Redemption Failed, the Female Villain Became My Sickly Girlfriend

Great, five-star reviews, come here because of it [laughs] I think the best part of the writing is the paragraph at the beginning of Chapter 96 + the end of Chapter 115. Or you can directly search for "struggle". See you in chapter 115. Just by reading the introduction of the book, you can get a glimpse of it. What is big love? This is called big love [laughing and crying] The heroine's grandfather is a big boss in the imperial capital, a proper gang leader. The heroine is weak and pitiful as a little white flower. The heroine's grandfather is a bandit leader, not a civil servant but a martial artist? Tampering with what others say and distorting their meaning? In order to achieve her goal, the heroine persecuted someone else's unborn child, but she did not directly murder the child's mother, causing the two of them to go to hell together. Most dignitaries are people who worship gods and Buddhas. The heroine colludes with a little girl and sends this person to see the Buddha [laughs] Great love, great love The readers of this book are even more intellectual, and the words written in the book can be described as gods from heaven descending to earth, the finishing touch, highlighting the highlights of the whole text in one stroke, and the beacon that guides the way forward [laughs]

It's not a brainless story, the male protagonist has both business skills online (but he was a CS in his previous life), the female protagonist is crazy and yandere, both strong, and the male and female protagonists have online IQs The article is unfolded from the perspective of the male protagonist (mainly). The plot is a calculation + emotional line that advances each other. The plot is relaxed and relaxed (it seems a bit official? It is very enjoyable to watch and feels very good). There is a lot of foreshadowing in the middle, but you can guess where it will develop later. However, the author writes it well and makes people want to read it. It will not be boring. The characters are vividly portrayed and the characters are very recognizable. Similarly, the author's writing style is very distinctive, not boring assembly line. Every word and sentence is very particular, which is very in line with my taste. There are almost no surprises in the 100 chapters. It is a highly recommended novel. Also, I hope there will be more updates [laughter] Five stars are not included in the rating, four stars are given The above only represents my personal opinion. I'm not bragging. This is my first impression after watching it. And there's more... I'm not asking for help [smile]

The author's writing is good, the overall world view is self-consistent, and the character creation of the highly intelligent and sickly heroine is also very successful. Next, let's talk about the shortcomings. I feel that the advance of the work is a bit long, and the early writing is inexplicable. Most people probably ran away immediately. In addition, in order to create the image of a high-IQ female protagonist, the male protagonist is too passive from beginning to end, which has a great impact on the readers' emotional experience... And the overall background is too dark, full of desire and struggle, which really affects the mood after watching it for a long time (but this also reflects that the author's skills are quite good) I didn't hold back. I only focused on the development of the plot and didn't pay attention to the key details. That sentence is really outrageous as it gets better😅

The writing is beautiful and the emotions are very delicate. I highly recommend it. I really beg you

It's super good. I recommend reading Chapter 115. It's so good.

Great, five-star reviews, come here because of it [laughs] I think the best part of the writing is the paragraph at the beginning of Chapter 96 + the end of Chapter 115. Or you can directly search for "struggle". See you in chapter 115. Just by reading the introduction of the book, you can get a glimpse of it. What is big love? This is called big love [laughing and crying] The heroine's grandfather is a big boss in the imperial capital, a proper gang leader. The heroine is weak and pitiful as a little white flower. The heroine's grandfather is a bandit leader, not a civil servant but a martial artist? Tampering with what others say and distorting their meaning? In order to achieve her goal, the heroine persecuted someone else's unborn child, but she did not directly murder the child's mother, causing the two of them to go to hell together. Most dignitaries are people who worship gods and Buddhas. The heroine colludes with a little girl and sends this person to see the Buddha [laughs] Great love, great love The readers of this book are even more intellectual, and the words written in the book can be described as gods from heaven descending to earth, the finishing touch, highlighting the highlights of the whole text in one stroke, and the beacon that guides the way forward [laughs]

A masterpiece among masterpieces, one of my favorite books. I may never see another book that I like so much. I actually wrote a lot before, but I deleted that book review. The goodness of this book cannot be expressed in words, it is hidden in every word. I won't talk about how good the writing style and rhythm are. I just want to say that I love the imperfections of the male and female protagonists so much. I love that the male and female protagonists know their own imperfections so much. I love that the male and female protagonists know that they are imperfect but still love each other deeply. They are too similar, paranoid, and only see each other and not themselves. They will quarrel, but they are still together, slowly polishing themselves to get stuck in each other's gears. This kind of love is too real and too unreal, not perfect but perfect enough. Can the two of them be called suitable? I think not in the secular definition. But people are not together because they are suitable, it is because of love, and people are not together because they are not suitable, but because they do not love. I don't know what the rest of the story will be, I just know that they love each other very much, in their own clumsy way, even if it's not perfect. Like like like like like like like like like

