She Returned from Her Undercover Mission, but I Had Already Become a Demon of Obsession

This book is quite nice! ! It was a little bit cruel, but luckily we got together happily in the end. It's also a good subject. [Love] I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to the next work

After reading another work of the author and then looking at this one, the overall impression is actually quite good. The rhythm is well controlled and the characters are quite distinct, but some of the plot design in the early stages is a bit deliberate and makes people crazy to watch. From the middle to later stages, it became much smoother, the plot became more and more stable, and the emotional lines were very real and delicate. Of course, there are still some common sense bugs in the process, such as what is the operation of "using egg test tubes"? There were also two girls who gave birth and prepared supplies for boys, which was really a bit of a drama. But it doesn't affect reading, after all, the overall rhythm and story arrangement are quite gripping. I think what's more exaggerated is Xiao Xi's part - he fakes his death too many times, and the plot of being tortured is a bit too heavy, and it feels a bit like "abuse for the sake of abuse". But fortunately, it's not enough to persuade me to quit, but I just feel like "this is too miserable." Overall, it's acceptable. The writing is good and the plot is smooth. It's at least something you can watch and even want to follow to the end. Then I really want to praise the author's way of writing the "intimate plot". It is not the kind of marginal content written just to attract attention, but the true feelings are revealed, and it is a natural extension of emotions. This is really rare. When you see such works on Tomato, you will feel like your eyes are brightening. The kind of strong love she writes is both delicate and sincere, neither exaggerated nor greasy, and you can completely feel the deep affection between the characters. Especially the part where my aunt and my sister-in-law reunited, it touched me so much, it made my nose sore even more than the main plot. The author's writing style is really reassuring. The sentences are smooth, the emotions flow naturally, and even everyday scenes can be written with a sense of pictures. It's just that sometimes there are too many details - for example, a table of dishes suddenly starts to be described very seriously, or a mahjong game is very detailed, or three passers-by who have never appeared at a table suddenly appear in the bar, and each one is very vividly described... It feels a bit like "Hey, what is this part about?" Maybe it's because the author is so good at writing details that he can't stop writing once he starts. In fact, it doesn't affect the overall look and feel, it's just a little bit off-topic occasionally. Overall, this is a really smooth and comfortable novel. The plot is ups and downs and the emotions are sincere. Although there are some minor flaws, they do not affect the overall experience at all. Compared with the author's other works, this one is not inferior at all. She is really good at writing about abuse, which makes people feel sad and reluctant to let go, and she can always put a little tenderness into the abuse. It's really not easy to find an author on Tomato who can write emotionally without going overboard, and whose writing style is so stable. Hope to see more of her works in the future! Keep up the good work, I will definitely chase you [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

First of all, I would like to give the author a thumbs up for his extremely detailed emotional description and sense of empathy. It is very fascinating. The emotional description has a strong sense of empathy, it comes naturally, is delicate and natural. People can easily feel the warmth of the text, and the other supporting characters are also vivid. But there are still many shortcomings, as well as plot bugs. There is often a feeling of torture for the sake of torture. Although it is tear-jerking, it would be very strange if it is too much. Moreover, I don't agree with solving emotional problems. Every time I encounter a problem, An hides it. She first says sorry, then fakes her death for some reason, and talks about being heartbroken. In terms of the portrayal of the heroine, she is indeed very strong as written, but it gives me the feeling that she lives for An. She changes her personality, career and hobbies for An, constantly accommodates herself and then gets hurt. An just keeps pretending to die, and keeps being injured and goes to the ICU to get the tears of readers. There is also a pair of CPs who are An's sisters. This is actually quite controversial when written. Those who can accept it feel that it is love and are very moved, but those who cannot accept it are very strange when written.

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It is a very well written book. The feelings of the two female protagonists about their family and country are heart-warming, but they have suffered a lot in the road of love. The author has controlled the ups and downs of the plot very well, especially in terms of psychological activities, which makes me wonder if you, the author, have also experienced love [laughing]. Thank you very much for your good writing, and I recommend it to everyone!

The content of this book is well paced and does not drag out. Although the sad parts make me feel depressed, it also lays the groundwork for the rest of the book. The written expression fits the character's position and psychology, and is both soft and decisive. It's a pity that there are too few stories between An Jingxia and Li Lingyu. After all, as a reader, I am also looking forward to seeing their step by step. The four stars are given to encourage the author to continue creating, and hope to create more anticipated works. Come on! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

It's pretty, pretty funny. This is one of the best novels with two heroines that I have ever read. It is very funny and beautiful. There is no wife-chasing crematorium and no knife, and it is very sweet! It's so fun to watch! ! !

Nice! ! ! This is the second book I have read by the author. I am a very impatient person. I followed both books when they were serialized. They are worth reading [Learned][Learned]

I listened to your novel in my last class and it made me cry so hard that I was embarrassed to wipe my tears. . . Why do you always make them work so hard! ! ! ! The poor two heroines love each other to the death. Several pairs of cp pairs are also easy to compare [top post][top post][top post]

It looks good. I like this kind of subject very much. Can you please not be too cruel? I want to see a sweet love [Adoration]