experiences and cannot speak too straightforwardly. If I want to talk about the shortcomings, it is that it is too short, and it just feels very urgent. The heroine's career is actually very suitable to be written in detail
Very nice! I like Little Sweetheart very much~ The plot is not too exciting and it is a heart-warming short story! The heroine is strong and strong like an evergreen tree that grows toward the sun, while the hero is like a bamboo in the spring rain, hahahaha, delicate.
I rarely write book reviews, but this one is really good. I didn't pay attention to its score at first. After I finished reading it, I found out that it only had a score of 6.6. The male and female protagonists really have a long history, each with their own thoughts. The only drawback may be that the relationship between the male protagonist and the princess is explained a little late. The most outstanding feature is that the heroine is well portrayed. She says everything directly without beating around the bush. Finally, I look forward to the author's extra chapter
This article has won my heart. I would like to give you a five-star rating here. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I hope the author will keep the rhythm and not be too outrageous in the next creation🎼Dismissal😎
Nice! The author's writing is very comfortable and interesting. It's a short story about family life. The male and female protagonists are also very motivated and comfortable to get along with. Although it doesn't seem to have any thrilling content at the moment, it is quite warm. The interaction, including the protagonist's personality, is quite good, and there are also laughs. This is the most enjoyable book I have read recently. The number of words is not very large yet. I will come back to read it if I save more.
The author's writing is good, the male and female protagonists are good, everything is good, author, come on and look forward to you 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Now that I see it, I feel that the overall story is pretty good. The heroine is very business-minded and has a very good personality. She treats the male protagonist wholeheartedly👍. The male protagonist is the official status of the main palace. Hehe, little green tea😚. There were misunderstandings in the middle and they were quickly resolved. I love seeing this kind of female protagonist make money to support the family and the male protagonist is as beautiful as a flower. Thank you to the author for your hard work! Looking forward to the follow-up🥰🥰🥰