Pokémon: Milton Becomes the Dragon Master in the Beginning

There is no big problem at the moment. The only big problem is that after researching the results of super evolution, I was only given 100,000 yuan, and even the people's livelihood nomination results were nothing. And 100,000 yuan is not a lot of money. According to this economic system, one Yusanjia Elf Egg costs 500,000 yuan. 100,000 Yuan is too little.

It's pretty good, but there are still a lot of problems. When I was writing it, I saw that the prices in chapter 280 were outrageous, the time between 250 and 280 was too long, and the protagonist did things in the same way around the world without being suspected. These were all okay. But I think the biggest problem is the creation of Pokémon, but basically the problem lies with the protagonist. The 10 Pokémon on him (it seems there are more) are obviously difficult to write, and some only appear once in a long time. However, the problem is still with Milton. As the title and the biggest feature that attracts me, the early stage is okay (although I feel that the transformation of Milton at the beginning It's not well written or I missed it, and I followed the protagonist all of a sudden). He rarely appears in the middle and late stages. He only talks about being here or eating, and doesn't say a few words. The writing is not much different from the treatment of ordinary Pokémon, and his importance is not played. I haven't read the rest yet, I hope the author can write it, but the author still worked hard (＾ω＾)💪🏻 To me, when I woke up every day, I would turn on my mobile phone to watch it. Although I couldn't accept this ending, life is full of regrets...

Will the protagonist conquer the ancient species later? Especially those three [what]

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Great book except for the combat. When fighting, either high-level crushing, or stances of the same level trading damage to each other to see who falls first. It's very difficult. It's like writing about the turn-based damage exchange in the Pokémon game. There is no such operation as quickly dodging in the anime.

This book is in line with my taste. It is well written. I stayed up all night to read it and just finished it now. But I still hope that the speed of Milton's recovery of strength can be accelerated. He has been a mascot for more than 300 chapters.

I'm more concerned about whether there will be a female protagonist? It's enough to have Pokémon in elf novels, I don't want to read the emotional line [Thinking]

I've read so many Pokémon fanfics, and this is the first time I've seen an article that arranges the plot for Hakiguo [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

It's nice to read, the subject matter is novel, and the writing is interesting

The writing is quite good, but from time to time there is a compositional style that sounds weird to me as a book reader [laughs evilly]

This book is considered to be a dragon-type specialization. At least all the Pokémon in the front mountain have dragons. It is more everyday. I am not sure whether it will change in the future. It feels good now.

Very good, I feel good

It's very interesting. Come on, author.

I can't think of anything to say, it's so pretty

The overall plot is pretty good, but the author's writing feels like a diary rather than a novel.

Personally, I think it looks very good. Well, of course it's just my personal opinion.

I feel like there's nothing unacceptable so far, it looks great!

The writing is very good, I think it would be better if there were chapter names.

It still feels pretty good [face covering]

Ok ok ok

Come on, come on, come on

Well written, very detailed

Very nice, very smooth to watch

It's good but not bad, please support it with five stars

Zhuzi plot, my favorite in the future😍, it's a pity that I don't have Sister Fa

Personally, I think the title of the book could be changed [face covering]

Very pretty. It's Chapter 167 and 168. Why don't you read the book? Prefer to listen

Very, very, very, very beautiful.

[Smile] Can you give me some?

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch