Tokyo: Not a Scumbag, but a Master of Emotions

Although the style on the outside seems to be Japanese, the core gives me a taste of Western novels, with profound thoughts, rigorous plot settings, and superb writing skills. It feels like it incorporates some thinking and analysis of the changes in modern people (maybe). It is a genre that I have never tasted, and there should be a small audience on Tomato. It is well received

Let's talk about the review first, 7.5/10, Which is really good. This is a masterpiece of Japanese novels. Its characteristic lies in the comprehensive, three-dimensional personality of the male protagonist, which is not flat. From the plot perspective, there is a relatively obvious sense of advancement and deep foreshadowing. The shortcoming is that the description of the climax is slightly lacking, and the sense of transformation in each stage is slightly poor. From a character perspective, the protagonist is well portrayed. However, the portrayal of certain female protagonists is lacking. Like a painting, it shows all kinds of details but has no central core, which is a bit strange. By the way, the shaping of the teacher is very successful, making people think of Teacher Jing. In terms of settings, the social environment, economic status, etc. Are all relatively complete and there are no obvious errors. Overall it's worth a look, well above average for Tomato. It is suggested that the author change the cover and use a hand-drawn beautiful girl as the cover to make it more attractive. The author continues to work hard, if you can hope to study the female protagonist of the defeated dog or the shaping of the female protagonist by the spring object.

😂Looking at the writing style of the first few chapters, I can tell that I have my own ideas. The language is smooth and natural, and the expressiveness is indeed quite strong. As a new author, writing slow-paced daily stories on a platform like Tomato, which is relatively short and fast, is not very easy, and the results are indeed not ideal, which is a bit of a pity.

Great author, please write a lifelong emotional master, Ounegai [almost crying] It can only be said that it is a pity. It can be said that this book has been alienated by the ratings and the number of readers. It has been viewed on the homepage several times before, but after reading more than 100 chapters, only a few people have stopped reading it. But now that I have read it, I realize that this book is really well written and the characters are very good. Especially the male protagonist who is gentle on the surface but distant, polite and elegant but inaccessible, which makes people feel comfortable reading. I hope the author can persevere and keep working hard [Sending Hearts]

It feels okay. What's more interesting is the author's jokes. Some of the content contains too much psychological description, like the author writes in late-night emo.

Good book, hope it has an ending

It's wonderful, it can be said to be unique, especially the protagonist's character is well set up, and the awkwardness is just right. I hope it can keep it up.

So far, I'm not dissatisfied. The male protagonist is well portrayed. The eldest lady seems to have her own logic. The long-haired senior is very good.

Reading this book feels as fun as playing Persona

Not bad, you can watch it

Classic japanese style

Not bad, you can take a look

It's a pity that it's pretty good among foreign persimmons, so why isn't it popular?

It's okay, I'll see if I get it all in the end, but I like Tanaka the best. Unfortunately, the author said that Tanaka was only the protagonist's backing in the end.

Beautiful, no need to say more

The rhythm is soothing. If you don't want to be a slave to the system, you can take a look

Different perspective and subject matter but beautiful

I want to see the superior Miss Shiraishi weeping in pain [Adoration]

Scary strong, quite interesting

It looks good. It pokes my head. I rewarded it.

Very pretty. Very good.

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Good looking, good looking, good looking

Well written, I hope I won't die

I hope Teacher An has more scenes

Literary youth but good-looking and a bit regretful

Not bad, but I didn't see the male and female protagonists together.

It's good to watch but I'd be disappointed if I missed it. The descriptions are very vivid. I hope there will be more female protagonists and male protagonists who can change their avoidant personalities.

It's a very nice book, with very entangled emotions. It feels good to grow up in the entanglement.

Don't tell me, only Class A can be the heroine [Punch Out][Punch Out]