After Rebirth, Lord Feng Master Became the Favorite of the Ghost King

The characters are portrayed very well, and they are not OOC at all. It really reminded me of a sentence, the breeze blows, the stagnant water leaves traces, this time the double mystery is no longer unexplainable and the author is blown away!

This fanfic is very good. It makes up for the regret. The two mysteries are solved! ! I like this book very much. I personally feel that it is slightly OOC, but it doesn't affect it. The writing is amazing and the plot is very coherent.

It's so good, so sweet, I love it so much, the plot is great, the characters are perfect, no OOC, and I love the wallpaper. I quickly added a comment and became a fan in half a month, which is enough to show my love for this book [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Falling in love with Shuangxuan, eating Shuangxuan to death, being tortured to death is my fate Sister Shuangxuan's real-name certification, this food is really delicious! ! Serialization, my lifelong enemy... You can tell how good it is by looking at how long it takes me to read it. It's time for the author Rouse to let go of food, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, don't starve us to death [sending my heart] [licking the screen]

It's super beautiful. While retaining most of the characters' personalities, the author added some aspects to them that we may not usually see in the original books, but this will make us feel that the characters are more real and vivid. And the narrative is very logical, there are little foreshadowings in many places, hahaha, and the ending is also very happy!

So pretty! Extremely sweet. I suggest you all come and take a look, I won't kill you with a knife. Ah, you are so sweet. [Good laugh]

This is the third book by the author that I have read. They are both Shuangxuan. The author is a famous cook in our village. The food he cooks is always delicious and sweet! You'll know just by looking at the ratings Ahem, this book basically doesn't have a lot of OOC. It can be said that there is only a little bit. Anyway, at least I didn't see much of it. The emotional portrayal is also very sweet, I love it very much. I feel that there is always a bit of sharpness in the words in the whole book, but it is harmless, and there is nothing wrong with it. On the contrary, it will make people feel sour and sweet, and make people feel swollen in the heart. The author's writing style is also good, the transitions are natural, and it is quite humorous and funny. It is really funny to accompany the comments. This National Day, I read two Shuangxuan books by the author in a row. All three of them have my long book reviews. Also, those two books are super good-looking too! I then read this book non-stop, it was my spiritual food. Author I love you. [Laughs] "The world is in turmoil, and the two mysteries will grow old hand in hand."

The teacher's writing style is really good. It's sweet. It's obvious that I'm about to feel sad, but there's always candy to sweep away the thought. It's really the best double mystery I've ever seen. OOC doesn't feel it. It's so small that it can be ignored. It's the kind that can cause withdrawal reactions after reading it. I have hope for my daily life. Come on, teacher, we will always support you! ! !

Very interesting, this is the first book about Shuangxuan that I have read. It makes up for some regrets in my heart and some regrets in the novel. The extreme tension between them is quite easy to fight.

[Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] It's really great. This is the kind of book I like to read as a person who likes to engage in double mysteries. I felt so happy reading it! ! ! You are so good at writing! ! ! [Love][love][love]

Shuangxuan is so cute, and the author writes it so sweetly (although there are some places where it's a bit harsh)

Oh my god, the treasures who like to watch Shuangxuan are saved! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The author's writing is really great! ! ! (Except for being a little bit OOC... But still acceptable)

It's pretty good-looking👍I think even though it's a bit ooc inside (it's just very small), it still looks good [laughing][laughing], I feel so happy when I see it [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It was the first time I saw Shuang Xuan on Tomato. The open ending in the original text felt empty, but it was made up for here. Overall it's good, the plot is on point (a part was deleted but it doesn't hurt), it feels a bit OOC, but it's still a good watch.

I really like this book. There is almost no OOC. The sweet [shy] words at the back recommend it! ! And I obviously find that the author's writing is getting better and better ~ I will always follow [blowing kiss]

Wow, I finished reading it, the teacher wrote so well! The relationship between Shuang Xuan is super well written (I don't have a good vocabulary, but it's really beautiful). I highly recommend it. Wish Shuangxuan 99 again (Quan Yinye 99)

It's very beautiful. When I watched Shuangxuan, I made up for the regret. And it's more consistent with the original work. Love the author 😘

It's so beautiful. The author is my god. Just when I wanted to feel sad, the kiss that followed made me laugh again, so much that I couldn't hold my lips back. Really good very good. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Love rises with the wind, but it is difficult to calm down when the wind stops Very beautiful, really! On the scale of love, on one side stood his brother, and on the other side stood his best friend, who was also... His enemy. But the scale would rather break than tilt.

Woohoo, finally there is a Shuangxuan that you can eat. The other Ma Ye Dao is dead, but this one is better. The writing is good, the language is vivid and interesting, and it is not OOC. At first glance, it seems that it has used brains and time.

The teacher's writing is very good, and it fills in the regrets and difficulties of Shuangxuan in the original work. I like it very much.

It's beautiful to watch and easy to cry. There is a sea of ​​hatred between the two of them that cannot be overcome [crying]

Teacher, teacher, I declare to you! ! I just came to Tomato and saw such delicious food. I have no regrets. I look forward to more works from the teacher. I will always follow you! ! ! No, it's too delicious

It directly makes up for my regret that the two mysteries were not together in the original work. The teacher's writing style is also very good. The CP in the pen (Xue Feng is also sweet). Super Invincible Big Mac is sweet, but not super recommended! ! !

It's very interesting, but it's wrong for the author to make people's appetites so much. I suggest you correct it if you realize the mistake. Ten chapters a day.

I like it, I like it, it's super good-looking, the first Shuangxuan fanfic I've read is at the White Moonlight level. After reading it, I couldn't help but read it again. [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] I will always follow it

It's quite nice. It makes up for my regrets about Shuangxuan.

It's very, very beautiful. I like it very much. It's just that it hasn't been updated yet, but it feels good to look forward to it every day.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ah they they they look and they are so beautiful and it is so beautiful. It almost kills me. Big boost to the author!

It's super nice. This is simply the best double-mystery fanfic I've ever read. It's not too OOC. The author writes it very well. Can you add some extras? [Love]