[Weird] [Unlimited Streaming] [Micro-Thriller] [Original Script] [Single Female Protagonist]
Sometimes I wonder if my life has a script. Am I walking on the path of my own choice, or is everything I have experienced been a pre-arranged plot?
Until one day... I broke free... Only to find myself trapped in what a terrifying world...
Mu Qiu was awakened in the middle of the night, only to find that her father had killed her "mother"
The father trembled and said, "It's not your mother."
Mu Qiu's world has changed. Has he been cursed? No, he has been chosen.
Late at night at 4:40 a. M., A carriage drove slowly from the end of the alley.
The carriage driver had no eyes, only empty eye sockets. The carriage took Mu Qiu to an unknown place... That place was called the Strange World.
Reader comments
The later copies are much more exciting than the first copy, which was not very well written. But the rest of it is very exciting. Another point is that there are too many pits and foreshadowings. What everyone is talking about is Huang Mao killing Wanshan. The reason why I wrote this is that I guess Huang Mao was not simple during his lifetime. Only later did I realize that there was a follow-up to the first copy. If it hadn't been shown at the beginning, many people would have cut the book after reading the first copy. In the original world, Huang Mao met a man with a magic weapon. Anyway, the author wrote full of foreshadowings. If you can't bear it, you will cut the book into pieces in 30 minutes, but if you can bear it, you will find that it is a masterpiece. (In my personal opinion, if there are too many foreshadowings, it will make people think that Huang Mao is too strong and Wan Shan's death is a big loss.)
The writing is pretty good, and I discovered that the image of a female character, Ning Dieye, should be the anime character Dieye Hina. Hehehe, I didn't expect that the author is also an insider, with a pink-haired ball head.
In terms of the plot, I think the author could add real-life descriptions, such as the male protagonist and the police station Gu Yong disappearing, and real people looking for it.
The setting is a traditional weird one, but the carriage and the opening part where my mother wants to kill me are new. The plot details are sometimes a bit bloody when describing the killing, but it should be because I am a girl hahahaha.
Big cheers for the author! Update 10,000 words per day!
The writing is good, the plot is also very good, and the plot is also good. I hope more characters can be added hahahahaha. It's better to stay safe.
It's good, but there's no one
Good looking and worth recommending
It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it?
The script is okay, and the horror and scenes are also well described. Don't be led astray by some people in the comment area. Stick to your own ideas. There are many foreshadowings and don't need to be reduced. This way it will be interesting.
The plot and setting are good, but the characteristics of the male protagonist have not been highlighted yet, which should be reflected later. Please support it and update it quickly.
It's nice to say it looks good, and it's average to say it's average. It refers to the setting. Ghosts can still invade after completing the task. Anyone with a little resentment can turn into a ghost.
It's okay. I like the character Gu Yong very much. I hope he won't be written off to death.
It still has its own characteristics, and a slower pace would be better.
The writing is okay, but why can ghosts communicate? Since you can communicate, don't you just have to use the Mouth Escape Master every time? The main focus of the dungeon is horror, so it is not recommended to communicate with ghosts.
The later copies are much more exciting than the first copy, which was not very well written. But the rest of it is very exciting. Another point is that there are too many pits and foreshadowings. What everyone is talking about is Huang Mao killing Wanshan. The reason why I wrote this is that I guess Huang Mao was not simple during his lifetime. Only later did I realize that there was a follow-up to the first copy. If it hadn't been shown at the beginning, many people would have cut the book after reading the first copy. In the original world, Huang Mao met a man with a magic weapon. Anyway, the author wrote full of foreshadowings. If you can't bear it, you will cut the book into pieces in 30 minutes, but if you can bear it, you will find that it is a masterpiece. (In my personal opinion, if there are too many foreshadowings, it will make people think that Huang Mao is too strong and Wan Shan's death is a big loss.)
The writing is pretty good, and I discovered that the image of a female character, Ning Dieye, should be the anime character Dieye Hina. Hehehe, I didn't expect that the author is also an insider, with a pink-haired ball head. In terms of the plot, I think the author could add real-life descriptions, such as the male protagonist and the police station Gu Yong disappearing, and real people looking for it.
The setting is a traditional weird one, but the carriage and the opening part where my mother wants to kill me are new. The plot details are sometimes a bit bloody when describing the killing, but it should be because I am a girl hahahaha. Big cheers for the author! Update 10,000 words per day!
The writing is good, the plot is also very good, and the plot is also good. I hope more characters can be added hahahahaha. It's better to stay safe.
It's good, but there's no one
Good looking and worth recommending It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it?
The script is okay, and the horror and scenes are also well described. Don't be led astray by some people in the comment area. Stick to your own ideas. There are many foreshadowings and don't need to be reduced. This way it will be interesting.
The plot and setting are good, but the characteristics of the male protagonist have not been highlighted yet, which should be reflected later. Please support it and update it quickly.
It's nice to say it looks good, and it's average to say it's average. It refers to the setting. Ghosts can still invade after completing the task. Anyone with a little resentment can turn into a ghost.
It's okay. I like the character Gu Yong very much. I hope he won't be written off to death.
It still has its own characteristics, and a slower pace would be better.
The writing is okay, but why can ghosts communicate? Since you can communicate, don't you just have to use the Mouth Escape Master every time? The main focus of the dungeon is horror, so it is not recommended to communicate with ghosts.