In an accident, Chen Hui came to the world of One Piece, obtained the phantom beast phoenix fruit, and received an invitation from Luffy to board the ship. After some thought, he decided to follow Luffy to explore the world. With the unexpected appearance of Chen Hui, how will the story change?
Reader comments
The writing is quite good. If it is written by a new author, this book has surpassed many of the same period and is much better than other fan fiction. Although it has a few flaws, it is overall quite good-looking. The writing is exciting enough, the setting is not outrageous, and the combat power system is not broken.
Very good, but I feel that the strength is a bit too slow. Not to mention the battle on the top to change it. It is difficult to change the interception by the general and the big bear flying in the Shampoo Islands. There is also the scene where Sauron suffered damage after defeating Moria.
There are no poisonous points, it looks pretty good, and it has great potential. I just wanted to ask if there is a female lead? If there is a female protagonist, I hope it will be a single female protagonist.
Come on, it looks pretty
Come on, come on, come on
Come on author, it's getting better and better
It's a little different. It feels different from the original work.
It looks okay. I'll take a look and change it to five stars when you continue.
Self-created plot, I love it, I hope you can stick to it
Very nice\(//∇//)\I hope the author will be faster and add more chapters every day
Very beautiful, very novel, no system
Good-looking, very attractive, not bad, not bad
I think it looks great, why haven't I rated it yet?
The writing is quite good. If it is written by a new author, this book has surpassed many of the same period and is much better than other fan fiction. Although it has a few flaws, it is overall quite good-looking. The writing is exciting enough, the setting is not outrageous, and the combat power system is not broken.
Very good, but I feel that the strength is a bit too slow. Not to mention the battle on the top to change it. It is difficult to change the interception by the general and the big bear flying in the Shampoo Islands. There is also the scene where Sauron suffered damage after defeating Moria.
There are no poisonous points, it looks pretty good, and it has great potential. I just wanted to ask if there is a female lead? If there is a female protagonist, I hope it will be a single female protagonist.
Come on, it looks pretty
Come on, come on, come on
Come on author, it's getting better and better
It's a little different. It feels different from the original work.
It looks okay. I'll take a look and change it to five stars when you continue.
Self-created plot, I love it, I hope you can stick to it
Very nice\(//∇//)\I hope the author will be faster and add more chapters every day
Very beautiful, very novel, no system
Good-looking, very attractive, not bad, not bad
I think it looks great, why haven't I rated it yet?