After reading it in one sitting, this book is based on a dog-food novel. The characters are capricious and appear flesh-and-blood, which is much more real than the pure and sweet kind. Putting aside the overlord plot and the needs of the novel's plot, what the male protagonist's mother said or the description of the mother in the whole novel is very consistent with the stereotype of the mother of divorced children since childhood. Many of the words were actually heard when they were young (even my mother is more like a combination of the male protagonist's parents, and her speech is outrageous) It's hard to comment on the fact that it beats people to death but at the same time they will regret it if they are really going to die.), It made me feel chills all over my body after listening to it, which will last a lifetime. I also watched it in the middle of the night, recalling my childhood. It's [crying] [crying] Later, I even watched a few pairs of parents' lines, and I was more focused on the relationship lines between the male and female protagonists [face covering] If you want to experience another kind of mother role, you can watch it. It's worth it, but remember to suppress your blood pressure and throw away your rationality. Not everyone has a mother with normal views [crying]

The author should be a girl. The emotional lines she describes are particularly delicate and her writing skills are high. Definitely deserves five stars. Does the author understand mental states very well? The character of the male protagonist as written really fits the characteristics of bipolar disorder. The male protagonist's mother is in a typical depressed state. The male protagonist's father is a typical manic mania. The female protagonist, hypochondriac + bidirectional. The collision of different characters' personalities is particularly good.

[Brief review]: Reading this book is like making wine, which becomes more and more mellow, with little poison in the early stage (it is recommended to start reading at chapter 32, and Shennong can be ignored) [Detailed review]: The characters are fleshed out and fleshed out. The title of the book is "Failed Redemption", but the content of the article is about the mutual redemption between the male and female protagonists [Madman] and [Yandere]. The supporting characters are rich in emotions, some are stupid, some are evil, and some are tender (a micro-group portrait style). It's a bit sadistic and slightly sweet, and the plot is smooth. It can be regarded as a refreshing novel with a different meaning. Except for the uncomfortable flaws in the early stage and some plots, this book is highly completed and worth reading. No stars will be deducted for newcomers and new authors, please support me.

So sweet, kids are so sweet The writing style makes me feel that it should not appear in 🍅. It does not need to be piled with gorgeous words. It has the feeling of reading a literary work. Let's talk about my personal understanding of the characters. The [redemption] in this book is completely different from the redemption in other books. The author is very thoughtful. For the male and female protagonists, mutual redemption means that the female protagonist is trapped in hell but sees a hand trying to pull her out of the abyss. The female protagonist just wants to pull the owner of this hand into the abyss, but the male protagonist is willing to be dragged into hell, and even wants to pull the female protagonist to dance together. For them, the sun on the surface is too bright, and they can become each other's light in hell. Sweet, too sweet, this is what I want to see

A more reasonable, profound, and humane salvation text. Although I haven't read many redemption stories, I also know that many redemption stories are actually very superficial. This book gave me a sense of familiarity with a sadomasochistic short novel at first, but it was more detailed and more reasonable based on the existing background, because being in an abyss has even become an abyss, but redemption is precious.

The writing is so good. I don't know how to describe this feeling of being illogical but very cleverly designed, which is equal to the two. But it is very beautiful, good writing style, good plot, good characters, good emotional lines, everything is good - I hope the author will get better and better! The writing is really good. You can tell from the writing style that the author is very good, at least on Tomato. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is really well done, the relationship between the refractory and the female protagonist is complementary, and why the male protagonist's leg is paralyzed. The writing is also good, including the fact that the heroine's grandmother's character has been shackles of the old-fashioned ideas. Then The solidification of thoughts caused by the preference for boys over girls was written very well. I didn't understand why the male protagonist was always worried about being locked up in the villa at first, but later on, the description of the male protagonist made these points come true, or it was foreshadowing. So far, I only see that the male protagonist has changed the past and is not paralyzed. I really think it is very good, recommended!

