Sexual Transformation: Don't Do It! Are You Saying That I Am Dating an Immortal Online?

I won't exaggerate too much. Strictly speaking, this is just an e-girlfriend development story under the guise of a cross-marriage. The focus is on reverse cultivation, which is different from the past. And to be honest, there is a certain classic core of a cross-marriage—mutual redemption, mutual growth, and mutual dependence. At first glance, it seems that I have talked about it but not mentioned it, but in fact, the genre and creation of novels are all completed through repeated exploration, reference, and transcendence. Good novels also need to be learned from, and bad novels are not necessarily completely bad. It is just that the composition and structure of their styles and the selection of types are very different, or they may bring certain differences in perception. Therefore, the appropriate style and appropriate creative themes will give the novel new energy and new look and feel, so I have no objection to this look and feel. Because if a person falls into the misunderstanding of reading, it is like watching too much of The Lost Marriage. Subconsciously, he has lost the awareness of new things, that is, the sense of excitement, exploration, and mystery. It is very satisfying to abandon the fixed thinking of the past and read from a new perspective a novel written in a new genre but with a generally good core. Finally, I don't want to emphasize too much. The writing style of the book is not much different from most other writings. However, what I hope is that the style and your genre will not collapse. Try to improve it according to the outline, such as interweaving the before and after consequences - the increase of the emotional line does not necessarily only refer to the favorability and the interest relationship between the two parties, but also the small and big things, different handling attitudes and close contact and thinking contact between the two parties. But no matter how bad you are, it will not be too bad, and the score will be at least 8 points or more. And don't leave it unfinished. If you decide to write it, please finish it, author. I don't think writing novels is a great profession, but a writer must be a great writer. No matter whether the works he writes are famous or not, or whether they are loved by everyone, at least he has a complete story in his writing, with a fully vivid character, or creature, to give us a three-dimensional sense and feeling. He is like a glorious god full of humanity, writing a chapter with his pen or fingers, come on!

It's nice to look at, but it feels like you didn't have any intention. Although it feels random, I prefer your first work, the feeling of playing with people's hearts.

Haas Haas, this is the first time I see this kind of article, so cool! I can't even press the corners of my mouth to suppress it [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I thought it was a bad ending and I didn't dare to watch it for a long time. Now that I've watched it, I feel it's a pity. It's hilarious and funny, so I watched it without thinking. It's still very interesting to watch. As for the follow-up, it ended so quickly. I cried to death.

Follow this pace and write longer, at least a million words. It's not enough.

There are more and more varieties of tomatoes😋😋

Why did this cover look so familiar? I, Huo Zhuo, am the designated heroine of a certain game with explosive clothes.

The problem is that updates are slow, one post is sent three times [OK] [face covering]

There are many poisonous points in this work, but the character setting of the protagonist doesn't have to deal with the life-and-death struggle to change back after turning into a girl. The ending is well written. I hope the author will work harder and write more excellent works. I'm looking forward to it.

(●—●)(づ ●─● )づ(●—●) Change of marriage, bitch-blooded, slightly cruel, best relative, slap in the face, revenge, double world, cultivating immortality

The first time I saw him being raised, it was totally against the grain! [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]

Very good looking, really good looking, highly recommended. Can you please update me more? I'm hungry. It's really beautiful. Please don't cheat me.

The subject matter is novel, non-toxic, the writing is good, and it's beautiful.

Personally, I feel it is very good. It is above average among all the novels I have read. But considering the author's level, it is already very good when written like this. There are many creative ideas. I personally suggest that the author can learn literary writing in his spare time. Perfect seven-star rating

Not bad, very interesting

The male protagonist has too many roles, so who is the male protagonist or the female protagonist🤔

The cover with yellow hair is pretty good, why did it change again?

I look forward to the male protagonist exerting his strength and directly teaching and training the female protagonist [Adoration] But the cancer must be cured in those three months! ! ! ! ! Don't become Diary of a Dead Wife! ! !

It's super nice, but it's so short. The author ended it in a hurry.

It's good to read, I hope the author won't stop updating it after writing a few books like the previous ones. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

You can read it. The new book has received 5-star praise and support [like]

Ahhhhhhhhhh it's so beautiful, but the update is a bit slow Big, come on, update [crying][crying][crying] [crazy][crazy][crazy]@

It's good to watch, the plot is novel, but the updates are a bit slow. I recommend you watch it.

It's very interesting, just don't be too cruel later on, the author [almost cried]

Yes, this is not an uncommon subject with a sexual twist.

The author's skill needs to be improved, but the setting is very novel and beautiful. It would be better if this setting can be written to the end. I will keep reading the book.

The author's previous works were all short. This fantasy genre can easily have more than 500 chapters. Don't make mistakes. Come on, author [laughs evilly] It feels like the plot is very weak, like growing a vase. Maybe the plot is not unfolding at the moment.

The raising of books has been completed😭(sad)

What's next, send it out [laughing evilly]

It's inside, it's standing, it's standing