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The theme is good, but I think the shortcomings are that the protagonist's lifespan is deducted for decades at the beginning, and the overlord color is also banned. The aunt's daughter Flanpe is the enemy, and why is she not married to Yamato? I feel that the relationship between aunt and Kaido is still okay, after all, they can practice overlordship. Suddenly, it became 5 stars, haha

It feels good, but the plot is a bit uncomfortable. This novel is not actually a good novel. I just don't know if the protagonist will kill the aunt when he grows up. If he doesn't take revenge, he will lose many fans [sad] Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [punch out][punch out][punch out]

It's pretty good so far, but the Erlangshen fruit is a little too high. The natal skills and accompanying magic weapons are too heaven-defying. The characters are in line with the original setting. There is currently no female character opposite to the male protagonist. The female protagonist is Bu Ling. Ace's marriage is a bit confusing. I hope it can be written better in the future.

I hope the protagonist will work hard and strive to change his destiny! Stop being suppressed like a cow or a horse! A good phantom beast was forced into a beast!

The fan titles have been released, and the top three on the fan list are the three generals. The top 100 people on the fan list are ministers of all nations

Let's talk briefly about abilities. They are some of the benefits that Erlang Shen gives to the time travellers, a kind of transformation technique, a kind of thunder and lightning, a kind of flame, sowing beans to make soldiers, strengthening friends, just use Fa Tian Xiang Di as Susana, and then the body and soul are strengthened, oh, by the way, there is also summoning weapons [eating melon]

It looks good. The only problem is that I stayed in the aunt group for a long time, but I can accept it. After all, there is still a long time in the back. In order to subtly isolate the aunt, I can understand it. It would be better if the description of the fighting moves is more handsome. Refer to Erlang Shen's moves in Black Wukong. In it, he can cut mountains with an axe, and the clone's eye laser sweep is also very cool.

It's a cool article about pirates, with elements of Erlang Shen added in. If you just think about the coolness, it's a very good article. After all, Erlang Shen is not low in strength in Chinese mythology. It's suitable for relieving stress after a lot of pressure [please update]

Well, the subject matter is quite new. It would be better if it was the era of Rocks. It would be longer this way. Even if you wait until Rocks is gone and join the Celestial Dragons to listen to the instructions and not listen to the announcement, then the World Government lets the protagonist deal with Luffy and they can just use the Skymantle to beat the juniors. It feels more interesting this way.

It's worth reading. It's also a good book when there is a book shortage.

It has great potential and I feel like it will become popular in the future.

It's very interesting to write, keep up the good work!

It looks great. I don't know what to say, so I'll just give it a five-star rating!

My head is empty, it looks good hehe it looks good₍₍٩( ᐛ )۶₎₎♪

The pace is quickening, I want to see matricide

It's so beautiful. How could you come up with such a stupid subject?

Just five stars and waiting for nine chapters~ It's so good, so good~ Come on, come on~

It's very good. It's not overwhelming in the early stage, and it's not invincible from the beginning. It has brains, not brainlessness. It's a cool article. I can catch up to the last chapter in one go. The author will update it quickly. Five star support

It looks good, I personally think it's pretty good, please update more [love][love][love]

Well written and beautiful

I like this character very much

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very nice. Don't break it

Yes, it's pretty.

Nice to read and write quickly, come on author

Looks pretty good.

I'm finally going to fall out and give a good review to support the author.

It looks good. Is there anyone else who started from the aunt group?

The plot is better, but it's too concise

It's good to watch and the plot is pretty good Be patient in the early stage, slowly develop in the later stage, increase your strength and fall out with your aunt