Become the Strongest in Yokohama with the System

Ahhhhhhhh! It's a really nice fanfic! The author must not run away! First of all, the heroine time travels from modern times, and this book is very different from other novels where the story is different! For example, to change Odasaku's death, others saved him in advance before several children died, and then allowed him to buy a house on the beach and take his children to write novels with peace of mind. But this article is different. She directly made Odasaku change the ending of the book he wanted to write, and turned it into a new starting point! The killer stopped killing and started writing articles based on happiness! ! ! And Zhongyuan Zhong also made him no longer be the loyal dog of Hong Kong Black. Before entering Hong Kong Black, he let go of the lamb responsibilities that did not belong to him, had more of his own thoughts, was not so calculated, and had the idea of ​​​​running towards freedom! This is what I want to see woo woo woo The interaction with Ranpo and Dazai is also very interesting. Author, you must continue writing! ! ! ! No one has to follow a predetermined trajectory, and no one is destined to die in order to shine. They are much better than those who say they want to break the will and rules of the world but fail to do anything. They are not awkward at all! It's really nice to take action when it's time to do it cleanly! ! ! There are not so many plots and tricks. There is nothing to do or not do. I just do it because I want to do it. This is good. By the way, when it comes to summarizing a novel, do you think it's bad if you don't follow your own ideas? So why not write your own or find the genre you want? There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. The author can have the imagination to come up with the setting and the logic to come up with it, so why should he be so harsh on a free novel?

Some of the plots and settings in it are very novel and look pretty good. The heroine's character is also quite good. I like this kind of confident person. Is the Death Scythe that the heroine saw at the beginning also the weapon she used when she was the previous leader? Will it be recognized if I use it later? The plot setting is pretty good

This protagonist is so cool, there is no other novel where the original character works as a nanny and works hard like a tool. I really like Odasaku's daily life as a father raising a baby.

It's super good-looking. The family relationship between the protagonist and Odasaku is very touching. Odasaku is naturally healed. The protagonist is lively and cute. The two of them are warm and warm, without too many entanglements to hide. The system has embarked on a bumpy road of writing papers, and the system is also afraid of writing papers, hahaha. Like the author👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Well, it looks good, but why doesn't anyone watch it? [Think]

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking (♥∀♥)

Why is there no rating? I have limited personal experience in all aspects, including the writing style and the way we interact with each other. Anyway, I think it is perfect. I loved the main character and their interactions, and I loved the character of the main character. The protagonist's system is also very good. Everything will be fine. I'm so anxious. How come such a beautiful novel is only read by so few people? Why haven't you rated it yet?

It looks good, but I just wanted to ask if there is any cp. I feel like I can get along with anyone [shy]

After reading 30 chapters, the author's imagination and ideas are quite top-notch, and the writing is relatively reasonable. However, it is obvious that the writing style is still a bit poor. Overall, it is very interesting.

It's well written ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧, and I enjoyed watching it. The protagonist is strong and unyielding, and it's beautiful and beautiful.'- ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-

The plot is good, the original characters don't have too many OOCs, the heroine's character is also very good and logical, the heroine's interaction with other people is also very cute, and the writing is very fresh and natural

It's okay, every time I don't want to watch it, something attractive will pop up. After reading nearly 200 chapters, I finally saw the announcement of the organization. I feel that I am still far away from the goal of the largest mafia. Depending on the progress, there is not much left after excluding the extra chapters.

The content is very interesting, and some memes are appropriately incorporated to make the article both funny and humorous. The characters are not OOC at all, and they are captured very well. The heroine Shuangwen is super good-looking

I really like the author's writing style

It's okay, there are some small flaws, but I can accept it

Wuwuwu, Dazai Osamu, you have no heart, Wuwuwuwuwu

The author writes well!

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking🤩

It's really beautiful hahaha, it's so big~~

I hope the author's book will be super nice^ω^

It's good to watch. I especially like the random scenes later in the story.

It's beautiful, the heroine is very special, I like [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Suddenly, I found that it was so unpopular

Ye Yan is unscrupulous, happy and willful in his life. If he doesn't care about his career in the first half, it will be fine. Anyway, he is happy, but the story will not work anymore. 'Ye' made me feel a little depressed, and I was jumping to watch it

It's so in line with my taste!

Beautifully written in big letters [sending heartfelt wishes]

Come on, author, look after you [laughing evilly][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][like][like][like][like][like]