One Piece: A Magic Fruit? No, an Angel!

It's okay, but I don't really like reading fan fiction with a single heroine, so I'll skip it now, and I'll see you later.

It's good on the whole👍, but there are some modifications👌 on the details, which can also be called deletions. The pace is fast, but it's not a very fast story. The protagonist is a magician who has traveled through time with HP, but I don't understand where the seraph is from. It feels like there are many prototypes. The protagonist has the fun of growing a straw hat team, which is also a classic ship-following style. Personal rating A- This is a quick novel, so there are few emotional descriptions, no description of the environment, and no detailed descriptions. Regarding worldviews and personal interpretations, the author does not write much personally. People who want to see delicate emotions and expanded interpretations of the worldview will be disappointed. That's all I wanted to say.

How can I put it, magic is good, but angels don't show up... Isn't Kyle better than magic?

It seems to be very good so far. In fact, it may be a bit of a babysitter, but this is the disease of the ship, and then the angel form returns [rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes] Sorry, it's a common problem, but I still can't put it into words. It feels really weird, a bit like a nanny.

I can only say that it's okay as a follower, you can watch it, but it's very difficult to go further.

Okay, it looks pretty good, come on!