I Don't Want to Be a Pet If I Turn into a Fox Demon

Five stars, not much to say, the plot is okay, very interesting, the format and writing style are quite comfortable, I have to say something, the contradictions are a bit far-fetched, such as the part about solving the demon guide, just cancel the cultivation without explanation, and then develop the subsequent plot. To be honest, it is abrupt, after all, it is just before It's lenient to write about two people's confession. Although the relationship is unstable due to Ye's uneasy psychology in the middle, and in this world view plus Ye's character, the character's attitude changes instantly due to the damage of cultivation. It seems very reasonable, but the two of them revealed their hearts after all. If it changes in an instant, what will happen next? The confession of his heart feels like a joke, and it is a bit unbearable. I can write more psychological descriptions of the night after my cultivation is broken. From the disappointment and disbelief at the beginning, and then gradually to despair in getting along with Xue, during this period, I can let Xue continue to do nothing but act without explanation. Because this not only enriches the characters but also deepens the reader's impression of the conflicting reasons for the relationship between the two. In the end, it becomes dark, and later hurts Xue and asks for a sword, resulting in a loss of soul and so on. Anyway, with such an appropriate emotional transition, it can be said to be a perfect work. In terms of character design, in fact, this contradiction is well written, but if I look at it emotionally, I wish it was more delicate. Friends who read this comment, the track of this book is very interesting, the plot feels like chasing your wife in the crematorium, and it has unique features. It is worth appreciating. I hope the works will get better and better Ah, why don't you say more?

I just finished reading the content of the 5-18 update and would like to give a quick review. [Eat melon] The "sexual transformation", "yandere", and "wife chasing crematorium" labels in the introduction are honestly very attractive to me. I have seen too many traditional stickers and sweets, but I want to see something else. The combination of meat and vegetables is also very good. There is not much to say, so let's comment one by one. [Exploration] 1. There is insufficient in-depth exploration of the basic gender transition of Baiwen. The gender recognition of the protagonist Tu Shanxue, the little fox, is simplified into a routine transition, resulting in the setting becoming more and more novel. The article with two female protagonists repeatedly describes other supporting characters. This is not what readers want to see. If I really want to read this, why don't I read other articles with multiple CP tags? ? ? [What] 2. In the middle and later stages, it fell into a cyclical narrative of "punishment-soft-hearted-re-punishment". It lacked long-term foreshadowing and expansion of the world view, and the work had poor coherence. Although this fast-paced rhythm adapts to the algorithm recommendation mechanism, it sacrifices the character's growth arc and exposes the typical shortcomings of the "hundred chapter dilemma". [Cover face] 3. The image of the yandere heroine Ye Wanqing presents a sense of division: there are many forced turns (do you want to use the excuse of magic cultivation as an excuse for a whole book), and lacks logical self-consistency. The gender identity anxiety of the protagonist Tu Shanxue, the little fox, has been reduced to a labeling tool, and has been reduced to a symbol of "misery" and "pity". The characters lack depth and fail to evoke emotional resonance. [Understood] 4. The work packages controlling relationships as "sadomasochistic aesthetics" and avoids ethical reflection on power inequality (for example, Ye Wanqing's forced nurturing behavior did not explore the root of its psychological distortion). Compared with other veteran yandere novels, Tu Shanxue's Little Fox is more focused on traffic-oriented sensory stimulation and lacks thinking in its depiction of yandere. Although this strategy can attract traffic in the short term, it cannot hide the empty value. [Thinking] If the novel is full of 5 chapters, I would only give it to 3, but with the free Tomato novel, I can give it to 4. I am still looking forward to the subsequent "Wife Chasing Crematorium", and I also hope that there will be more astringent details (just kidding, but I don't recommend reading it after writing it privately and sending it to me) and the psychology of the two heroines, and the number of supporting roles should be reduced as much as possible (don't overdo the word count). [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's very good-looking. There's a bit of a knife in the front, but the more you read, the better it gets. It's very interesting. Other Lily novels get a bit boring after reading dozens of chapters. The dream section contains real feelings. Don't be "indistinguishable" from Li Huowang later.

