[No system + non-Madonna + multiple heroines + soft rice but hard food]
Immortal, mysterious and mysterious. In this world, even older children can cultivate immortality, but Mo Lin cannot. He has traveled through 18 years and lived on a soft diet for more than ten years. There is the peerless empress who is powerful in the world, the unpredictable master of the Tianji Pavilion, the saint of the devil temple who charms all living beings...
These women had an irreversible entanglement with Mo Lin...
Mo Lin said: Cultivation is the right way, and I am really not willing to eat soft rice!
Reader comments
I know that the author wanted to write a refreshing novel, but the ups and downs of the plot were too fast and too big, the refreshing part was too long and exaggerated, and the emotional scenes were also written very abruptly. It can be seen that the author's writing style and knowledge are adequate, but the plot needs to be improved. The author has wild and unconstrained ideas, and there are many settings in the article. However, it feels like they were written rigidly just for the sake of making the article enjoyable. It is a fly in the ointment.
I know that the author wanted to write a refreshing novel, but the ups and downs of the plot were too fast and too big, the refreshing part was too long and exaggerated, and the emotional scenes were also written very abruptly. It can be seen that the author's writing style and knowledge are adequate, but the plot needs to be improved. The author has wild and unconstrained ideas, and there are many settings in the article. However, it feels like they were written rigidly just for the sake of making the article enjoyable. It is a fly in the ointment.
It looks good, the protagonist is calm enough