The Journey Through the Book Begins with Two Souls That Are One with the Immortal Lord

It's good-looking. Holy shit, who knew I saw more than a dozen chapters and looked up at the titles? It's only a dozen chapters. Looking at the table of contents, holy shit, each chapter actually has nearly 5,000 words! The writing style cannot be said to be particularly good, but it is definitely not a noob. The plot is smooth, the characters are full, and the emotional lines are also very good. I have seen some writers who are novices in writing have very slow plots, but this one is very smooth, and it also has a few golden sentences. Even now, you can cut a video with less than 40 pictures, and the author will also use the author's skills. Occasionally, there are some small dramas added to the story. For example, they are both sweethearts. No one likes to go out with them when going out to eat. They also add a few jokes. Moreover, although this book is said to be a traveling book, the original protagonists are all very good and have the sense of a group portrait. In the first dozen pictures, the two young couples and Xiao Wei are with the parents and the children as a family of three. Like, and the time travel is not necessarily time travel, it should be foreshadowing. I really love the way they get along with each other. It is super warm, and the protagonist is in an upgrade flow, which is a growth flow. The plot moves very quickly, so the growth is also fast. However, under these premise, the characters are not broken, the plot is very smooth, and there is no inexplicable feeling. , And the protagonist has a sense of CP, and some novels are written with a romantic partner, and it feels like a human-machine. This one is very human, and the author is also very human. They say that a cold brother should be paired with a little sun, but a gentle person should also have a sun by his side. Please give more to the small theater, the better. This little couple is really cute! Xilin99

The characters are well drawn, and I hope the author will be able to tell the story as eloquently as he does now when he develops the plot in the future. Also, the content updated by the author is really too little, so I'd better wait until the author finishes updating it before reading it. Come on, author [Upvote] [Upvote] [Upvote]

A very nice book

Nice! Feeling very warm

Nice! ! ! How can I describe it? It's beautiful. I beg the author to update it a lot.

It looks so good. I fell in love with it as soon as I looked at it. I finally found one that suits my taste. I like it so much. I really like it. [Sending my heart]

It looks good and the author works hard (ᵔᴥᵔ)

I feel that this book is well written, and each character is well created. I prefer the story of Luo Kui, Chu Rongyu, and their f3s. They are all good babies, but it is a pity that two of them are gone. There is also the warm daily life of Xiaoxi Xiaolin. Later, Xiaolin is also growing up rapidly. I am looking forward to the reunion of the young lovers, so please update! (ᕑᗢᓫ∗)♡

Very nice~The author is very good~

They are so good-looking. Oh my god, they are so sweet. The bromance is delicious😋, and it will definitely taste even better as a couple😋

Oh my god, it's so pretty! Haoqi! The writing is exquisite, and I fell in love with it just by reading it. I really don't like writing reviews, so I really couldn't help it this time! Looks great, folks! !

I like it so much, so warm

Don't be confused ahhhhhhhhhhhhh

Good-looking subject matter is more suspicious

It looks good, the author is great, I like it, I hope there is no knife in the back, I hope everyone has a good ending, [love][love][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's super nice and the plot is very smooth. I hope the author will have finished it when I wake up [shy]

Super pretty! ! ! I like the characters of both protagonists very much. They are the coolest ones of the year! !

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