This is a very delicately written book about abuse. Xue Ye's abuse is heart-wrenching, and the logic is very clear... It's a good book worth reading. Speaking of some personal shortcomings, Ye's abuse of Xue was too heavy. In my opinion, Xiaoxue did enough for Ye's love and repayment. The author handled the first reconciliation between the two very well, with abuse and warmth, coupled with their mutual feelings, very successful. But in contrast, in the middle and later stages of the article, Ye's abuse of Xiaoxue due to misunderstanding was too heavy... The writing was too unforgettable... This made me powerless, and I dare not make Xiaoxue worthy of forgiving Ye's bullying... Because the result of Ye's behavior was too evil, it was a full range of intimidation, betrayal and betrayal in body, mind and soul. Deception... In the later period, the intersection line between Ye and Xue was too far away and scattered (in conjunction with other plots), resulting in no progress in the relationship between the two protagonists after a hundred chapters. It felt like it was separated from the main plot, the article lost the protagonist, and I didn't know what to write... So it seemed very messy... The reading experience dropped seriously... In the end, I personally feel that no matter what Ye does, she is not worthy of being forgiven... Xiaoxue sacrificed from the beginning to the end, and in the end, if Xiaoxue has to experience the painful "letting go" of the world, then I feel that it is just a book about abusing Xiaoxue... She is too painful... And if Xue Ye wants to become a couple, this is a denial of Xiaoxue's previous injuries, negating nearly 300 chapters so far... The author's unforgettable writing of Night's Revenge is really difficult to balance and forgive... It is also difficult for me to accept at the moment...

This book is very interesting. Part of the evil point is really just to select the audience, but it suits my taste🤓. Some seemingly abstract and outrageous operations can be rounded off by the author. I think the contradiction between the two is caused by the lack of opportunities for face-to-face communication. Obviously the author's big hand will not give the opportunity so easily. The torture of the young couple will continue for a long time. Also, the author is very active, and the comments are like [Send heart]

Well, in my personal opinion, the plot and character settings in the early and middle stages are well written. Ye's morbidity, conflicting psychology and the process of gradually growing love are well written. Tu Shanxue's rebellious psychology is also well written. There is no criticism. At the later stage of the current update progress, it can be said that the poisonous points have emerged. First, the part where Tu Shanxue helps Ye recover his cultivation is no different from a mute. It seems that the author is using the knife for the sake of the cat clan. I personally feel that it is a bit inexplicable (if I didn't understand it, it's my problem and has nothing to do with the author) and then I try to break through the dream of Jin Dan in the later period. It is probably the foreshadowing of the author. I hope it will have a big effect in the later period. Anyway, I hope the author will fill it in if it is a trap. Don't end it hastily with some Lily articles. At present, this book can still be entered into the trap and read for a long time. I hope it will not end up being a bad project. I will give it a 4⭐

First of all, it is well written. As long as you can accept the rhythm of advancing the narrative through "misunderstandings", this book will be quite good. Most of the plot advancement in this article relies on "misunderstanding" and "emotion overriding reason". To put it bluntly, it means that both parties can reconcile after breaking things apart and talking about them, but they are unable to explain them due to various reasons, which ultimately leads to the situation getting worse and worse. Approximately "the intention is good, the execution is bad" It's okay to advance this kind of narrative once or twice, but if you rely on this method to develop the plot throughout the whole story, it's easy to cause negative feedback that leads to viewer fatigue, or even "the character's mood has not grown." In addition, this book likes to give each character Lalang a voice. Xiao Qi and a certain saint, someone from the Hehuan Sect and the little fox who ran away from home, the fox disciple and the pink fox who couldn't catch any fish. It seems that every character must be assigned a destination and sewn up for them. When the emotional disputes of the main characters rely on the more difficult narrative method of "misunderstanding" to advance, the reader's mentality will tend to be anxious about "when will this shit be explained clearly?" At this time, the characterization and shaping of the secondary characters are difficult to watch. To put it bluntly, I don't care. I would rather focus the narrative on the main emotional drama and advance the emotional line. But that doesn't mean that the secondary characters are useless. Xiao Qi wants to introduce the essence of the Demonic Skill as a trump card, and the fox who runs away from home wants to tie up the Hehuan Sect. The portrayal and appearance of these characters are actually meaningful, but when they are mixed into the main emotional line that is pulled and dominated by a large number of emotions, they will appear very ignorant. "I came here to see these two lunatics dragging and torturing each other, you fox girls, please don't get in my way!" As long as these little foxes can help, even if it is just a casual reminder or two, the protagonists' mood will hesitate and seem to improve. Even if you hypnotize yourself after a few sentences and firmly believe that "No, it's definitely not what she said, it must be the night/snow that ruined me", the reader's emotions can be expressed to a certain extent. As for now, reading is really stressful. The narrative has been foreshadowing the sword spirit pattern and purple energy. It has been repeated many times but there has been no progress and it seems confusing and unclear. The suffocating feeling like a python is wrapped around it.