Wow wow wow, a high score of 9.1! I suggest the author link up with 91 Movies [laughs]

It's not directly related to the genre, so it may be a bit difficult to grasp in the early stages. The back part is so fucking beautiful [like] Such a deformed and awkward straight-ball pure love is so pretty, these are the top ones I've seen in Tomato Yandere [take a closer look] Pretty awesome [almost crying]

First of all, it's so elegant! I just want to say that the plot of this novel is definitely one of the best among single-female protagonists. Different from other sweet novels, I personally think that the characters in this book are more vivid and three-dimensional, and the details are really full. There is no love at first sight, but the mutual redemption of two miserable people. It feels like the author is writing something very new, a bit like a Western romantic style, focusing on the characters' psychology and language to narrate the story. I can't describe the specific feeling. It's a very unique style and a very beautiful love. In short, it's so cool! ! !

After reading Chapter 60, this book is the best written in Tomato, and the descriptions are super delicate. Rating 9.0 Is more attractive to me than 9.79.8 Or something. There were some embarrassing plots in the early stage, and some suspected messy relationships, such as Luo Mo and Yao Pingping, both of whom were clowns. The fact that the heroine never liked Luo Mo in the previous life was because of the hero's own opinion. Don't miss this good book because of this small problem. These are all clowns, and the main plot is the male and female protagonists! ! Show them all to me! ! ! ! I strongly recommend that this author is definitely not a novice. Chapter 49: Kiss, those few paragraphs can definitely be called apotheosis. It's sweet to watch the whole story. The author describes it very delicately. The heroine never liked Luo Mo in her previous life! ! ! ! Don't get me wrong! ! ! The heroine actually hinted that the hero wanted to get married several times in her previous life, but the stupid hero didn't understand and even thought that the heroine liked Luo Mo in her previous life. The quality of this book is far superior to that of Tomato. In terms of narration and writing style, I haven't seen many books on Tomato. Moreover, the few books on Tomato are just short stories, the kind that are less than 100 chapters long. To be honest, I would pay to read this book.

I really like this book. . . I like the heroine's calculation and ruthlessness. . . I like the loneliness and madness between the male and female protagonists. . . I think the characters are well drawn. . . The existence of other characters is to portray the feelings between men and women. . . Among other characters, the image of the grandmother is more in line with the ideological education of some older people today. . . I really like the heroine's planned performance in this book, but mainly I prefer the heroine's cruel and bloody methods, and I hope there won't be too many scenes of being soft-hearted towards others. . . . Because I personally belong to the Capricorn sign and am not as ruthless as the heroine. In reality, I am always bullied and deceived over and over again because of my gentleness and compassion. I even thought I was a pathetic and ridiculous person. . . Not worthy of other people's emotions. Compared to the heroine's scheming and cruelty, I particularly like it [laughs]. Overall, I really like how the heroine plays the role of a villain.

It was a blast to play. The character of the male protagonist is rarely seen in male videos. Not cruel enough, not cruel enough

Yes, I enjoyed watching it. Both the male and female protagonists are a bit confused. The female protagonist is not yet seen as yandere, but I have only read chapter 30 so far. I think it will be soon. Overall, it is OK. There are some minor flaws, but it is understandable. There are no poisonous points. You can eat it with confidence.

The writing is very good, the writing is vivid and the plot is smooth. Compared with the two protagonists, the villain seems too stupid, Zhou Song and Yan Ye feel almost boring. If this is a domestic drama, then maybe forget it, but in many places the writing is smooth and natural. Emotions can easily flow into people's hearts like running water. The villain's IQ is like the shortest part of a barrel, which is particularly eye-catching. I hope the author can make the villain more powerful. Having a comparable opponent can better complement the protagonist. I enjoyed reading the delicate emotions of the heroine. I hope the author will continue his work.

I have finished reading the first volume. To be honest, this book is a bit disappointing on Tomato. Although there are some problems in the beginning, it is really very interesting to read. The redemption of two disabled people is not a silly love story. There are conflicts and quarrels between the male and female protagonists, but their lives have long been intertwined. The protagonist does not have an invincible hand. They are more like beasts licking each other's wounds in order to live a good life. The characters are very well portrayed. No matter it is the protagonist or others, there is no perfect character. Everyone has flaws, but they are very real. It is full of flesh and blood and the plot is also very good, especially the writing. It is almost impossible to find another book of the same type on Tomato that is so good. Sometimes it really feels like reading a literary work. I hope the author can write better and better. It has been a long time since I saw a novel that shocked me so much [face covering]

