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The plot is good, the rest is okay, but there is a problem with Taixu Sword Jue. Even if the realm is used, there should be the realm of Xin Yun, and there should not be any introduction. After all, there is no such thing as entry in the four Yun of Taixu.

Let me give myself four stars first. [Working on drafting] After all, the author also thinks his writing is a bit bad [I'm about to cry] There will be a turning point here in Gusu City, (only in this way can you become your true [true self], right? Don't cry, didn't I say that, I will always be by your side... I give this crystal flower to you, I hope the captain can always remember me♪~) Don't cry ♪~ Captain, keep going, I will wait for you at the end of the road ♪~ If you miss me, just look at this crystal flower♪~I will not allow others to sacrifice for me♪, after all, I am the Herrscher of Men♪~ I hope that one day, the captain can live happily even without me♪~ Captain, don't cry, this is not a strong boy♪~ We are only separated temporarily, one day we will meet again♪~ No, Ellie! ! ! It's okay, Captain, you must be strong, after all, you are Captain Hyperion♪~ Well, Captain, I can only accompany you till here, and you need to walk the rest of the way on your own♪~After all, this is not your ending♪~ Ellie, I will find you! At this moment, only the crystal flower in Chen Fan's hand exudes a faint light, but... Everything is irreversible... [Cry] [cry] [cry] [almost cry] [almost cry] [almost cry]

The author is great, does he have multiple female protagonists? Tell me [eat melon]

I don't know why it's a bit uncomfortable to watch, but it's a good idea. Come on.

The writing is pretty good, but the thing that makes me uncomfortable is that the pace is too fast. I could slow down the pace appropriately. Add some daily life in it, and some plots can be written in more detail

Regardless of other things, if you are talking about Aili, you must give these five stars, as long as your character is not broken.

The subject matter is very good but the writing style is a bit poor. If the author continues to work hard, it will get better and better.

The plot is okay. After all, it's a new book and it's not too demanding. But I personally think it's boring and doesn't have much excitement. If you like Aili, you can read it.

It's so good. I loved watching it and I was full of it right away.

It's a very good experience. Except that the author's writing style is not very good and he didn't write out some important details, it's pretty good.

Well, it's not bad. To be honest, I've always wanted to read this kind of article. The only drawback may be that the author's update time is uncertain and unstable, but the author must have big things he wants to do. Understand, understand, huh huh♪

Can the author write that the protagonist uses a 13-year-old weapon, such as Ellie's bow? There is no need to force it. Come on, the author has accumulated a lot of experience.

It's good looking and the author is also very nice.

The story is a good one, but it's too rushed, and there are too few descriptions of other people. You could describe more of other people's actions, expressions, voices, etc. Most of the time, you only know how the plot develops because you've seen it, so you still need to write it in more detail.

Come on＾0＾~The author writes very well~

My evaluation is pretty good Very to my liking

It looks good, good luck to the author

Alicia, the eternal God! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Well written, great author.

It felt good, but it was too fast.

It's well written, but a little too fast.

This is the best Beng 3 + God-killing novel I have ever read.

If you dare to stop updating, give it a try

I hope the author will keep up the good work! [Laughing][laughing evilly]

A very good fanfic

Lovely Alicia

Add oil to cook, the writing is good

It looks good, but the content is too fast

It's very nice, but I want to send you the knife.

Very nice and the author is very nice