Shaking the Heaven and Earth, Awakening the Power of Shock at the Beginning!

4 Points, I can see that the writing skills are good, but there are many classic and pretentious plots in the academy-style plots, and skilled writing skills cannot completely avoid these outdated plots.

It's okay. You can take a look and it's not as exaggerated as others said. It's just a little bit poisonous. It's a very traditional pretentious and slap-in-the-face Gao Wuwen, and the routine is very cliché, but there is something about the author's writing skills, which alleviates this problem to a certain extent. It seems very strange now that it is full of systematic funny abstract articles and poor writing skills. In fact, it only has three stars. I give it four stars and hope the author can write better.

Personally, I think it's good. It's not mindless. It should be at least 8.5 Points. The plot arrangement is still reasonable. Although the story is still a bit old-fashioned, the whole world view has not been developed. The author should have his own thing. The details of the battle can still be figured out. At present, it is still a battle with moves. The details are still a little bit inferior. You must also control the combat power and not collapse. I always feel that the combat power is a bit shaky. Come on, author [Thinking]

It can also be considered a masterpiece among similar articles about tomatoes. The protagonist has a cold personality and pursues martial arts wholeheartedly. He was a master in his previous life, so he seems to be at ease most of the time. When he pretends to be fake, I don't think he is deliberately pretending, but his true feelings. He is not a holy mother, but has a master's demeanor and does not kill innocent people indiscriminately. Some people may think that the mother of the protagonist in the previous ten chapters is a poisonous point, but I can barely accept it, and the mother only appears very rarely, and she can basically be used as a backdrop. The only pity is that the author didn't finish it in the end. I really want to see the protagonist shine in the end.

What does this book say? Not bad, but in some aspects it is just a little bit different from a great author. I always feel a little watery. But very enjoyable. Take whatever you can get from tomatoes. A great book to keep on your bookshelf. Come on author.

It's extremely poisonous. I can't be the only one trying it.

It's very good. It doesn't bring in other skills from One Piece, and its combat power is not overwhelming. The fruit's ability itself is incredible. Earthquake is just an extension of the concussion ability. It changes the crust of the earth through vibration to cause earthquakes, but it is more contagious. It looks outrageous. It is not the same thing as causing an earthquake with a punch of brute force.

The writing is good so far. I even think that the game can be slower and more detailed. I hope that the author, in the later stage, can have a bigger world view, step by step to the top, and finally conquer the whole universe [Cool]

Come on, this is a very enjoyable article. It seems that it should have no female protagonist.

It's good to read, but I hope it doesn't have too few chapters. I'm not interested in books that finish in one or two hundred chapters. I'm only interested in reading books that finish in nine hundred to one thousand chapters. It has to be at least seven or eight hundred chapters, otherwise I really won't be interested in reading it.

Very good, the main character is Sigma Man

I don't know if the power of vibration will be expanded upon later. Seismic waves/vibrations are mechanical waves, and sound waves are also mechanical waves. If the vibration frequency is adjusted, every object has a resonant frequency, and the internal structure of the object will be destroyed at the resonant frequency. If the concept of waves is expanded later, it will be a conceptual level ability [smile]

It's quite good, although there are some poisonous points, but it doesn't affect me. I can still read this book if it's out of stock. The protagonist is also okay and pretends to be strong. Of course, it would be better if it were stronger [laughing] Finally, I hope the author will work harder and update it so that it doesn't become eunuch or unfinished.

I have seen 2130/2551 so far. They are not too poisonous, not procrastinating, and the villain's IQ is also online. To be honest, the rating is a bit low (currently 7.8). If there was no poison behind it, the score would probably be 9.2

It can only be said that it is not overly pretentious and slaps in the face, which is not in line with current mainstream novels, but the fighting scenes are very detailed. If you can tolerate some small poisonous points in the early stage, you can take a look. The current plot rhythm is well controlled.

It is a rare and beautiful book. There is no allegory within the allegory, no mentally retarded villain, the writing is smooth, the plot is reasonable, and the fighting scenes are very graphic. It is worth reading [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Suitable for novices who haven't read a few books! Ten years ago I might have been interested! Give four points for encouragement

It's not bad, even though the protagonist looks like a master of martial arts wherever he goes, even if he has to compete with a little Karamie, he has to perform several sets of perfect martial arts.

Five-star encouragement [laughing evilly] The cover itself is used to attract fans But it is a good book if it goes out of its own system. Recommended for everyone to watch

Very nice, keep up the good work author

I'm an old bookworm, this book is really good, I haven't read a good fighting book in a long time, I feel like I read Chen Beixuan back then.

I looked at a few of them and found them pretty good. I give them five stars for more updates! I finished reading it in a day or two [eating melon]

Very beautiful, I recommend everyone to watch it, if you like watching martial arts

Very OK and beautiful, the score is at least 9.1

Personally, I think it's pretty good. There's no system, but because Pig's Foot is very capable, the golden finger is still very big. And the plot is good. Pig's Foot has been trying to become stronger through fighting~~~ I just looked at the table of contents, have we really finished writing? A little doubtful~~~

A developer of vibration ability, his writing is okay, there is no mine at the moment, the score shouldn't be so low, full score support, sonic vibration has been developed, but the power of vibration can also be developed in a deeper way, the road is simple, different paths lead to the same goal, such as basic ground vibration wave perception, and every object has a vibration frequency, and another example is using vibration to split the space and then using common frequency to oscillate two space nodes to achieve space teleportation [eating melon]

In general, if you want to read Devil Fruit high martial arts type, don't come in. Don't be misled by the cover. This is a high martial arts novel that has the power of shock. It has nothing to do with the white beard on the cover.

It looks good, no need to say anything. I won't comment on anything that doesn't look good.

As long as you can accept being kicked out of school at the beginning and the protagonist being slow in Chapter 50, the rest of the story will be good.

This book is quite interesting, I have never seen it written in such a way.