When I didn't read much, I felt that the first few chapters were a bit vicious. After reading it, well, the heroine seems to have inevitably turned into a villain at this time (psychologically completed), so I just read the first few chapters from the perspective of the heroine being a vicious villain. It seems to be quite exciting, and even feels a bit inadequate (Don't blame me, Mr. Yan) Except for Xiaoyun's plot at the end, there was no pressure for me. It was all about the sentiments of the crazy father-in-law and the crazy mother-in-law. But the final plot was really scary, because when I think about it carefully, from the perspective of an outsider, I can't judge whether human nature will change or whether Xiaoyun will take revenge. But I really can't accept the heroine taking action against Xiaoyun. It is unacceptable for the heroine to attack a child who likes the hero and also likes herself (it is very important to like herself), even if this child is also a "damn" evil person, fortunately there is a male protagonist, otherwise the heroine would really love the hero, and there is no difference between a villain with no human heart. One evil dragon has killed several other evil dragons. The author's writing style is really good, and the logic of reality is very smooth. It is the most fluent among the black yandere novels I have read. The author can show the emotions and the plot of the story so well through long dialogues. It is really powerful. The only thing that makes people a little confused is that there are too many villains in the novel. To put it simply, throughout the whole text, it is all the fault of the original family, but the reality is still better, isn't it? There are evil people, but there are also many people who are willing to look at the world with kindness (I am not the former Luo Mo, but I really think so). Perhaps most people cannot withstand the temptation, but kindness is always there. Of course, there is no book without coincidence. Give the world more love, give your family more love, give yourself more love, and hope that everyone will not become the Mr. Yan that he once was. The more stories I read about Stone and Poison, the more precious I feel that this emotionally delicate and completely nontoxic novel is top 3 in my mind.

After browsing it briefly, I feel that the author's writing is quite good. At first, I couldn't see the yandere characteristics of the heroine. I only saw a pitiful but somewhat cute heroine. However, after reading it carefully, I found that the heroine still has certain yandere attributes. I felt that the contrast between the front and back was a bit strong, which made the character image more rich and three-dimensional, and the overall character creation was also very good. In terms of plot, the early stage mainly focuses on the male protagonist's redemption of the female protagonist. I personally feel that the early writing is very good, and it is a bit addictive to read, especially the redemption of the female protagonist by the male protagonist, and the repressive family environment of the male and female protagonists, which cannot change the two people's love for each other. The female protagonist also successfully turns the unlearned male protagonist into a person who the female protagonist is willing to change and only hopes to be with the female protagonist forever. This is difficult and valuable. The female protagonist chose to side with the male protagonist when faced with the teacher's doubts about the male protagonist's test scores. What touched me the most was the teacher's blessing to the male protagonist on the day of the college entrance examination, which made me think a lot. However, the speed in the later period still felt a bit too fast. I felt that it would be a particularly good work if it was longer and richer in content. However, the overall feeling is still very good, and the storyline is novel. I will continue to appreciate it later. Highly recommended for everyone to read

If you want to advance, restrain first, one star will be deducted because the first three chapters are bad. Four stars is an objective rating. The subjective rating is five stars! I clicked on a potential new work and found this book. The author's writing is very sophisticated and the characters are well created. There are actually very few named characters, but they are all vividly portrayed. The male and female protagonists are also very sweet. After reading the first three chapters, you will think how can this be saved? How can the male and female protagonists be together later? See the back - you two are a perfect match. Get your certificate from me as soon as possible. The setting of suspense is also very strong, especially the fact that it is never clearly stated how the male protagonist was paralyzed in his previous life. Later, the truth about the male protagonist's transformation into a parking lot God of War is revealed. It is enjoyable to watch. Can you live up to three updates a day and four updates a day? Author, you must write eloquently for the rest of your life! [Blowing kiss] After three brushes today, I discovered that the first three chapters had been revised a lot by the author. It's rare for an author to listen to advice like this. Five stars, must be five stars [Blow kiss]

