Legendary Investigator: Starting from Becoming a Dying Old Man

Following up, the author has updated to the end of the second copy. The advantage of the novel is that the atmosphere is more in line with Cthulhu's sense of despair. The male protagonist's character is also very good. It can be said that he is rational and at the same time more flesh-and-blood. I am really tired of the kind of madman who loves the immortal. Moreover, the side effects caused by various countermeasures (such as addiction to sleeping pills) can be said to be quite unpleasant. But there are also shortcomings. First, as the author said, Cthulhu novels can easily be written as fighting monsters, which makes the plot (especially the second dungeon) a bit confusing. Moreover, the protagonist's "perfect body" clue in the first dungeon is a bit abrupt to be honest. Although this kind of reinforcement routine is understandable, it would be better if the plot can be more twists and turns. Sometimes you can feel that the author has been immersed in his own creation. Maybe he can revise it after finishing it (laughs) The second point is the sanity value. Since the protagonist's body can already resist most attacks, the sanity value is an important point in creating a sense of danger. I hope that the reduction and increase of the sanity value will be more strict, so that it can truly become an item that can be restored but is very, very scarce. Finally, I hope the author can write down a little bit about the exchange items, such as the sleeping pills, how long it takes to recover, and how much sanity it takes to recover. Although I like to read the monster's poetry recitation-style dialogue, I'm afraid most people can't accept it. Authors can keep their own characteristics while improving them. Infinite streaming is indeed a relatively dead end field right now, and there are not many good novels. I hope it can become popular.

"I want you to pick up this gun. This is my last request. As long as you can do it, I will agree to your conditions. I already trust you 100%, but I want to trust you 1% more. I believe you have no intention of plotting against me or attacking me. If you want to negotiate peacefully, you shouldn't bring a gun from a parallel world, right? I believe nothing will happen even if you pick up this gun. Pick it up quickly! President Valentine, let this all come to an end."

I always thought that Zhang Yong would definitely survive to the end. The character description was so good. At the beginning, he observed the situation of the team members. Later, he wanted to be the protagonist, a bad guy and a good guy, but he also listened to the protagonist's words. Later, the protagonist was gone. Later, he learned the identity of Aunt Wang and listened to Aunt Wang. He knew that the situation had changed. No more. I tried every means to keep myself alive but ended up losing my mind. The newcomer twins survived inexplicably, and even the mid-level staff fell down. I thought it would be better if they all died. It seemed a bit inexplicable. Zhang Yong's spirit and evil and the final greed were very well written.

The world setting is okay and the story line is passable. The only drawback is that the story background is incomplete and the characters are unclear. The interaction between the characters can be strengthened. (The background setting can be added to the intermission after the dungeon ends, and the characters can try psychological description, second person, etc.) Finally, I hope your writing can continue to improve and even form your own writing style. The title of the book affects readers' clicks a lot, so I suggest you change it. (Just a little rant, what does this novel have to do with investigators?) You can name it based on your main plot, protagonist, etc. It can be funny and nonsensical, or it can be meaningful, but don't be "artistic".

How could I not give myself a five-star review? It's unjustifiable.

Very good writing style, or in other words, very good taste. The author has definitely read Cthulhu, it may be Luo Lao's, or it may be someone else's, but it doesn't matter. Compared with some that only apply certain Cthulhu elements, such as "yellow seal" and "indescribable", there are even some that just write a few big eyes and tentacles and say it is Cthulhu! This book is still very good, and what's even better is that this book has never contained any of the above symbolic elements—the author is truly writing his own Cthulhu. That's good, it's been rare in recent decades Finally, I wish the author that you can finally enter the world you wrote [laughs] (the highest praise for a Cthulhu creator)

Highly recommended, I will keep watching it as long as it doesn't have a female protagonist, come on! ! ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱

Let me tell you a joke😆, I forgot whether it was a year ago or two years ago🤔. I almost finished reading it at that time🥵. I thought about reading the book for a while and then read it again😋, but as soon as I read it, I forgot about it💩. Until now, I thought it was finished🤤, but it turned out that there were only more than 100 chapters😱, but the author's writing is definitely very good👍. I hope the author will work hard to complete the book👽 and don't stop updating☠️

The book is quite good, but I have some suggestions: Don't have too many long dialogues, which personally feel uncomfortable to read. Also, some long paragraphs can be written separately into several smaller paragraphs. Come on, author!

