Yunshangji

The pre-travel shake at the beginning is too long and useless. There are problems with reaction after the time travel. After the time travel, there is no goal or regret. And the label is palace fights and Jianghu, your palace fights, Jianghu tone does not start at the beginning, you can't even see the theme at the beginning, and there is no dilemma. Even if the pace is slow, there must be suspense or a goal, otherwise it will be unbearable. It is better to directly get involved in palace fights at the beginning, such as time traveling to the little maid to take the blame, etc., Facing a life and death crisis

The front part is indeed a bit ordinary, please read it patiently, I am confident that this will definitely give you a different reading experience! ! ! Please be patient and help the poor children...