She Is the Apple of the Chosen One’s Eye

It's so good-looking, the male protagonist is as handsome as a god, and his strength is unfathomable. The key is to pamper the female protagonist! The female protagonist is beautiful, looks like a weak little white flower in front of the male protagonist, and loves to tease him at every turn. I just like reading this kind of sweet pet article.

It's so good. I finally found a book that I really like. When I was reading it, I read a review and someone said it was fast-paced, awkward, inexplicable, etc. Everyone likes different things. I read a lot of novels, some fast-paced and some slow-paced, so I can accept this book. Those who say it's illogical can just ignore it. No one is holding your head to let you read. There are a lot of suspenseful logic texts for you to read [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

I only saw a small part of the front part, and then I didn't see the back part. So I'm not sure what's going on behind it, but I just saw this position and wanted to say something. But the five-star rating is still there! ! So after I posted the comment, the author was forbidden to say anything about me! I feel that the author is probably a novice, so I would like to give some small suggestions for young readers. First of all, I feel that in the beginning, I wanted to write about the heroine changing herself through hard work, and then having five spiritual roots to struggle in this world of immortality? In fact, I didn't quite understand the heroine's thoughts at first. She suffered from illness in her previous life, but now she has good health and has friends in the Immortal Sect. I can actually calm down because I read the previous chapters and didn't see anyone bullying the heroine. After all, you have been tortured by illness all your life. Shouldn't you calm down and enjoy yourself in the next life? Even if I work hard to cultivate immortality, I don't think it's necessary to involve the male protagonist. I think practicing hard is for a better body. If the male protagonist is not like this, the heroine's own image will be more sublimated, right? Then I feel like the heroine's thoughts are a little weird sometimes, eh, so naive, right? There is a natural thought. I think if I write some twists later and let the heroine's thoughts change, I think in this way, the character's thoughts will be more full, and there will also be a feeling of ups and downs. I guess the author originally wanted to write about a heroine with five spiritual roots working hard in the world of immortality, but I feel that the heroine's opportunities are really easy to get, and it feels like she has a halo. Well, I know it is normal for the protagonist to have a halo, but this halo is too obvious. I think, if you want to write about the heroine's hard work, you can not write about some hardships and then get these opportunities through your own efforts and hard work, because whether it is Wulinggen or other proud people, they all need to get those opportunities through their own special efforts. Vomiting blood and getting injured are commonplace, and I think it is normal for the heroine to travel to the world of immortality, shouldn't there be a little discomfort? Moreover, in the previous two times when the heroine was killed, the hero came to help. There have been two heroes saving the beauty. In fact, there is no need to highlight it in this way. I think it would be more interesting to write a heroine's counter-attack, make the attacker weaker, and then write the heroine's counter-attack. Then during the counter-attack, the heroine must have never killed anyone, and she must have the normal mentality of killing people. Only then will she realize that this is the world of cultivating immortals where the jungle prevails, and it is not just a novel. To me, I always feel that the heroine seems to treat this too much as a novel instead of treating it as a normal world. Actually, I can't tell clearly, is this right or wrong? Sometimes the heroine feels a little naive? For example, in the world of immortality, where the jungle prevails, and the heroine has no ability to protect herself, and runs around, it is very easy to encounter people with malicious intentions (┯_┯). The heroine seems to be aware of it, but also seems not to realize it? I have read a male channel about immortality before. The male protagonist is a mortal cultivating immortality. People on the Internet say that the male protagonist is not 100% sure and basically chooses to run away. He is extremely cautious in the world of immortality. There are also some details that are not handled appropriately enough, and some modifiers may not be needed, because sometimes they may be a bit exaggerated. The above are just a few of my thoughts, author, please keep writing, I believe in you💪! !

Look well, the heroine is already a dying person in the real world, but she travels through time to become the daughter of a small official. Encountering demons again and killing everyone, the heroine almost lost her temper. After being rescued by the male protagonist who is cultivating immortality, the female protagonist decides to hug him. The male and female protagonists are so beautiful and handsome. The man is talented and the woman is beautiful, the woman chases the man, there is a veil between them, the heroine teases her, and the hero falls. I fell in love with the heroine, and it made people feel itchy to watch her. [Exploration][exploration][exploration][exploration]

It's very good-looking, the female protagonist is beautiful and hard-working, and the male protagonist is strong and doting. ! Occasionally, I would be sprinkled with sweet dog food and force-fed sweets. . .

It is a super interesting novel about cultivating immortals. The plot is ups and downs and exciting. The identity of the heroine is really reversed again and again. At first, I thought she was the goddess Yingxi, but it turned out that she was the master of the goddess Yingxi. Later, I thought she was just an ordinary fairy in the upper world. It turned out that she was the child of the Emperor of Heaven and the Queen Mother, a little princess in the heaven. There was no abuse in the whole process, even afterward. The heroine blew herself up and perished with the Demon Lord, but was later rescued and had a baby with the hero. Other CPs in the novel are also very interesting, such as the senior brothers Chu Chen and Lin Baoer, the goddess Yingxi and Ming Zhonglou, the prince Xuan Xiao and the goddess Yueyao, the prince Chi Feng and the fairy Yan Meng. They are really worth reading [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Really huge and beautiful! ! ! Very good, well laid out! The characters are also very distinct The author would like to give you more support, I can't get enough of it, I simply can't get enough of it! ! !

It's a very good and heart-warming story. The hero and heroine have always firmly trusted and loved each other. There are no miscellaneous love-hate entanglements or misunderstandings. The length is just right and it's not boring and long. It's worth reading~

It's nice to watch, and the progress is pretty fast. I like this feeling, but I don't want the goddess Yueyao and the heroine to face each other later, and I don't like the plot of female competition for men.

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