The content is good, but the author needs to grasp the mental state of the protagonist who is not human. There should be a strong sense of tearing between the two. However, in the second volume, I felt that the protagonist did not show that feeling. I hope that the third volume can show it and update it faster [please update]

Nowadays, there are more and more books labeled as Grammatical, but this one is considered to be a high-quality one. At least it has moved away from imitation of flesh, tentacles and the like and towards deeper exploration. As a work of unlimited flow, the characterization of specific copies is also remarkable. The two are consistent and worth a look.

Well, I think this is a very good book. Since I don't have a high degree, I can only introduce it to you from my own perspective and my own feelings, so that everyone can recognize this book. It was a bit unclear in the first volume. It may be my fault between the protagonist and the housekeeper, but his actions and psychology are very delicately written. Wow, when you enter it, you won't feel scared at all. How can you describe it as a complete spectator? For that kind of protagonist, didn't he have a body transformation? Ah, maybe you didn't read it completely, but anyway, he has undergone body transformation, and the completely third-person perspective is very comfortable. Well, anyway, the writing is very good, and the novelty makes you very curious, you know? The writing is very good, so I keep turning, turning, and reading. Because the writing is very good, so, well, the sense of immersion is that of being completely carried away. The speed of being carried away is very fast, and all of a sudden, the novelty suddenly bursts out, and the burst is particularly refreshing. The shocking feeling, maybe it can be said that the author has a very good imagination, but the narrative feels a bit messy. In short, that's it. I remember that it was the first one on the recommendation list. The first place seemed to be very miserable based on what the author said. How come so few people read it? Such a good book.

It's very good. Nowadays, most of the running group articles have to be judged once for everything. It is indeed very close to the running group, but why don't I just play it like this? This article is actually quite well written.

There are very few types of this book. The author's writing style is really good, a bit similar to the style of running a group.

Support the novice author, he writes very well I read two volumes in one go, and the reading time was 5 hours. It was really good and I could read it in one go.

The first volume was good and I liked it very much, especially when the body was reshaped by the God of Flesh. I was very happy for the protagonist. However, the second volume was a bit tiring. It was okay at first. In the middle and later stages, I felt that the protagonist was like a nanny, always protecting newcomers and useless teammates. He might as well not be the captain. Three people died and the score was lowered. The money was not much. At the end, he had a fight with the young god but his spirituality was reduced. It was a loss. Can you make up for it in the follow-up? I want the protagonist to get better and stronger, and I don't want him to be wronged. Maybe I like to read lone wolf cool articles without CP, this is just my personal opinion.

It's a bit like a running group? It's good to watch and I love to watch it. Please increase the update efforts. [Angry]

It's good to watch, the plot is well described, and those who love to watch Ke series are in luck [Add one to bookshelf][Already planted][Top post][Top post] Come on, author! ! ! !

It's normal for a new author's new book to have no readers, and it will get better and better over time. Keep it up [Like]

I have to admit that among tomatoes, this book can be called a masterpiece.

The logic is rigorous, the writing is excellent, and the flavor of the genre is very strong.

Well enough. But the madness after 40 years of sanity is the same as nothing else. The protagonist still calmly talks and thinks about things. He should describe more about the side effects of madness.

The writing style and logic are all top-notch in Tomato

Good, good, good, good, good, good

Good-looking works on Tomato are always unpopular The name is too elegant and not attractive enough. The content of the three golden chapters is okay🧐

The baby is very good, as expected, and the effect is good. I will consider repurchasing it next time.

Yes, this type of book is rare and this one is okay.

It's really good. You'll know if I can give you this kind of review based on how long I've been reading it.

Very good, I must keep writing.

A very logical book with clear organization and distinctive characters (I am not a human machine!)