One Piece: The Second Erlang God of Totto Land, a Sister-Doting Maniac!

It's very frustrating. I thought it was the system, but it turned out to be a devil fruit. I thought I would be able to stand up after getting the Erlang Shen fruit, but in the end I ended up being a dog under the command of my aunt. It's not Shuangwen at all. Since it's not Shuangwen, don't give Erlang Shen such a golden finger. To compare it to the little Japanese stone monkey in God Killer, he is not worthy of the title of Monkey King. I felt suffocated after reading the first part, and I thought maybe it would be fun to watch the second part, but I didn't see the protagonist turn around from the end of the table of contents. Anyone who sees Erlangshen like this would have to say something mean! Where is your pride in resisting heaven? The author wouldn't confuse Yao Ji and Aunt, right? Why is Erlang Shen filial to his mother, and the protagonist has to be a dog with peace of mind, right? Is this the same thing? If it's not one or two stars and may be blocked, I really want to give it one star. This also taught me a lesson. You must not be impatient. I thought it was a good article based on the title and subject matter, so I entered it without reading the introduction or reviews. It taught me a lesson directly.

The theme is good, but I think the shortcomings are that the protagonist's lifespan is deducted for decades at the beginning, and the Overlord color is also banned. The aunt's daughter Flanpe is the enemy, and why is she not married to Yamato? I feel that the friendship between the aunt and Kaido is still okay, after all, they can practice hegemony. Suddenly, it became 5 stars, haha

Is this a pirate fanfic?

It feels good, but the plot is a bit uncomfortable. This novel is not actually a good novel. I just don't know if the protagonist will kill the aunt when he grows up. If he doesn't take revenge, he will lose many fans [sad] Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [punch out][punch out][punch out]

It's pretty good so far, but the Erlangshen fruit is a little too high. The natal skills and accompanying magic weapons are too heaven-defying. The characters are in line with the original setting. There is currently no female character opposite to the male protagonist. The female protagonist is Bu Ling. Ace's marriage is a bit confusing. I hope it can be written better in the future.

I hope the protagonist will work hard and strive to change his destiny! Stop being suppressed like a cow or a horse! A good phantom beast was forced into a beast!

It looks good. The only problem is that I stayed in the aunt group for a long time, but I can accept it. After all, there is still a long time in the back. In order to subtly isolate the aunt, I can understand it. It would be better if the description of the fighting moves is more handsome. Refer to Erlang Shen's moves in Black Wukong. In it, he can cut mountains with an axe, and the clone's eye laser sweep is also very cool.

Let's talk briefly about abilities. They are some of the benefits that Erlang Shen gives to the time travellers, a kind of transformation technique, a kind of thunder and lightning, a kind of flame, sowing beans to make soldiers, strengthening friends, just use Fa Tian Xiang Di as Susana, and then the body and soul are strengthened, oh, by the way, there is also summoning weapons 🍉

It's a cool article about pirates, with elements of Erlang Shen added in. If you just think about the coolness, it's a very good article. After all, Erlang Shen is not low in strength in Chinese mythology. It's suitable for relieving stress after a lot of pressure [please update]

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