In addition to being a bit poisonous and a classic plot, this book is pretty good, Hao Kang, and the best before chapter 70. Starting from the plot where the protagonist breaks through the golden elixir, the rest of the plot is a bit boring [thinking], what should I say, the rest of the plot can be guessed (probably not) [full], this book still has an audience. Around chapters 5 and 60, the audience for this book should be all selected (personal feeling, don't criticize) Keep up the good work, author, and look forward to your next book [Like]

It's a very good book. Here's a suggestion for future book friends. The actual knife may not hurt, but it will be very uncomfortable😣😣😣There's nothing to say about the foreshadowing, it's all handled super well👍👍👍 When I first started reading it, I thought this might be an ordinary novel with two heroines, a bit sadistic at the beginning and sweet at the end✨✨✨. Halfway through, I felt that this novel might be different from other two heroines - it was a novel with two heroines. Half knife, half candy🌝🌝🌝It wasn't until the last two chapters that I realized that I was wrong, completely wrong🌚🌚🌚The real book is just like a knife with honey on the tip. Only the last two chapters are truly perfect and sweet😭😭😭 (Author of Little Fox Girl, please 🙏🙏🙏 in addition to updating the new book, please post a few more sweet and greasy extra chapters for Xue Ye🙃🙃🙃)

It is a very good novel. The more I read, the more I became obsessed with it. At the beginning, I was attracted by Ye Wanqing's attitude towards Tu Shanxue (maybe he has a little bit of a masochistic hobby?). Later, Tu Shanxue's two runs away are still unforgettable to me, and I also realized Tu Shanxue's position in Ye Wanqing's heart. At the same time, Tu Shanxue Xue gradually developed some feelings for Ye Wanqing. (For example: at the beginning, she was constantly tortured with demonic energy and imprisoned in a cage, and she was also treated carefully in building a training room, etc.) It has reached Chapter 97. Judging from the current situation, Tu Shanxue and Ye Wanqing had a love-hate attitude towards each other at Chapter 97. The plot is not particularly good, although sometimes the character is a bit weird, and the characters are clearly created, especially the two heroines, Ye Wanqing and Tu Shanxue, whose IQs were online at critical moments, and I fell in love with them deeply! ! !

The first few chapters are also very abstract. You can skip them if you don't like them, but the author said they were for the sake of traffic [laughing crookedly]. I think the modern part inserted in the middle is pretty good, but it's a little messy. But after reading it all and sorting it out, it's actually quite good. May it become more and more popular

Hey, why did you lose points? The plot is quite interesting and doesn't require much thinking. It is suitable for people who feel weird and happy after being threatened by a specific group of people. The feeling of fear and excitement caused by being threatened is very XX, very exciting and exciting. The knife is delicious [laughing][laughing evilly]

The writing is quite good, the story line is relatively clear, and the character creation has not fallen behind. I have a few suggestions to see if they will help () The first one is about the characterization of the second female lead. On the one hand, it shows the yandere side, but on the other hand, her "violence" is deliberately amplified, which seems slightly biased. I feel that the yandere in my impression is the kind of coercion that hides a knife in a smile, rather than directly attacking her () There is also the portrayal of Tu Shanxue, who asked to talk about it when he was just resurrected... I don't think a fox who has just been so abused would have such an idea of praying for equality, especially if it was brought up directly, the plot here feels a bit weird. Most of the rest are very good, and I look forward to more improvements in the worldview. I hope the author can finish the whole article and I will follow it to the end

I like it very much. The author's writing is very good, but there are many poisonous points later. The relationship between Ye Xue is too rigid, and it would make people feel far-fetched if they want to whitewash it. However, I hope the author will get better and better (the above only represents my personal opinion)

It's my type, 1000% positive Although I know it is required by the plot, I still feel curious every time I see the realm dropped to the first level of foundation building. Sure enough, there are only zero and countless times of using Tianmo Yin. I'm curious, what would happen if I used the Demon Guide again at the first level of foundation building?

On the whole, the plot does not conflict with the relationship between the characters. It has an emotional line that changes with the development of the story. It is not written back and forth because of the personal relationship between the two protagonists. It is still very good. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. I also think the author gave the protagonist the surname Tushan as a follow-up supplement. The foreshadowing of the family background is also quite interesting. It doesn't feel inconsistent. The protagonist's family is also described as "like a human being". Others either extremely belittle the protagonist or praise the protagonist without thinking, which gave me the illusion of reading a refreshing article. The author did a good job in this regard. I like it. Finally, I wish this book will become more and more popular, and I wish the author good health every day.

