I Become *********

There are too few female protagonists, so the author pressed the fast forward button again and again. My suggestion is to first understand the male protagonist's life experience, and then recognize his ancestors and pop up a fiancée. The fiancée will then have an older sister or younger sister. The fiancée will then compete with the female protagonist, and she will win randomly. Give Chen a bite by the way. Later, you can upgrade to the Female Soldier Queen and the Fairy Doctor. Dozens of volumes on this subject can be completed just by engaging with the heroine's enemies. In the end, the male protagonist suffered amnesia and was picked up, so he could turn on the immortal cultivation mode. The male protagonist acts as a cauldron and is activated, making love and fighting with a family of immortal cultivators. If you don't want to become an immortal, then enter husband mode. There are many topics for this continuation of the husband, the former female CEO (female protagonist). My vague first love when I was in school, my boss, my daughter's classmates, etc. [Laughing]

Dear babies! The author is a novice, and this is the first time he has written a book by himself. I used to only like reading. I usually go online a lot, and I am also a little kid. I hope all readers can be more tolerant, hehe. To be honest, this book has nearly 300,000 words written now. I always feel that the writing is messy, and I don't know if you can understand it. But the most important thing is not to scold the author. You can point out where I wrote poorly. Basically, I will read every comment carefully, and I will reply to your messages seriously, but sometimes I am tired and I don't reply so quickly. I hope you can support me more. If you have any good ideas or what you want to see, you can comment. I will seriously consider it. I have no other ideas. I just hope everyone likes it! ! ! And the most important thing is, give me a five-star review! ! !

A little suggestion, don't use the first person, it's better to use the third person

Very exciting! The author dares to write! But I feel that some places are too dark. I hope this book can add some sugar. Also, Lin Yanye's eyes must heal soon! Stop using the knife! It would be best if Lin Yanye and Wan Yanjie could be together in the end

Blessed are the masochists

The author is so pitiful. He keeps begging for gifts, but after all, he is a new author and is not very popular. It is normal. I will draw a cake for the author in advance and give him a gift in a few days [laughing]

Mo Ningshuang is cruel, but Mother Mo is even more cruel than her, so the worst sufferer is actually Father Mo. He must be beaten once a day at least, otherwise he cannot lose his temper at all [eating melon]

The writing is okay, but the male protagonist's name sounds like three completely independent characters. It would be better to call him Lin Ye or Lin Yan.

So sweet, I feel a little tired of it

No yes yes yes yes

It's well written, but it's a pity that not many people read this kind of writing, so the score won't be high.

Love watching it, the plot is good

So great, so great, so beautiful💁

Haokang author, cheers!

It's pretty cool, keep up the good work!

[Smile] Just a little bit more every day. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

Come on, author, I'll give you a gift.

What kind of surgery was done? Please tell me in detail.

Nice! Moreover, the author often interacts with readers, so I highly recommend it!

It's very beautiful. It's on my bookshelf. It's a yandere masterpiece.

It looks good and the author writes it well.

It's beautiful but a little uncomfortable

Although the writing is not particularly good, it is productive

It's pretty good, but it feels a little weird [what]

The author starts at five o'clock every day [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] I love it so much [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

I must give it five stars. I will start reading this book in March.

It's good to watch and I support the author, but I hope the ending is good, even though I watched it relatively late [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's also quite beautiful, cheers for the author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]