Magic Highway Survival, I Am a Closed Beta Player

The subject matter is very interesting, and I feel that the content can be enriched. New plots can be added in many places (several college divisions; the relationship between various races; not mentioned by the 100 players in the closed beta) There is too little introduction to other races, and dwarves and mermaids are not mentioned at all; The monster egg hasn't hatched yet; Aowu's deskmate, Fatty Black Dragon, has no follow-up,! It couldn't be that he is a monster egg, that would be even weirder. The origin of the little spider is only mentioned at the end, so why does the black dragon say that she is the master, and what does the black dragon's grandmother know? I don't think there's a big problem with the outline and setting. The main thing is that the content is too little. However, being able to code so many words is already very impressive, and the action is very strong.

Yes, this subject matter is quite interesting. I finished reading it in one afternoon, but at the end there are only a few chapters condensed in it, and there are still some pitfalls to be filled. But the front part is still pretty good to watch. There are no ambiguous plots, no scenes, and many male co-stars. The female co-stars in it also have highlights and they are all positive characters. Personally, I don't think it's a group portrait.

As the author said, it is very imaginative and novel. What I like most is the ending. The ending is very well written and I am very impressed by the ending. However, I feel that the ending is a bit not very good and feels a bit too hasty. To be honest, when the ending is approaching, I don't even think it is the ending. I just feel that the plot is a bit weird, because there is less writing about the survival of the heroine in the early stage. Logically speaking, I should write some more copies of this article, and then come up with some plots that can be connected and then connect to this ending. The plot and ending are very good. The only shortcoming in my personal opinion is that it can be connected to the ending when it is approaching, but it doesn't feel very good. From my inner thoughts, when it is approaching the ending, it is a relatively ordinary copy, but it just reaches that kind of particularly gorgeous ending, which is a little bit abrupt. Moreover, many things written in the storyline do not have perfect results. For example, I feel that I can write more copy for the missing parts. Instead of writing a friend who is crying, the heroine can be said to be his master, but the two of them have not recognized each other yet (roughly the same meaning). There is a little plot for them to get to know each other. I don't know what to say about the rest. One sentence is not complete. It's a bit confusing and lacks results. But after all, the author is a high school student, so he really doesn't have much time to write. The ending is rushed, but the ending is very imaginative and very good!

The author is very funny and the subject matter is very novel. I love it! And what about Yingying's role? ! ! ! Why is it gone? Let them see it quickly! Next time I download a copy, the author will give the children more gold coins!

It's just that the last picture at the end is a bit rushed, and it feels like the ending is not finished, or feels a little less complete. It would be good if it was incomplete, because I want to know what the final ending is like, rather than this open ending. Everything else is pretty good.

It's very interesting. The protagonist Jiang Xiaoke is the first girl who is very gentle and firm. The plot is smooth. The first volume has more orcs and elves, and the second volume is about the survival of all people. The micro group portrait is not very flat. The character arc is also good. I look forward to the follow-up plot. At present, Jiang Xiaoke has completed the insect tide battle and won the first place in the regional server. No ink, the plot is very exciting, please update soon, looking forward to recycling the foreshadowing! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's a very interesting article, the ideas are very novel, the protagonist is also great, not irritating, not overflowing with love, it really kills a large number of articles and protagonists who claim to be decisive in killing. This is a true person who doesn't talk much. Although he will be frightened, he will not hesitate or be irritating. I really love it. The combination of magic is quite interesting. I like it ~ Come on!

The first 40 chapters of the heroine belong to closed beta players, and the last 40 chapters start the official game. The little spider (little briquette) is really cute😊. The heroine discovered the secret of the mayor through the miner's notes. So, what will happen next...

It's true that the rating is not high. The world view was too grand at the beginning, but it is normal to have to cut it due to poor data. The world view setting was also explained at the end, but many foreshadowings were not taken back. This is true for new writers, and they still need to hone. The setting is really interesting. I feel like a very talented baby. Please give it a thumbs up and support it!

Still very nice! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Eat melon][Eat melon] Although there are a lot of pitfalls left. [Laughing evilly][eating melon][eating melon] But it's still pretty, pretty, pretty! ! ! ! It's just that the ending was too hasty and a bit provocative. . .

I haven't finished reading this article yet. I am currently at about 40 chapters. I feel that the world view of the protagonist, supporting characters and even passers-by is reflected. The author Baobao is really a very gentle person [cry] [cry] [cry] All characters have their own lovable characteristics (either positive or negative), but overall they are lawful good or chaotic good. Everyone has no intention of actively harming others. I think the world written by the author is so gentle and tolerant [cry] [cry] [cry] I like it very much.

I like the character of the protagonist very much, not a virgin, and acts decisively. Even after the closed beta, some events and rewards are not exactly the same when you restart, which is good. Now that the protagonist has obtained the nameplates of the Magicians Association and the mayor of the town, I wonder if there will be more of this part in future chapters. I'm really looking forward to how the author will write about the protagonist's evil black magician villain talent in the future.

Nice! It would be great if there were ten chapters every day! [Shy][shy][shy] Xiao Ke's character is not weak and he is very good at using his own advantages. The little spider is also very cute! The Aowu in the closed beta is also very good, and the dragon is so cute!

There are really a lot of pitfalls buried, such as what happened in the end of the war and the dragon in the dream. I hope the author can write a spin-off to bury the pitfalls a little after he is done.

I used to read it on another novel app under Douyin. After reading it, and after reading this piece of random thoughts, I realized that it was available on Tomato. However, it was also a pity because the ending was very rushed. Then, the subject matter was very novel. I really liked it when I read it.

It's really good, but the updates are too slow. Can you please update more @peekaboo please update 1000 chapters immediately, will you scare me to death? I found that interpersonal relationships are a bit messy. It would be better if I could write them clearly. It seems like they were suddenly cut off. I hope I can connect them.

The internal test is not saved.•᷄ࡇ•᷅

No poking, no poking, good looking

The author's worldview is actually very huge, and the unexpected ending is really regrettable and heart-wrenching. If only the author could write more, it would be a bit unsatisfactory.

The beginning is amazing, the sequel is weak, and the ending is unexpected. The author has a good attitude and summarizes the experience and lessons clearly. I give four stars and hope that the author will write better in the next book.

It looks good, I recommend it, the subject matter is my favorite type, as long as the author doesn't write it to pieces, that's fine.

It's a very novel subject matter. I read it because I was short of books. I thought it might not be very good at first, but after reading some of it, I found it very good. There is no intrigue among the characters. The heroine's IQ is also online and she can reason. I think it is a relatively high-quality book. After reading less than half of it, I couldn't wait to comment. You can see how good it is, hahahaha.

Very beautiful, very beautiful

Good looking The plot is very exciting

Except for the ending, which was a bit rushed, everything else was perfect

It was pretty good, but it ended too suddenly.

It's okay. Unlike other road survival games, this one has magical elements. Although it's not particularly exciting, it's okay!

Interesting setting, looking forward to the story behind!

The writing is very good, but it was written too hastily and lacks some of the plots that it should have. I hope the author can write another book if he has time later.

It's very beautiful, the setting is very interesting, I look forward to the completion! ! !