Master and apprentice, master and apprentice
Jiang Ming accidentally traveled to the world of immortality, but he only passed into someone else's body. What's even more amazing is that that person was not dead yet. After accidentally finding a way to reshape his body, he finally had his own body in this world. Later, he worshiped a master, practiced immortality, fought monsters and upgraded, and suddenly one day:
Master: "A Ming, my heart is happy with you."
Jiang Ming: "No, Master, isn't this right? You are joking, right?"
Reader comments
Looking at the introduction, I'm into settings. But it looks weird [face covering]
The writing style is a bit weird, too straightforward and bland, and it feels weird from this perspective. You can read other people's books and analyze it.
As a newbie, it's normal to not be able to write well. It's the same thing for me when I write an essay occasionally. I have a lot of settings in my head, but I can't write them down [face covering]
For some more detailed descriptions of the characters, you can add some [send heart] [send heart]
Come on! [Send heart][Send heart]
The setting is good, but the writing style is a little lacking. The text unintentionally highlights the feeling that the master and the brothers are a bit weak. I can't explain it, but it feels like this. There is no problem in thinking, but the description is a bit (๑•̀‧̫•́๑) (the review is for reference only, because it is from my perspective, others may think the description is just right). Okay, good day everyone. Hey hey hey, I wish you all peace and success (⁎⁍̴̛͂▿⁍̴̛͂⁎)*✲ﾟ*
The overall feeling is good, a little sweet, and there are no flaws (just my personal opinion, just for reference). Anyway, it suits my taste. Although I feel that there is not much communication between the protagonists, this kind of tranquility really makes people feel calm. The world is beautiful and beautiful, with a touch of leisure. I hope that in the future, the author can continue to update [Send Heart] [Send Heart] [Send Heart] to bring us a better ending [Blowing Kiss] The author, please come on, I support you [Shy]
It looks good, but the writing style needs to be improved.
This is the first time I haven't skipped reading an article. It's really good. I hope the author will update it soon.
Good to read, good to watch, good to watch (≧▽≦) During the bottleneck period, I couldn't read anything (;;) Fortunately, I found an article that I can read, it's not easy (θ‿θ)
Teacher, don't give up! I really like it very much (ᕑᗢᓫ*)˒
Come on, teacher! Teacher loves you! Thank you teacher!
It's so pretty that I can't get enough of it
Highly recommended, super nice
I really love the current character of Shou
Very good looking
Come on, great author. Still pretty
It's pretty cool, but I feel like there's a little little interaction between the protagonists in the early stages.
Very nice. Not a timid character. Like it very much. The author needs to work hard, don't stop updating, and give five stars.
It's pretty good to watch. Overall, it's pretty good. The emotional line is a bit slow and the interaction between the two protagonists is relatively small. It's also sweet.
The setting is great. This is my first time to see this kind of one-body, two-soul type time-travel start. Although I am a newbie, I am making progress and I feel good now (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
Looking at the introduction, I'm into settings. But it looks weird [face covering] The writing style is a bit weird, too straightforward and bland, and it feels weird from this perspective. You can read other people's books and analyze it. As a newbie, it's normal to not be able to write well. It's the same thing for me when I write an essay occasionally. I have a lot of settings in my head, but I can't write them down [face covering] For some more detailed descriptions of the characters, you can add some [send heart] [send heart] Come on! [Send heart][Send heart]
The setting is good, but the writing style is a little lacking. The text unintentionally highlights the feeling that the master and the brothers are a bit weak. I can't explain it, but it feels like this. There is no problem in thinking, but the description is a bit (๑•̀‧̫•́๑) (the review is for reference only, because it is from my perspective, others may think the description is just right). Okay, good day everyone. Hey hey hey, I wish you all peace and success (⁎⁍̴̛͂▿⁍̴̛͂⁎)*✲ﾟ*
The overall feeling is good, a little sweet, and there are no flaws (just my personal opinion, just for reference). Anyway, it suits my taste. Although I feel that there is not much communication between the protagonists, this kind of tranquility really makes people feel calm. The world is beautiful and beautiful, with a touch of leisure. I hope that in the future, the author can continue to update [Send Heart] [Send Heart] [Send Heart] to bring us a better ending [Blowing Kiss] The author, please come on, I support you [Shy]
It looks good, but the writing style needs to be improved.
This is the first time I haven't skipped reading an article. It's really good. I hope the author will update it soon.
Good to read, good to watch, good to watch (≧▽≦) During the bottleneck period, I couldn't read anything (;;) Fortunately, I found an article that I can read, it's not easy (θ‿θ) Teacher, don't give up! I really like it very much (ᕑᗢᓫ*)˒ Come on, teacher! Teacher loves you! Thank you teacher!
It's so pretty that I can't get enough of it
Highly recommended, super nice
I really love the current character of Shou
Very good looking
Come on, great author. Still pretty
It's pretty cool, but I feel like there's a little little interaction between the protagonists in the early stages.
Very nice. Not a timid character. Like it very much. The author needs to work hard, don't stop updating, and give five stars.
It's pretty good to watch. Overall, it's pretty good. The emotional line is a bit slow and the interaction between the two protagonists is relatively small. It's also sweet.
The setting is great. This is my first time to see this kind of one-body, two-soul type time-travel start. Although I am a newbie, I am making progress and I feel good now (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