It feels very much like a dream I had once. It is very real and the knife is moderately sharp. The problem is that the knife plays the main role in the relationship between the heroines and there is a slight discomfort. (Because it is not as painful as "The Pain of the Night of Genocide", it is a tangible pain. I hope that the misunderstanding will be resolved later.

It's good to read. The author has updated it a lot. This book is a big improvement over the previous one. I feel that if this pace continues, this book will become popular, so I will give it five stars to support it.

It's okay. It feels similar to other sex-changing genres. It's pretty good, I think.

It's really good to watch. It's already 2 o'clock now. I stayed up late to finish it. It's 8 a. M. Tomorrow, so I can go to bed [please update] [please update] Especially the part in the world of mortals was so sweet. When I returned to the present world and had a happy dream with my parents, it was the first time the little fox felt warmth. But fortunately, after returning home, Ye Wan also began to treat her relationship with the little fox formally, and there was a prelude to sending sweets [send heart] [send heart] In short, in my case, the author writes very well, come on! ! Support!

This is the second particularly good book I have read since reading Xiao Zhao. It is really well written and very realistic. It shows both modern society and the ancient law of the weak and the strong. It is worth reading! !

The writing is good. Although it is sadistic on the whole, it is not very aggrieved. The protagonist has her own bottom line. There is no popular trend of cruel female subjugation and submissiveness. The female protagonist is the typical female protagonist who is transformed into a heroine. She is moved by herself and is good, just like the boss of female videos. She seems to be giving but is actually just for the sake of it. In order to understand my own emotional value, I really hope to take revenge like in Chun Baibe's book "The Empress of Wind has been planning for a long time, and the cold emperor is too sexy" and finally go back and find her parents and break up, but it seems like he... I also hope that the protagonist can attack me. I don't understand why the protagonist always takes the blame.

It's beautiful. Love to read more! Please give me more authors [crying] [crying] Don't force me to beg you [crying] [crying]

After reading about ten chapters, I only remember the cp of the two female protagonists, the stagflation female lunatic and the mute Naitai Wang [face covering]

The plot is rich. Those touching scenes feel almost the same as what they were told.

Ahem, first of all, the introduction is very real. You will know it after reading it. It is full of abstractions and the plots are more outrageous than the last. Then, there is no feeling of abuse at all. I only feel that the story is extremely abstract. The author is also very good at naming. Moreover, the author listens to advice and really adopts any suggestions.

After reading it, let's summarize. The writing was good at the beginning, with bright spots, and it attracted many people to come in and read it. However, because of the good data, the author became distracted and started to let himself go, which led to problems in the middle of the plot. A group of people quit, and the author was scolded. Later, he tried his best to make up for it. Fortunately, Yuan came back and ended smoothly (this is still good, at least there are no interruptions). I hope the author can learn from this and write a better next book. [Love]

It's a really sad story. It's really hard to stop reading after halfway through, because the middle part is so mindless and suffocating that the plot and the emotions of the characters are so intense. But if you don't want to stop in this withering, then endure the pain and continue. You will see multiple timelines, an increasingly larger worldview, and more reasonable explanations for everything. From the struggle of the little people to the sublimation, it naturally transitions to the big world view, which feels like the end of the world. The final ending ends with a slight smile. Maybe there is a big difference in writing style before and after, because the author's writing spans a large time line, and there may be reasons for his growth. I look forward to Sister Sishui's better works, which can provide the whole book with a more reasonable logic and style of writing or the focus of the narrative. Don't be too arbitrary. Whatever comes to mind at a certain period of time, just write whatever you like. But this must be a necessary foundation for a good author to break through. In any case, I hope Sister Sishui can become a better version of herself! Of course, if there are better works to come out, I will definitely come and support them!

It looks good, and it tastes sweet for a while. To describe it, it turns into powder for a while, and then becomes sticky with sweet water. I feel uncomfortable every time I get hit by the knife. But there was a scene where after the spiritual root was destroyed, why neither side asked and the other didn't tell me the reason. It made my head hurt. My experience: Hey hey hey hey, the sweet article is good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Ah, there is a knife, ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah. Oh sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet sweet Isn't it already like this, why do you still want to compensate her? So interesting If she can still be forgiven, this is her👍 (Go back and read the article)

It's good to watch! It's good to watch! More! More! More! I want to save more and watch it again, but I feel uncomfortable if I don't watch it for a day!