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The writing is very good and very real, with a feeling that it really happened. It is even suspected to be the author's personal experience, as if the author is recalling the past. The writing style gives me a fresh and beautiful feeling, I like it very much. But I feel that the progression of emotions is a bit slow and there is a lot of nonsense. It may be that the author wants to make the characters more three-dimensional, but I feel it has the opposite effect. It may also be because of the secret love that the progression of emotions is a bit slow. To be honest, I was attracted to it by falling in love in the army, so I wanted to watch the process of falling in love, but the process was a bit slow, and it mainly wrote about life in the army. Then let me tell you what I think about Ben. It feels like "my" love is budding, but if it drifts away, I actually don't understand it. Can't I ask him? It doesn't seem to be clear in the article that "I" want to break up with him. It may be in the first person. The sense of substitution is stronger, and it may be that he has a similar experience. This makes me feel very, very regretful. I feel that we obviously like each other, but they left because of some unknown reasons. I hope the author can elaborate on the reasons. In fact, I am very curious. I have only read half of this book, which is about the same. Here are some suggestions for the author. For one page, about 2,000 words is enough, not four or five thousand words. In this case, you can add a few more chapters, because some people like to skip reading and want to read that part quickly. , When skipping to read, the main thing is to look at the chapter title of each chapter. If it is more attractive, click in and read. If it is not attractive, you may just abandon the book. If there are more chapters, it will feel more detailed and you can know in more detail what each part is talking about. (The above only represents my personal opinion. If something is wrong, you can point it out) [Love] [Love] [Love]

Very good, good writing skills