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It's pretty good, but it would be better if the author used less bad jokes. Some of the bad jokes would really make people laugh.

Very good, the current plot is not bad. The protagonist admits his identity as a monster while retaining some humanity. This slightly contradictory setting is very good! I just hope that I won't pull my hips in the future. The protagonist is no longer a human, but a vampire. Then don't help humans or be a coward for humans. You must maintain your identity outside of human beings.

The author uses cold brushstrokes to weave the elegance and violence of the vampires, and the struggle and awakening of human beings into a dense web. It is not only a hearty feast for the senses, but also a prism that reflects reality. Recommended for lovers of heavy literature who love dark fantasy and pursue the coexistence of narrative tension and depth of thought [smile]

Biandan (the heroine) + Bianbai (the heroine's two dependents: Lin Qian vs. Shangguan Xue, ps: Shangguan Xue was forced to change into a female protagonist), a group portrait, a masterpiece, excellent writing, top-notch writing in the tomato transformation novel, and the description of the female body is in place (the description of the Gothic Lolita style is full), and the description of the female degradation is zero. The world view adopts the invasion of the inner world and the outer world, and the world in the book is the first week, and the outer world is the second week. The setting is very good, the battle scenes are full of descriptions, and the heroine is invincible throughout the whole process. The background is based on the Western sword and magic world view. To put it bluntly, the heroine's bloodline is already very powerful, and then she continues to improve her strength through certain media, and finally becomes a god, or even a super god. It is currently discontinued, but if nothing unexpected happens, the heroine will eventually save the world and create a new world or even new laws of the universe. A book worth collecting.

It looks good, but it's a bit sparse, and the content can easily make Shen He stressed and use his invisible big hands to eliminate him [crying] By the way, has it been restricted now?

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That's right, buddy, you were born to do this, how about writing novels for the rest of your life? Erne should!

The beginning is very good, it almost has the feeling of the vampire lolita + contained object that I want to watch most, but the plot starts to speed up in the middle and late stages, and many characters suddenly unfold without being able to stand up, like an American drama that is about to be cut in half. . .

It looks pretty good so far

Faster! ! ! @, I want to watch the education and training [Bookshelf plus one][Please update]

The little lolita is pretty much the same as the introduction. She is decisive in killing and never sloppy. If she dares to use the disgusting social skills of humans, she will be slapped in the face (well, I really like this kind of thing, but I always feel that I am a psychological bt [face covering]). She is also said to be a slow-burner, but why do I feel that the pace is so fast?

Beautiful, but few people

He is a Lezi man, he can be saved😭 She's the queen of the blood race😦, oh~ she's a loli😋, and she's also a top-grade silver-haired red-eyed girl who's so good👋😭👋 Was my comment eaten? 😯 Damn deep river! 😡

A very good book. The protagonist is a little vampire loli [Adoration]. It's very good to read.

Hao Kan [laughing evilly] This is the first time I have read a novel about the Abnormal Control Investigation Bureau

It's a very good book. I think the heroine's character and pacing are the biggest strengths of this book. It's more than 90% better than Tomato's transformation stories. The plot is easy to understand and logical. It's a great book. Of course, if the author wants to write better, more foreshadowing will make the whole story better.

Super pretty! The plot is not bad either. I hope it will be updated soon [crying]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The protagonist should be closer to humans, but not completely on the side of humans. I won't comment on the others. Let's take a look.

Is the subsequent plot the same as Koro-sensei?

I know that lovesickness is confusing my mind, but lovesickness has entered my soul. Even if there are three thousand illnesses in life, only lovesickness cannot be cured. I raise my head and look at the moon without saying a word. The four of us are not aware of each other at dusk. We are separated from each other by the same wind and rain. I look at you in the bright moon. The wind and moon enter my lovesickness. It is truly a promise of lovesickness. In the spring, I enjoy the flowers and watch the snow in the winter. When I wake up, I miss you in my dreams. It seems inappropriate to leave it alone [laughing evilly] I don't know when we will meet again. Let's have wine and talk about the West and the East. May you always remember your journey home and look back as a young man. Life has gone through many changes in spring and autumn, and only poems and books can relieve my sorrow. When I pick up my pen, I feel that my words are shallow. This heart follows the moon and illuminates thousands of peaks. If Shu is killed by Shen He alone...

It seems okay so far, but I would like to remind the author that some bad jokes are not suitable for more play.

All in all, all in all, it looks great, and then, it is really invincible. Although it doesn't look like it from the front, it actually has no impact at all, so don't worry about it.

Except that the cure is invisible, everything else is fine. In one sentence, it looks good [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Very well written

Very well written, keep it up The protagonists are clearly Lin Qian and Shangguan Xue, and Mu Bai is just a supporting role. The protagonist doesn't have as many appearances as the two supporting characters, and the writing gets worse and worse. Tang

I like the protagonist's mental state

So far it's pretty good🤓👍

Hehe, it looks good, but it's just not enough.

Don't stop updating, the writing is good (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on