Conanhello, Cleaning Up

Nice! The characters and story are great! Very touching! It's just that the interaction with Bourbon always feels a bit low-key, and I always find Bourbon annoying and annoying when watching it (personally, I'm neither a cook nor a hacker, so I'll read whatever I want), but the story is still great! Come on!

It has a very delicate plot structure. I originally just wanted to listen to it casually, but according to the quality of Tomato, it is rare to find a more delicate plot. Although the protagonist's behavioral motivations are relatively riddles, they are very delicate. Each original character is created in a very three-dimensional image.

I like Barolo, the irritable and defensive crazy girl (in the main story, she is a real wine rebel, but not in the extras), but she has too few scenes. It feels like there is a redemptive friendship with Omori's girls help girls, but the author did not expand on it. By the way, in Barolo right now, the protagonist really seems like a worried old father hhhhh

Overall, it's okay, the writing is basically OK, and the plot arrangement doesn't completely follow the original work but has its own content. However, it feels a bit OOC to be overly entangled with Akai Shuichi about White's identity (especially the protagonist seems to mainly do system tasks, and the tasks at the winery are not particularly focused on). I feel that Akai Shuichi is the kind of person who will help after roughly deducing the protagonist's identity and mission. The ending is too rushed! The extra episode is a way to make up for the 25% hole in the collapse of the world! And since killing important people can end the world's weak period as soon as possible, why doesn't anyone from White directly come out to organize all White people and directly kill the winery? Everyone is working on their own and only doing tasks that treat the symptoms but not the root cause. In particular, White seems to have a lot of personnel, and they are very capable with the support of the system. Wouldn't it be easy for Barro to kill Natalie? (Although it didn't kill, it was just a manual accident after all, and it didn't use all its strength) After reading it, I feel that White is not a third party. What makes the world weak is the duel between red and black, which means that White must choose a side to eradicate the invaders and the world is weak. It makes no sense to just do cleaning tasks without choosing to stand in line. One day there will be more and more intruders, and system personnel will become more and more exhausted and have no time to kill the intruders. The collapse will only get bigger and bigger, and eventually the world will actively devour all people with energy in order to save itself. Although in the end, Bourbon was cleared of being an undercover agent because of the protagonist's defection, the protagonist still only continued to perform the cleaning mission. So if the time is longer, it will feel like what I mentioned above, and the ending of the world will still be destroyed. In the end, the author's writing is pretty good, and his ideas are actually quite interesting! Kua Kua(◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*! It's pretty good that I can keep writing so much, and my writing style is actually pretty good.

The beginning was rather slow and ink-laden, but by about 20 chapters later, it progressed quickly, and there was nothing particularly OOC about it. Unfortunately, it felt like there were a lot of holes left unfilled, but it didn't affect the viewing experience. The plots of getting along with people with high IQs such as Conan Amuro and Akai also have a high-IQ atmosphere. Solving problems relies on the hero's own brain, not gold fingers, which is relatively rare. There is a little intersection with each character, but not much, which is a pity (actually, it ended too soon, and I haven't seen enough. It could have been written about the organization's collapse, but it wasn't) However, there is something wrong with the author in the third dimension, and there is nothing we can do about it. Five stars will wait for a follow-up episode.

In fact, it's okay, but most of the content of the article does not match the introduction. You can fall into the trap, but the number of authors is a bit small.

Such a beautiful book is not available! ! ! Such a beautiful book is not available! ! ! Great author, I will follow you! ! !

In fact, I feel it is 4 stars, but I am shameless enough to give it 5 stars. Thank you all for your support, I didn't expect to get a score, thank you all, love you✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺ For questions about some settings, you can go to the comment area of the last chapter. Everyone's questions are answered there. (Contains spoilers, please note)

It's okay. The front is okay, but the back always feels weird, but it's still okay to watch [Sending my heart]

Again. . . Eat more. . . Eh? No more? [Smile][smile][almost crying][cry][cry][cry]

It's beautiful and the setting is very good [sending my heart]

It's good, but I really want to know if the five-person group has cp🙁 (if there is, it's not that I can't accept it)

I particularly like the settings in this book and the writing is very good [sending my heart]

A novel angle, it feels pretty good

I finished reading it in one go and it was very enjoyable😋😋😋 Thank you for the hospitality, boss, great setting👍👍

After watching it, it's quite exciting

Treasure book, very beautiful, packaged

Wonderful, wonderful, so good, it makes me spin

The writing is actually very good, don't be misled by the title and introduction.

The protagonist has a strong sense of being alive. In White's mission and Black's mission, he can fish if he can. When pressed, even Gin dared to fight, more than once, although he was taught a lesson more than once. Hhh

Nice! Nice! Xinping's character is exactly what I like, but the ending felt a bit rushed.

Well written, very attractive fanfic.

It's a very good fanfic, I like the scene where the protagonist fights with the dark organization.

The setting is arresting, the plot is explosive, and every turning point is surprising!

The plot and setting are very interesting. If you don't understand White's setting and don't mind spoilers, you can go to the comment area of ​​the last chapter and the author will explain it.

What a wonderful plot, with twists and turns, delicate and non-bloody emotions, I stayed up all night to follow it! !

The plot lines are intertwined, the emotions are heart-breaking, and it is very exciting.

Nice. The characters, plot, and details are all well described.

Author! Big! ! ! Why so little? I was in the middle of a brainstorming session and all of a sudden it was gone. I'm so heartbroken. I hope you can write more in your next book, please.