Yes, the narrative in the first 20 chapters was not very good. The details and descriptions were not handled well, which made people feel confused. The male protagonist acted like a psychopath and a clown (as if he was originally one), but later it was discovered that this was actually a way for the male protagonist to help the female protagonist. However, this method was a bit weird due to psychological problems. The male protagonist is actually very delicate in his heart and can comfort the female protagonist. The female protagonist is a miserable person, a madman, a pervert, and a redemption story of two mentally ill people. Hahahaha, the impression is not bad😄. It may be a bit psychopathic and the audience is not good, which leads to the overall book review not being very high [thinking], but believe me, if you take your time, this is actually a process of mutual healing. The recovery of the two patients will take time, waiting for them to overcome the obstacles that life has brought to them. So the author must not stop updating (´△｀). The writing is indeed very good, but you still need to practice your writing skills. Although the popularity is not high, we readers will accompany you to the end of the story, come on [laughs] By the way, can you continue to give five stars? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Some netizens who were driven by a sense of justice to comment after watching a certain video may have misunderstood the sentence in Chapter 115. The context at that time was actually that Grandpa Yan was a wealthy man and his family was running out of time, so he wanted to determine the heir. However, Yan's father was too unscrupulous in his actions, which easily ruined the family, so he wanted Yan to fight for the inheritance rights. For this purpose, he specially designed Song, using the specious words "You have to fight to protect your boyfriend" to trick people into raising Gu. It is even his behavior of misinterpreting the original intention of the horse and covering up his desire for power with grand rhetoric that makes this character image more authentic. Blindly thinking about reporting sensitive issues when seeing them, this kind of behavior truly violates the views put forward by Ma in his comment on the Prussian censorship order. As for the novel itself, it is actually mainly about the love story of a very suspicious and snake-hearted fox and a hedgehog who is resigned to his fate but also hides his hidden anger. They fight together in the quagmire, bite each other, and peel off the disguise. And then there are a lot of shadows of the original family mixed in. If you can accept this villain protagonist setting, in fact, in the field of "love stories of mental patients", the image of the heroine Yan is quite outstanding. In addition, compared with other high-scoring works, the data of this novel during the serialization period are not good, so the author directly stated that the second volume was written very hastily and lacked direction in the later period. However, it still received praise and second and third reviews because it is indeed a very good romance. It can expand a very simple story with only language and psychological description, and portrays many excellent characters, which is something that many online novels cannot do. Using some very crude words to judge is actually obliterating the author's creative practice and the readers' aesthetic experience. The only beneficiaries of Ting Feng is Rain are the people who used a certain video to make a name.

How do you say it? It was pushed on the homepage It felt quite ordinary at first, with a similar beginning and setting. But as I read on slowly, I became addicted without realizing it. Both male and female protagonists have online IQs The male protagonist is reckless and likes to do things The heroine holds back her grudge and is vengeful and feels crazy. Both of them have unfortunate pasts, and they meet by mistake Depend on each other, save each other The injured soul is also getting closer You and I are each other's weakness and each other's armor Open low and go high I hope the author will not be discouraged and keep the pace. The data will slowly come up. People's eyes are sharp. Finally, please update the author quickly!!! I want to read the third volume (don't cut it)!!! [Angry]

Good book, really good book. The following is my personal opinion. 1. The plot is novel and reasonable. What I write is an article without a system (in my opinion, most systems exist to solve the problem that the author is not strong enough in writing, unable to arrange reasonable logic, and unable to promote the plot. I do not deny that some systematic articles are very exciting and interesting.) 2. The characters are fleshed out and full of flesh and blood. The character setting of the male protagonist is better than the image of the male protagonist in classic cool novels such as a warrior king, a miracle doctor, a killer, a powerful hero, etc. In fact, not only the male protagonist, but every character in the book has a distinct personality and characteristics. My evaluation of them is: As a person, they can write very clearly every word. 3. The author's writing skills are good, and the core theme of the plot is in line with my personal taste. I clicked in accidentally, and the reason I was attracted was not yandere, redemption or anything like that. But as I slowly read it, I felt like I couldn't stop. I felt the struggles of the male and female protagonists, all kinds of complex psychology, family misfortune, the core of sadness, and broken people. 4. I haven't finished reading it yet, and I hope that the author's subsequent writing will be more exciting. There is a happy ending and good results. 5. Haha, I didn't expect that the word limit has not been reached yet. As a high school senior, there are more than 30 days left for the college entrance examination. To be honest, I cracked up when I saw the male lead scoring 130 in math in two weeks. Although this is not the right place, I can't help but complain about the score of 110 in mathematics. A score of more than 120 is simply a quagmire. Mathematics is really the subject I am least good at, and I feel that studying it all the time will have no effect... I hope that I can perform normally when the time comes. There are 38 days left, everyone is waiting for my good news. There is one day left for the college entrance examination! !

After staying up late to read it, I can only say that it is invincible. The author has done a good job in analyzing the psychology and personality of the characters in the book. You have to read it carefully or even read it several times to understand what he wants to express. The various aspects of human nature are described completely, and the plots are interlocking. Everything has its motivation, process, opportunity and various results. There are no problems with time logic, butterfly effect, etc. When I finished reading this book, I was as surprised as when I first encountered "You Can't Escape Her Love After Rebirth". I didn't expect Tomato to have such a masterpiece that would become a god.